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Copywriting defined

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WHY? WHAT? WHEN?


Copywriting is writing with a Copywriters provide the content Because copywriters deal in
practical purpose. The for advertisements (broadcast ideas, they are best involved
copywriter aims to inform the and print), slogans and taglines, early on. They can identify the
reader, persuade them to change websites, brochures, leaflets, concepts, themes, topics,
their view or encourage them to direct mail, marketing emails, phrases that form the foundation
take action. articles, user guides, video of a project. However, a
scripts and more. copywriter can also add a lot of
Most copywriters write for value by taking a fresh look at
commercial purposes – to Some people use the word content that has already been
encourage readers to make a ‘copywriter’ to refer specifically created.
purchase or try a product. to those who create concepts
and content for advertisements.

HOW? WHO? WHERE?


The tools of the copywriter’s There is no ‘official’ qualification In corporate and agency
trade are simple: computer and to be a copywriter. Anyone who settings, copywriters work in
word-processing software for can write, and meet the needs of partnership graphic and web
longer pieces, and perhaps their employer or client, can be a designers, web developers,
pencil and paper for slogans and copywriter. account executives, marketing
ideas. managers and others. As
Every copywriter is different. But freelancers, they work directly
Most copywriters work many good copywriters are with clients and also through
iteratively, revising their work literate, creative, reflective and agencies.
several times – in response to disciplined. They are curious –
client comments, and also on like detectives, their job is to Copywriters naturally congregate
their own initiative as they aim to ‘know a little about a lot’. in areas with strong creative
refine and improve their work. industries. But, in theory, a
Some copywriters have a copywriter can work from
specialisation, based on their anywhere.
experience. Others are happy to
write anything.

‘A professional writer is an ‘Half of my life is an act of


amateur who didn’t quit.’ revision.’
Richard Bach John Irving

The elements of copywriting


Although every copywriting assignment is different, there are
some principles that never change. This diagram shows how
they come together. It is always worthwhile considering these
elements before starting to write.

Desired
Audience Customer Aim
Reaction
Who will read the copy? What do we want to
What do we want people
What are their likes, priorities, achieve with this copy?
to do, think or feel when
worries and dreams? they read the copy?
What situation will they be in
when they read the copy?

Benefits
Copy Strategy
How do the features How are we going to
relate to the audience’s present the features in
needs and desires? order to achieve our aim?
How will the product or Which features/benefits
service help them? are most important?

Features
What does the product or
service do?
How does it work?
What is new, different or
unique about it?

‘The secret of becoming ‘If you can't explain it simply,


a writer is to write, write you don't understand it well
and keep on writing.’ enough.’
Ken MacLeod Richard Feynman (probably)

Slogans
Slogans are one-line promises of value. The value might be boldly
stated or subtly shaded, but it has to be both clear and believable.

When used as headlines, slogans should grab attention, establish the


theme and set the tone for what follows. When used as signoffs, they
should strengthen, confirm or enrich what has gone before. In some
advertisements, the slogan may be the only content.

Slogans should ‘talk to’ their visual context. Copy and design should
come together to form a sum greater than their parts. Neither should
try to say something that would be better said by the other.

The art of writing a great slogan can’t be reduced to a formula, but


there are some recognisable types. Here are a few of them.

Concrete benefit Personal benefit Intangible benefit

Expresses a concrete No specific concrete


Direct and forceful.
benefit, but relates it to the benefit expressed.
reader.
Generates strong interest
States brand value and
from motivated or
Combines reason and invites the reader to
interested readers.
emotion. associate themselves with
it.
No risk of
Used for many B2C
misunderstanding, but
headlines. Depends on strong
may come across as
emotional resonance (and
inelegant.
sheer spending power) for
effect.

‘No other battery looks like it ‘1,000 songs in your pocket’


or lasts like it’ iPod ‘Just do it’
Nike
Duracell

Literal question Rhetorical question Accusatory question

Can draw the reader in if it Can be intriguing or Can jolt the reader out of
talks to their personal compelling, but risks their comfort zone if used
concerns. pretension or irrelevance. effectively.

‘Does your memory ‘Who knows the secret of ‘Would you be more careful
let you down?’ The Black Magic box?’ if it was you that got
Black Magic chocolates pregnant?’

Command Implicit command Promise

Powerful if the reader Poses a question, or Offers general reassurance


agrees with the advice makes a statement, that without necessarily stating
(in other words, they want implies a command to the any specific benefit.
the benefit promised). reader – usually, to use the
product. The use of ‘you’ is always
Ineffective if the command compelling.
elicits reactance (the May constitute an NLP
impulse to resist control). ‘embedded command’ (i.e.
sentence contains a fully
formed command).

