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Madisonj Esw d4 Script Rewrite
Madisonj Esw d4 Script Rewrite
Written by
Jeffrey Madison
COLD OPEN
BRUNO
Arrrgh! When I’m not around, this
place turns into a pig sty.
GIORGIO
Bro! I’m still using that.
BRUNO
What are you talking about? You
haven’t been here since last night.
GIORGIO
Just resting between sets, bro.
GREGG
Off for coffee. Anybody want?
BRUNO
I’ll have a...
DELIA
Make this place sparkle! The health
inspector is coming. Where’s Bobby?
DELIA
Bobby Barnes! You better not be
wreckin’ the sauna before it passes
inspection! I’m not playin’ with...
DELIA (CONT’D)
Aye, yai yai yai yai...
There sits Bobby Barnes (60s), towel only, inert, lobster red
and propped up on in a corner. Eyes open, exaggerated grimace
plastered across his face, very dead.
Delia makes the sign of the cross, then closes Bobby’s eyes.
ACT ONE
IN THE SAUNA
GREGG
A little early morning sauna
christening? Naughty, naughty.
DELIA
OMG, first of all, eww! Second of
all, why does everybody think that?
GREGG
You know why...wait, did Bobby just
kick the bucket?
DELIA
I don’t know about that. I just
know he’s abandoned us, for good.
DELIA (CONT’D)
This stinks.
GREGG
It’s natural. When you pass, you
lose control of bodily functions.
DELIA
How is that any different than when
he was alive?
GREGG
Classic Bobby. Make a mess then
leave up to us to clean it up.
DELIA
We have to call 9-1-1 and hope they
get here before the inspector does.
DELIA (CONT’D)
Inspector Klopowsky. You’re five
minutes away? No, yeah, that’s
great!
DELIA (CONT’D)
I should cancel. We have to cancel.
GREGG
You cancel, that’ll be the third
time. Three strikes and we’re
closed, for good.
DELIA
What are you suggesting?
DELIA (CONT’D)
We can’t just move the body.
GREGG
And I can’t survive without health
insurance. Can you?
DELIA
Oh, stupid Bobby. What did you do?
Why now?...All right, we’ll move
him, but when this is over, we...
The two bump fists. Then they position themselves and hoist
Bobby from the sauna.
ACT TWO
Bruno chats with a FEMALE CLIENT. The two block Delia and
Gregg’s path, who try to sneak around them.
FEMALE CLIENT
So I told Frederick I simply must
wear my new lavender Versace...
BRUNO
Wait! Lavender? Like Prince?
FEMALE CLIENT
Exactly.
(answers cell phone)
Speak of the devil. It’s Freddy.
She exits gym just as Delia loses her grip. Bobby crashes to
the floor just as INSPECTOR KLOPOWSKY, (40s), stern face,
stern suit, stern gait, grabs for the front door handle.
DELIA
I think I’m going to be sick.
BRUNO
Don’t worry. I got you. Passed out
drunk again, huh?
BRUNO (CONT’D)
Feels like dead weight today.
DELIA
You could say that. Make him look
busy, ok?
DELIA (CONT’D)
Inspector Klopowsky. Look at you!
Have you been on vacation? Is that
a new suit? Have you lost weight?
INSPECTOR KLOPOWSKY
You’ve got that wet, frazzled look
going. Intriguing fashion choice.
Is that Bobby? Why’s he being
carried? Why is he mostly naked?
DELIA
Uh,
(ditzy)
You know how it is, Inspector. A
strong, virile man like him, a shy
impressionable girl like me...one
thing led to another, and we...
GIORGIO
Mom! Ewwww!
GREGG
I knew it!
INSPECTOR KLOPOWSKY
And that’s precisely why you won’t
be accompanying me on this
inspection.
DELIA
Please. The things I saw in locker
rooms during my NFL cheerleading
days might shock even you.
INSPECTOR KLOPOWSKY
What the?...
7.
DELIA
Oh god, it’s over. Look, Bobby’s
actually naked because--
INSPECTOR KLOPOWSKY
Excuse me. Someone more important
than you wants to speak to me.
BRUNO
(whispers to Delia)
I think I might have killed Bobby.
ACT THREE
GREGG
Are you gonna tell Bruno, or what?
DELIA
He’s not gonna pass us, is he? He’s
gonna find out, isn’t he? I’m gonna
end up driving for Uber, aren’t I?
GREGG
I can’t take this.
(to Bruno)
It’s not your fault. We found him
like that.
DELIA
You just better prepare yourself to
ask out Klopowsky if things go pear-
shaped in there.
GREGG
Please. He’s way more into your
pear shape than he is into me.
DELIA
You need to check your gaydar. He’s
more closeted than the wedding gown
I never got to wear. And don’t go
calling my shape pear!
DELIA (CONT’D)
Look, I can explain. Don’t make the
gym suffer just because I --
INSPECTOR KLOPOWSKY
Let’s just say, I’ve seen worse,
and call yourselves lucky.
GREGG
Recalibrating.
INSPECTOR KLOPOWSKY
Oh hey, Bobby’s looking more alive
now. BOBBY!
GREGG
Bobby doesn’t like being
interrupted while he’s getting his
“hard” on.
Gregg steers Klopowsky out the front door. Delia marches over
to Bruno. The two of them unhook Bobby from the squat rack.
Giorgio reaches for his phone.
TAG
BRUNO
Died in a hot sauna. That’s about
right, for where he’s going.
GIORGIO
I liked him....He hired me.
DELIA
I hired you.
Bruno and Giorgio exit. Delia takes a moment to tip back over
the bucket, re-arrange Bobby’s towel, re-arrange his hair.
She kisses his forehead and backs out, bumps into SHEILA
BARNES (25), Bobby’s shrill, demanding daughter.
SHEILA
They said Bobby was in--You! Slut!
DELIA
Why does everyone think I’m
sleeping with your father?
LEAD PARAMEDIC
We can’t move him until the coroner
officially pronounces him dead.
SHEILA
Oh my God! Is he dead?! Is Daddy
dead? Daddy died?! Oh my God...
SHEILA (CONT’D)
You perverted necrophiliac!
GIORGIO
Hey, if Bobby’s dead, who’s gonna
run the gym?
END OF EPISODE