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Annotated Bibliography For Peer Review
Annotated Bibliography For Peer Review
Taylor Walker
Professor Jizi
UWRT 1103-012
2 April 2018
Annotated Bibliography
Alves, F., et al. "The Incidence of Bent Dorsal Fins in Free‐Ranging Cetaceans." Journal
This journal discusses the frequency of bent dorsal fins in aquatic mammals. It compares
the statistics of the bent fins of wild mammals to that of those in captivity. It has been discovered
that having a bent dorsal fin is common in captive animals, such as the orca. When in the wild,
less than one percent of a species were found to have a bent dorsal fin. Some of the wild
mammals exhibiting a bent dorsal fin had a physical injury or deformity. Stress can be a factor
This journal is a recent study. It was published on November 17, 2018. It has many
contributing authors. Data was collected and analyzed to draw conclusions about why dorsal fins
are bent in some mammals. This was published in the Journal of Anatomy which is a peer
reviewed journal that has been around since 1867. This is relevant to my inquiry question
because it discusses factors that can lead to dorsal fin collapses. Stress is a cause of some
Armstrong, Susan, and Richard G. Botzler. The Animal Ethics Reader. Routledge, 2003.
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This book discusses the health of animals in captivity. It uses examples dating back to
1835, when the London Zoo got its first chimpanzee. It died immediately. It also uses more
recent examples. In 2004, a study was conducted that showed between 1988 and 2003,
deficiencies in animal care, pest control, management, and record keeping contributed to 23
deaths. One thing I like about this source is how it shows the broad picture of animal treatment in
zoos over the decades. This isn’t a new issue. It has been going on for years. The book also
discusses how the zoo animal’s irregular behavior and high infant mortality rates are connected
to the animal’s natural home range size. The zoo enclosures are significantly smaller than the
animal’s natural habitat. They are not given the necessary room they need.
This book was published in 2003. It has both recent examples as well as older ones. I
only used page 580 in this book because it was the only relevant part to my inquiry. The author,
Susan J Armstrong, has a BSc and PhD. She is currently a professor at the University of
Kapoor, Varsha, et al. “Oral Health Correlates of Captivity.” Research in Veterinary Science, vol.
This journal discusses the oral health of captive animals compared to that of wild animals. It was
found that captive animals have a significantly higher frequency of periodontal disease than wild
animals. There is also a significant relationship between cranial morphology and oral health. This is
especially vital to my inquiry since the journal also states that captive animals have poorer oral health
than wild animals. This journal suggests that lack of the tough or hard meats can lead to bad oral
health.
The Research in Veterinary Science journal is an international journal. Some of the early
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volumes of this journal date back to 1991. The volume I read from was published in 2016, so it is a
recent study. One of the authors, Varsha Kapoor, works at the Medical University of South Carolina
School of Dental Medicine. This would give her the necessary knowledge to write about the oral
health of animals. Another author, Adam Hartstone-Rose, works in the department of cell biology
and anatomy at the University of South Carolina School of Medicine. He also affiliates with the
Animal Collections and Conservation as well as Riverbanks Zoo and Garden. Here, he can study the
Lamont, Di. “Beyond the Zoo: How Captivity Affects the Mental Well-Being of All Animals.”
effects-the-mental-well-being-of-all-animals/.
This article is relevant to my inquiry because it talks about the irregular behaviors that
animals in captivity can exhibit. Behaviors such as pacing, over-grooming, and sham-chewing
are common amongst captive animals. This source gave me a better understanding of why these
animals have certain behaviors and what causes them. I can personally verify that animals in
captivity perform these behaviors because I have seen it done first hand.
The author of this article is Di Lamont. She has a degree in animal behavior and welfare.
She has affiliated with organizations such as the Farm Sanctuary and Farm Animal Rights
Movement. She is qualified to write on this subject due to her experience with animals and her
Paskesen, Nanna, director. Zoochosis - The Living Conditions of Animals in Captivity. Youtube,
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This video is relevant to my inquiry because it addresses conditions animals in zoos can
have. It goes as far back to the earliest zoos and how the animals were treated then. This source
brought into light how zoos function and how different they have been over time. Long ago, the
wealthy people had animals they held captive. They didn’t take good care of them. Now, I feel
This video has many speakers. Chris Draper is from the Born Free Foundation. The main
goal of this organization is to keep animals in the wild and not hold them captive. Aaron
Whitnall is a zookeeper who speaks in the video. He is qualified because he sees the animals first
hand. Matthew Parker speaks about why these behaviors occur. He concludes they are a result of
the inability to preform natural activities such as hunting prey. Parker is a member of the