‘Don’t leave home without it’ ‘What will you send?’ ‘Always there for you’
American Express Post Office Hyundai

Metaphor Pun Neologism

Puts a striking, Can be memorable, but 250,000 English words not


sensory-rich image in the the reader might remember enough for you? Make up
reader’s mind – but only the joke and forget who one of your own!
if the metaphor is well told it.
chosen. At their best, neologisms
Use jokes with care. combine the expression of
Don’t fall into the trap of Humour can fall very flat. a benefit with a witty and
making the reader think Don’t bend the message to memorable turn of phrase
about something the joke. – all in one ‘word’.
irrelevant.

‘Liquid engineering’ ‘Alarmed? You should be’ ‘Innervigoration’


Castrol GTX engine oil Moss Security Gordon’s gin

‘The task of a writer consists ‘A writer is someone who


of being able to make can make a riddle out of
something out of an idea.’ an answer.’
Thomas Mann Karl Kraus

Grab their interest


No interest, no readers! Here are the three main ways of cultivating
interest. Benefits are by far the most powerful. News and curiosity
may grab interest, but only benefits will sustain it.

Benefits News Curiosity

‘That’s just what I need’ ‘Never seen that before’ ‘What’s this all about?’

‘I want one of those’ ‘That looks different’ ‘That looks interesting’

‘The joy is in the surprise.


‘The words we use are It can be as small as a
strong. They make felicitous coupling of
reality.’ noun and adjective.’
Wang Chung Ian McEwan

Know your benefits


Benefits command attention and, ultimately, close
sales. Benefits need not be unique, but they must
be compelling.

Tangible Intangible Commercial

Physical, provable or Emotional or psychological Companies buy things that


measurable benefits. benefits that cannot be are good for business.
measured.
Make them real and vivid Show why the reader’s
in the reader’s mind. Link them to the reader’s firm needs the product or
concerns. service.

Save time ey
Sensory pleasure
Reduce costs

Market leader on ion


(nice to look at, taste, m
e tit
Price Quality smell, hear or touch) or pe
m om
Self-esteem e c
Value Speed ak e
M h
Personal attractiveness
att
Convenience, Coolness Be
ease of use Novelty
Gain customers

‘Don't tell me the moon is


‘Whether or not you write shining; show me the glint
well, write bravely.’ of light on broken glass.’

Bill Stout Anton Chekhov

Turn features into benefits


All features of a product or service must be ‘turned outwards’
and expressed as benefits. Using the word ‘you’ is an excellent
way to make a benefit feel directly relevant to the reader.

Brand / Product Feature Benefit Copy

L’Oréal Improve appearance of Feel attractive ‘Because you’re worth it’


hair
Kellogg’s Rice Krispies Makes noise when milk Kids have fun eating ‘Snap! Crackle! Pop!’
added them

The Independent Politically neutral Readers seen as ‘It is. Are you?’
discerning and intelligent

Interflora Get flowers delivered Delight loved ones ‘Say it with flowers’

‘The real engagement


is between reader ‘The talent is in the choices.’
and writer.’
Roger Black Robert De Niro

Persuade the reader


These four principles of persuasion have been proven
to influence people. Select the ones that will work best
in context, and use respected third-party information
and sources to back up your position.

Authority Social Proof Consistency Scarcity

People defer to experts People follow the herd People act on their People want what they
commitments can’t have

‘Guinness is good ‘8 out of 10 owners ‘Like X? You’ll love ‘Quite frankly, the
for you’ said their cats Y!’ American Express
Guinness preferred it’ Soft Return card is not for
Kitekat everyone...’
American Express

‘You turn the handle the


way it goes, not the way ‘It is do, or do not.
it ought to go.’ There is no try.’

Confucius Yoda

The most persuasive words


As chosen by David Ogilvy in 1963 and L.M Boyd in 1970, and
ascribed (wrongly) to several US universities. Possibly mythical.
Use at your own risk.

sensational hurry results bargain


startling
introducing quick love save
proven
offer you easy challenge
wanted

suddenly now new announcing


remarkable
compare

amazing money health revolutionary


improvement safety guarantee miracle
discovery magic

‘No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No


surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader.’
Robert Frost

Choose the right structure


It’s not enough to have the right words, or the right ideas:
they must be in the right order. Choose a structure that leads
the reader from self-interest to action, in a sequence that
makes sense and holds interest.

