Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Christelle Elvinia
Period 4
A high school senior experiences many things during their last year. Some seniors
experience the joy of being accepted into their chosen college and some feel the sting of
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rejection from not receiving an acceptance letter. There is, however, a portion of seniors
that defer going to college. Why do some students prefer to defer from their college
admission? Maybe it is the lack of financial funds, or the lack of confidence in their
intended career path that hinders them. Another reason might be that they are simply
burnt out from their eighteen year academic grind. Whatever the reason might be, these
people will choose to take a gap year. A gap year (the popular name for deferring from
your college in European countries) is a time where a high school graduate will take an
indefinite amount of time to do whatever they want before entering college. Deferring
from college admission is a wise course of action because it can alter one’s perspective in
A gap year can only be beneficial if one takes the right course of action before
said break. Three very popular routes to take during the break is volunteering for an
organization, work to raise more money for tuition, and/or a personal agenda to
accomplish. So how do these options actually benefit the society? In today’s culture,
career nowadays. However, society does not need an intelligent individual. They need an
intelligent and driven individual. The rise of taking some sort of break before college
“…has been on the rise for the past fifteen to twenty years, rocketing from only a few in
the early 1990s” (Maslen & Tarica, 2012, para. 11). Furthermore, all Ivy League
Universities endorse gap year programs for interested students, and Princeton even
subsidizes these costs (O’Shea, 2014, para. 16-18). This suggests that by taking a break,
there is some sort of benefit that one can take from the experience and not just become a
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bum over the deferment time. More perspective people are needed in this world to
develop most when our surroundings are radically opposite of our comfort zone and our
inner self is being tested. By volunteering for a nonprofit organization that is exactly
what is happening. An organization, such as Global Citizen Year, takes you to developing
countries to better serve the world. A few activities one might encounter includes
host of other activities” (National Association for College Admission Counseling, 2014,
p.1). An individual can also broaden their understanding of how the world operates in an
environment much different from their own. Being in a new surrounding can teach a
relatively safe environment. Catia Rizio said that by taking a gap year, she “…felt like
[she has] gained a better sense of the world than what [she] knew back home” after her
Opponents of the whole gap year idea will say that these volunteering endeavors
can be expensive and they do not need to go outside of the country to reach maturity
level. However, with proper and detailed research, people can find thousands of
organizations out there that will finance all of their traveling expenses. Colleges or
universities (just like Princeton) can pay a fraction, if not the whole trip, for the allotted
time break. Also, reaching maturity does not need to involve going outside the country,
yes that is true. Despite this common knowledge, overcoming adversities and different
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situations unlike a protected environment, graduates are more likely to learn from the
many lessons thrown at them. Gap year takers are most likely to be innovative thinkers,
persistent, and better adaptive at things such as task and plan managements (Sparks,
Others choose to work for more financial funds for tuition instead of volunteering.
Graduates choose this instead “[t]o avoid huge college debt, [because] there’s a trend to
work full-time and attend college part-time” (Bell & Michelau, 2001, p.1). Because of
this said trend, it takes a lot longer for a student to finish school because of financial
issues. According to Hannah Stevens, a gap year taker, she “earned enough [money] to
qualify for the youth allowance and set [herself] up for the first year to pay for rent and
textbooks… [because if she had not done this], [she] would not have been able to afford
[tuition] (Maslen & Tarica, 2014, para. 4). Any extra funds for college is a major plus
[considered] a less prestigious college for affordability reasons” (Khadaroo, 2008, para.
5). Another reason why some graduates choose this over volunteering is to gain
experience on what is it like to work in the real world. It teaches young adults to better
handle their expenses and not constantly ask their parents for money whenever they need
it.
However, people will disagree on taking an indefinite amount of time to work just
for financial issues. Some say it is unnecessary for students to pursue a full-time job to
pay for tuition when they can work part-time during college. Also, some students will not
go back to school once they can make money, which makes college worthless. In fact
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many students do take part-time jobs to help pay for their education, regardless if their
parents are aiding them or not. That fact is not hidden nor discarded. However, education
comes first. Many students who have part-time jobs require them to be at work on days
they need to study or make them work long and tiresome hours.
Likewise, college is not useless just because students are already earning wages.
By working part-time at low end jobs, these students will have more incentive to come
back to school and earn a higher degree to gain more money in the future. Although there
has not been an extensive amount of research done in America about deferment, many
places abroad, such as Australia, has. Nine out of ten students who do partake in
deferment return to college and their time off has led them to change or confirm their
academic major (Sparks, 2010, para. 11). Hannah Stevens also declared that when people
tried to change her mind about deferring from college because she might not want to
return to school, she said that “[she] always wanted to go to uni[versity]” (Maslen &
Tarica, 2012, para.2). Undergraduates will also benefit from the break due to the fact they
do not have to rethink their career choices. By taking the extra time to think about what
the students want to be when they grow up, they become a productive adult in the near
future.
Although there are legitimate reasons why people deter from the thought of taking
a year off before entering college, there are massive benefits a person can gain from the
whole experience. As in Hannah Steven’s and Catia Rizio’s experiences, they did not
waste their time. They gained more than what they gave up, such as going straight to
college. They got to explore the world and offer their services to better the whole
community or partake in raising more funds for their college needs. A structured plan or
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schedule for the break is definitely a must for it to be a reward. It also depends on the
volunteer or work during their time off, their experience will transform them to become
leaders for the world’s future, as Rhodes Scholarship Trust would say (O’Shea, 2014,
para. 15).
References
Bell, Julie D., and Michelau, Demaree K. (2001). Making college affordable. State
Maslen, Geoff, and Tarica, Elisabeth. (2008, September 18). Students leap into the gap
National Association for College Admission Counseling. (2014). Gap year. National
http://www.nacacnet.org/studentinfo/articles/pages/gap-year-.aspx
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O’Shea, Joe. (2014, January 16). Don’t go to college next year. Inside Higher Ed.
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Sparks, Sarah D. (2010, September 22). Research suggests that a ‘gap year’ motivates
students; studies tout the motivational power of time off after high school.