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From:
Bruce
Fernandez
Subject:
A
Study
of
the
Detection
of
Gravitational
Waves
I
dont
really
know
much
about
physics
and
writing
in
the
subject,
though
I
hope
this
peer
review
helps.
Summary
This
review
examines
gravitational
waves,
and
sources
that
we
have
been
able
to
observe
that
show
us
gravitational
waves.
We
also
learn
about
how
these
gravitational
waves
are
measured
and
how
they
might
be
measured
in
the
future,
and
some
of
the
limitations
these
techniques
currently
present
and
some
possible
problems
in
the
future.
Major
points
I
would
suggest
the
author
revise
the
introduction
to
make
it
clearer
as
to
what
the
purpose
of
this
paper
is.
Also
I
would
give
a
little
more
detail
as
to
what
gravitational
waves
are
so
we
can
better
understand
the
detection
methods.
I
am
getting
the
sense
according
to
the
title
that
the
focus
of
this
paper
is
more
on
techniques
to
measure
these
waves,
so
I
would
suggest
splitting
up
the
methods
section
into
what
interferometers
are,
how
they
relate
to
gravitational
waves,
possibly
why
this
technique
was
able
to
detect
gravitational
waves
as
opposed
to
other
techniques,
and
its
shortcomings.
For
the
future
developments
is
there
any
studies
you
can
show
that
show
us
why
the
Laser
interferometer
space
antenna
would
be
more
effective
in
detecting
the
gravitational
waves.
I
would
also
suggest
adding
a
section
about
the
significance
of
gravitational
waves
and
why
it
is
worth
investing
time
and
effort
into
it.
Also
this
paper
feels
more
like
a
history
than
a
review,
maybe
you
need
to
look
at
the
techniques
and
either
be
critical
or
more
supportive
of
the
techniques
used
and
try
and
argue
the
evidence
you
find.
Minor
points
Pictures
might
be
helpful
to
better
understand
some
of
the
points
being
made,
and
not
sure
if
annotated
bib
is
necessary.