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Social Critique Rough Draft
Social Critique Rough Draft
It was a sunny day(LIGHT1) as I walked into work, aka hell. I honestly just dread work
every single day. Who doesnt? Who actually enjoys their job? I am exhausted and honestly all I
want to do is go back home and sleep.(OBS1) I can hear my bosss voice from around the
corner(SOUND), You people are pathetic around here! I always try to impress her and do my
best so maybe she wont get on me as much and make me do the dirty work.(KISS) Nothing is
As soon as I go to clock in she tells me, I need you to go clean the break room
thinking, Its 7 Oclock in the morning, I dont even use the break room, and why me!
But of course being the good employee I am smiles at my boss and goes and cleans the
break room. I go into the break room and its super dark.(LIGHT2). Im telling you, no
one uses it because its disgusting. Whenever you walk in, all you can smell is sour milk
comes in there and heats up something in the microwave. I had just scrubbed the
microwave clean and guess what he does? He doesnt cover his food. This man is at least
40 years, you know his mother taught him to cover his dish in the microwave. I was
already frustrated with how my morning started so I let him have it. Um, I just cleaned
that microwave because nobody knows how to cover their food and you just came in here
and messed it up again so I think you should clean it up.(RANT). He did not like what I
had to say so he went and told on me. A 40 year old man telling on an 18 year old. What
is this?
I go back up front after Im done cleaning the break room and I get another
thinking.(EYES). She walked over to me and said she heard I got into it with another co
worker in the breakroom and I told her what happened and she said she didnt care and
that I needed to go jump on a register because it was getting busy and the lines were
line and she has a cart full of food. I was so irritated at this point. All I can think about is
break so I punch out and go get a slice of pizza. (OBS3). I got supreme, my
I walk into the store and everyone is going crazy because they wanted to beat the
rain. Lines were backed up and everyone was bumper to bumper with shopping carts.
(SIGHT). My manager gave me the evil eye so I knew what that meant(BL1). I am
ringing up this man whose eyes are so red, I asked him what was wrong and he said it
must be something in the air.(BODY2). The store goes through phases where it is busy
one minute and then dead the next. Thats what this whole day was like and it was so
annoying. This sweet lady came up to me and I asked if I knew where cranberry sauce
was and I told her the wrong aslie, so being the good employee I am goes and finds her
and tells her the right asile(ASTRAY). My boss starts freaking out because I left my
register, so she starts yelling my name over the whole store, Kristin to your register,
Kristin to your register! I go up to the front and apologize for leaving my register and
not telling her. She puts her arm on my shoulder(TOUCH) and tells me its okay just to
tell her next time. Why all of the sudden shes being nice! Its been such a long day at
Its finally 3 Oclock and that means I get to home. My boss stops me on the way
out and ask if I can come in the next day at 12 and work until 6. Considering I had the
day off, I didnt really want too but she almost didnt ask me, she kind of just told me that
I was going too. Just by the way she walked over to me, I knew what she was going to
say. (BL2). I drove home and I take all of work clothes and change into my pajamas just
because I had no plans for the rest of the day. I am absolutely exhausted. Between school,
The next morning, I slept in until 11 and I had to be at work at 12. Like always
my manager is there. Shes being rude to customers, running through the store, bumping
into people.(BL3). I had already had enough, I hate the way she treats people. It was only