Work sucks. I found the sense of fighting off sleep convincing and vivid- definitely a strong point. Elaborate more on your motivation-- to 'succeed', to not fail your family, to get by, to fund a hobby, to fund a habit? There's opportunity here. As is the content is not very compelling.
Work sucks. I found the sense of fighting off sleep convincing and vivid- definitely a strong point. Elaborate more on your motivation-- to 'succeed', to not fail your family, to get by, to fund a hobby, to fund a habit? There's opportunity here. As is the content is not very compelling.
Work sucks. I found the sense of fighting off sleep convincing and vivid- definitely a strong point. Elaborate more on your motivation-- to 'succeed', to not fail your family, to get by, to fund a hobby, to fund a habit? There's opportunity here. As is the content is not very compelling.