Emily Heredia

English 5M
September 14, 2017
Revision Summary

Once I got my first draft back from Isela and Jasueth, I noticed I had not only one or two
comments, but several. I very much appreciate feedback from whoever it may be. I always try
and write the perfect paper, although that paper doesnt exist. As I started to read through the
comments, I noticed I forgot small things. Such as, page numbers from where the certain quote
came from or capitalizing the I. I also noticed that I didnt go into very much detail about why
I liked having a strict sophomore year English teacher. Once I read through every one of the
comments, I went back and added on and included what was missing. I made the paper into what
they wanted me to include, which I also thought were great ideas.