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    The document provides feedback on a pitch, noting positives such as it being an entertaining short story with developed storylines and characters who have powers from experiments. Negatives include that it shouldn't mock Donald Trump too much, and that it needs more complication/consequence and is too similar to the movie Avatar.

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    The document provides feedback on a pitch, noting positives such as it being an entertaining short story with developed storylines and characters who have powers from experiments. Negatives include that it shouldn't mock Donald Trump too much, and that it needs more complication/consequence and is too similar to the movie Avatar.

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    87 views1 page

    Pitch Feedback

    Uploaded by

    api-376325486
    The document provides feedback on a pitch, noting positives such as it being an entertaining short story with developed storylines and characters who have powers from experiments. Negatives include that it shouldn't mock Donald Trump too much, and that it needs more complication/consequence and is too similar to the movie Avatar.

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    By Fabian

    Positives:
    Good short story/entertaining
    Story lines/presented characters
    People have powers from experiments

    Negatives:
    Dont take too much of the micky of Donald Trump
    Complication/consequence
    To close to avatar

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