Problem / Solution Story Question / Answer

Describe a problem that the


reader faces, then position the
Tell a story – of how someone
uses the product, how they
?
Ask and answer the reader’s
most likely questions in order,
product as a solution to it. arrived at the point they needed e.g. ‘What is it?’ ‘How does it
it, how the product was work?’ ‘Why can’t I just…?’ etc.
developed etc.

Numbered list Different views Chunk down

12 3
Break down your content into a Examine the same situation from Start at the general level, then
set number of points or a range of different viewpoints. move iteratively to deeper levels
sections. of detail.
For example, copy for a car
Choose a reassuring cardinal insurance provider could look at Works well when the reader
number (3, 5, 7, 10, 12, 15, 20, the viewpoints of each party in a must understand some technical
25), not a discomfiting one motor accident. points to see the benefits
(2, 9, 13). (consumer electronics, personal
finance etc).

‘Advertising is not voodoo. The Client could ultimately hope only


to create the impression of a connection or resonance between
the brand and what was important to consumers. And what was
important to consumers was, always and invariably, themselves.
What they conceived themselves to be.’
David Foster Wallace

Calls to action
Calls to action guide the audience towards a real-world
action. They set a boundary on readers’ ‘information
gathering’ experience, encouraging them to move into
the ‘doing’ phase.
(‘DCR’ = Desired Customer Reaction.)

Know the DCR Express the DCR Stay on target

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Identify the DCR. State the DCR clearly and Keep the DCR consistent
simply. throughout the piece.
What single action do you want
people to take when they’ve Command the reader directly. You can say it in different ways,
finished reading? but you should always say the
Don’t obscure the message by same thing.
saying ‘please’, ‘why not’ etc.

‘There are no dull subjects. ‘When you write, try to leave


There are only dull writers.’ out all the parts readers
skip.’
H.L. Mencken Elmore Leonard

Productive tactics
Sometimes, it's hard to get started. And sometimes it's
hard to finish the job. Use these tactics to mix it up when
things just aren't coming together.

Read it Use a
Write for
Discard your out loud. pencil.
someone
favourite.
you know.

Write Delete
Read it Change Start in your first
anything,
off paper. venue. the middle. paragraph.
edit later.

Ask someone Experience


who knows. Save a copy, Write drunk, the product.
cut hard. edit sober.

Change Sleep
the font. Too simple? on it.
Too obvious?
It’s finished.

‘Quantity produces ‘When we read, we start at the


quality. If you only beginning and continue until we reach
write a few things, the end. When we write, we start in the
you're doomed.’ middle and fight our way out.’

Ray Bradbury Vickie Karp

Sales letters
Sales letters are sent to businesses or individuals to promote
a product or service. A sales letter must capture and hold the
reader’s attention, even when they are not in ‘buying mode’.

Headline Body Signoff

Offer a benefit in the headline. Get straight to the point (no ‘I’m Finish with a call to action.
writing to let you know…’).
Use a PS to offer a new twist on
Express, or explain, all features the key benefit (time limit, free
as benefits. trial etc).

Maximise ‘you’. Minimise ‘we’.

Information documents
Informational pieces such as how-tos and help articles
are primarily intended to help the reader, but they also
serve to build the authority of a brand. The more useful
they are, the more the brand will benefit.

Structure Design and layout Tone and length

Organise thematically: answer Use informative cross-headings Aim for a reading age of 10. Use
the reader’s likely questions, in so people can scan and jump in. Word’s readability statistics.
order.
Use all the tools in the box: Make it as short as it can be, but
Organise chronologically: tell bullets, tables, diagrams, no shorter.
the story of using the graphs.
product/service.

Web pages
Planning Writing SEO

Know each page’s purpose, It’s hard to read a lot on screen. Identify target keywords for each
and stick to it. Use short sentences and make page.
paragraphs one to three
How does this page help the sentences long. Include keywords in main
reader? heading, HTML page title and
Aim for 300–500 words overall. text (but never unnaturally).
Where does this page fit in the
overall user experience or user Use keywords in internal links
journey? where possible.

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Strategy Concept Copy and design

Who is the audience? The creative concept dramatises Show, don’t tell. Involvement is
the key benefit. interest. Make the reader join
What is their situation? the dots.
Find your angle. How can you
What is the key benefit? compare it, contrast it, link it, Imagery, headline, body and
invert it, make it fresh or say it signoff should each sing a
differently? different part of the same
harmony.

Revise, reject, revisit. The right


idea is rarely the first.

‘They're fancy talkers about themselves, writers. If I had


to give young writers advice, I would say don't listen to
writers talk about writing or themselves. ’
Lillian Hellman

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