Jeremiah Hamilton

165 Faulkner Cir.

Greer, SC. 29651

October 17, 2017

Mr. Ken Morril

Next High School

Wade Hampton Blvd.

Greenville, SC.

Dear Mr. Ken

I'm a 10th grader this year at Next high school this year. I like to listen to music

and dance sometimes. I like skinny jeans and jordans mostly what I wear everyday. I'm Commented [1]: Capitalize all proper nouns.

a very friendly person sometimes. I play basketball and football not so much but i'm a

fast runner.

My friend Isaiah told me about it and it sounded fun so I tried it out. I hope to Commented [2]: Told you about what?

make it fun and get the work done that needs to be done. I have went to school and Commented [3]: Have gone

pasted my previous grades to get where I am now. I hope to make the best out of it. Commented [4]: Passed

And I also hope I can impress them enough. Commented [5]: Who are you trying to impress?
 I would like to ask if I could become a graduate because in order for me to get Commented [6]: Graduate of what and what qualifies
you for this?
into the college i want to get it I have to have a good short story written that's about me. Commented [7]: Capitalize all proper nouns.

It would be explaining how i'm a good worker and I am responsible enough for the Commented [8]: Capitalize all proper nouns.

school. I want them to think of me as a hard working student so I can get what i need Commented [9]: Who is "them"?
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and graduate.

Im glad that I have had the opportunity to write this and try my best to get into the Commented [11]: Don't forget this is "I'm".

school I want to get into. It seems really fun and different from everything else. It kinda Commented [12]: "Kinda" is not proper grammar.

make you seem ready for life because of how different it is.