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Revised English Poem Essay Final Draft
Revised English Poem Essay Final Draft
Ariana Azoulai
Prof. Batty
8 December 2017
Poems are often disregarded at a first glance as a result of confusion. While question
marks have become associated with poetry, William Wordsworth (a well-known lyrical poet)
does the opposite of whats expected and erases any confusion. His poem I Wandered Lonely as
a Cloud, are one of his more popular pieces which actually focuses on a simpler message. While
some students believe Wordsworths poem to hold an underlying meaning of solitude, I disagree
and believe his poem to be an appreciation of nature. He captures this message through the use
The use of imagery and personification in: I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud is clearly
present throughout each stanza and adds to Wordsworths admiration of nature. Having a clear
image in ones mind sets up a sense of reality, which in turn, allows the reader to feel a
connection to the poem. Imagery is created by Wordsworth when he speaks of the daffodils and
constructs a focal point for the poem: A host, of golden daffodils;/ Beside the lake, beneath the
trees,/ Fluttering and dancing in the breeze (4-6). This use of imagery is what creates a detailed
visual within the readers mind. One can imagine the daffodils being framed by surrounding
nature. Wordsworth also uses personification in this passage by describing the daffodils as
fluttering and dancing. He gives human qualities to an inanimate object which makes the
readers not only picture something in their mind, but feel connected to the object as well.
Personification is a tool that can be seen many times within the poem; breathing life into the
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words and invoking a familiarity of the senses that the reader can join along with: And then my
heart with pleasure fills,/ And dances with the daffodils (23-24). Obviously, a heart cant
dance, but it does cause the reader to form an idea of enjoyment within their mind. Using such
formalist tools like imagery and personification, gives Wordsworths poem an exaggerated
undertone. The main idea-enjoying lifes simple pleasures through nature-is consequentially
given more importance by the use of imagery and personification and fosters the reader to have a
Another tool Wordsworth uses is meter. Meter has a lot to do with the way someone is
affected by a poem and is what allows words to flow seamlessly (or not). In this case, meter is
used to enhance the flow of the poem by using a specific pattern of ...four six-line stanzas of
iambic tetrameter, rhyming ababcc (Steele, "I Wandered Lonely"). By using this form, the
poem is able to transition from one thought into another smoothly. The reader is also
subconsciously obtaining a hypnotic state in response to the meters repetitiveness. This not only
creates an urge to keep reading the poem, but it also shows another facet of simplicity conveyed.
The poems theme of simplicity-found in enjoying nature-is enhanced by the easy rhythm of
meter as well.
Wordsworths applies a historical lens to affect how this poem is read and interpreted.
During Wordsworths life, he was close with another famous poet, Coleridge. His friendship
with Coleridge is what pushed Wordsworth to write lyrical poetry and eventually break barriers.
He began to write about the simple things in life, such as ...ordinary events in the lives of
ordinary people: simple country folk and children mainly, but also social outcasts and misfits.
Not only did this break all the neoclassical rules about the proper subject matter of poetry,
but..Wordsworth also challenged the conventional wisdom regarding poetic diction (Aubrey,
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"William Wordsworth").Writing about simple events at the time was not common, so when
Wordsworth did so, it set a new bar for poets and their poetry. This straightforward approach
allows the reader to connect on a much easier level, since its something they can relate to. To
create relatable work, Wordsworth would often use real life examples. The poet was actually
surrounded by inspiration from a young age, being Born on the borders of the Lake District in
northwest England...Wordsworth loved the Lakeland countryside, where he was free to roam for
inspiration, lets the reader know that the events which influenced his poems, were everyday
experiences. Which means, it could happen to anyone; thus destroying a common barrier that
separates reader from poem. Using everyday experiences allows the reader to feel as if they are
able to tell the story as the narrator and as if they are the ones dancing with the daffodils.
Reading poetry is not an easy thing to do, but given the right context, it can be a pleasant
experience. William Wordsworth proves that reading poetry doesnt have to be an unbearable
simplistic poem that uses formalist tools, such as: imagery, personification, and meter. In
addition, the poem uses historicist tools, such as inspiration from real events. Poets like William
Wordsworth are incredibly important to people all across the world. His work pushes people to
take notice of the smaller things in life, whether that be experiences, people, or (in this case)
nature. Recognizing the simpler things in life, and appreciating them, is what allows people to
lead fulfilled lives. If poets like William Wordsworth didnt exist, everyone would constantly be
filled with an insatiable need to have more things, versus, appreciating the life that surrounds
them.
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Works Cited
EBSCOhost,
library.lavc.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=ers&
AN=88807542&site=eds-live.
Steele, Thomas J. "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud by William Wordsworth." Salem Press
library.lavc.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=ers&
AN=119624283&site=eds-live.
www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/45521/i-wandered-lonely-as-a-cloud.