Creative Writing-Ontal

WEDDING DANCE

1. Wedding Dance left the readers hanging at the end of the story
2. If the setting of the story is set in todays generation and what do
you think happened to the main characters of the story at the
falling action and resolution?

In a distance there she is, watching her husband marrying another girl.
Lumnays heart is falling into pieces. Watching the love of her life
marry someone else just because she cannot bear a child .Tears fall
into her eyes blurring her vision. Too much ache to her heart like she
was stabbed repeatedly .Seeing her husband with another woman
.Happy made her happy also because deep in her heart what makes
him happy also makes her Lumnay happy. She was very selfless to her
husband. She took a deep breath, wiped her tears in her eyes and
made her way out to that celebration.
Hours, days, weeks, months and years after that happened.Lumnay
picked up her broken pieces and got her act back. No more tears, no
more pain, no more heartache, no more! Enough! I cant be miserable
for the rest of my life because of love. Because I still love him. He will
have a space in her heart but I am setting him free. She will do herself
a favor and move on and on and on. I am a strong independent woman
and I dont need a man to validate my happiness. After all I still have
my parents. I will lend my love to them instead. This life is too short to
always love sick. I am gorgeous and someday somewhat I think that
chivalry is not yet dead. Second hope? Second chances? We shouldnt
be bitter about it. Love is anywhere doesnt lose hope. If the setting of
the story is set in todays generation the main characters in the falling
action and resolution they still are marrying each other they will live
their hometown that is full of rules. They will go to the city and will
start a new life. Because they cant bear a child they will adapt a child
and they will accept it as their own. And there will be child who will
inherit the house and the fields.
3. Write a short scene about the ending of the story that is set on
todays time?
Third person POV
After all Lumnay accepted the offer of Awiyao the house the fields and
the beads its all for Lumnay. After Awiyao left Lumnay is full of
thinking. She thinks that why should be sad while her ex-husband is
having fun in her own wedding ceremony. After making many decision,
she decided to go to the wedding ceremony to show her full support to
the couple and also to show to her ex-husband that she is happy for
him. And also she thinks that some guys would be attracted or be in
loved to her. After Awiyoas wedding ceremony Lumnay went home to
the house that Awiyao gave her. After a day Lumnay didnt expect that
a handsome tall and masculine guy would visit her in her house.
Lumnay welcomed him whole heartedly. They talk and talk, knowing
each other more and more. Every day the guy visited Lumnay. He is
courting Lumnay. After a month of courting Lumnay now committed to
his husband named Lam-ang.They decided to marry each other. They
married at New York. After their honeymoon in Paris Lumnay field a bit
weird and she feels not good at all. Her husbSand accompanied
Lumnay to the hospital. And they found out that Lumnay is pregnant
and they were very happy. On the other hand Awiyao and Madulimay
are staying strong and happy because they have a child and
Madulimay is still pregnant for their second child. The four of them
lived happily ever after.

Submitted by
Sonny Atiwen
Jefferson cayapat
Rexor Lopic
Zoren Pit-og
Carmina Pangsiw
Jelyn Soliven
Genevieve Songduan