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Edee 426
Edee 426
Professor Schwartz
EDEE 426
4 October 2017
Oral Language Lesson Reflection
Introduction/background
For my 1st lesson for Block 2 Seminar and Practicum, my lesson focused on Oral
Language. I am currently placed in Ms. Tiffany Bala’s 1st grade class at Pearl City Highlands
Elementary School. I am still building more knowledge and experiences in teaching more than
10 students, since I currently work in an elementary where I interact with several students at a
time. During this lesson, I felt more confident than I ever did throughout my experiences at my
different field placements. Because of this experience, I realized that I want to teach 1st graders
when I graduate. My lesson fit into my mentor teacher’s lessons because she said that my
activity targets the components of language arts: speaking, writing, and listening. The students’
past assignment was to share their narratives, which involves asking questions, speaking, and
listening. So, the students were familiar with clarity, volume, critical listening, and asking
questions. For my 1st lesson, the objective was that students would orally describe their
classmates’ animal drawings. And, students would also illustrate their partner’s animal drawings
Description
There are 19 students, 10 boys and 9 girls, in my field placement Language Arts class.
Students switch classes during the Language Arts period according to their reading and writing
levels. My mentor teaches the 2nd to the highest level. None of the students have a form of
disability or are a part of a behavior or academic intervention. However, one of the students is
exiting out of English Language Learner (ELL). For my 1st lesson this semester, one of the
students was absent. Therefore, there was an even amount of students in my class.
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My 1st lesson prompts multiple 1st grade Hawaii Content and Performance Standards
Benchmarks: the ability to use rhetorical devices to craft writing appropriate to audience and
purpose (Standard 5); the ability to apply knowledge of verbal and nonverbal language to
communicate effectively in various situations: interpersonal, group, and public: for a variety of
purposes (Standard 6); and, the ability to adapt messages appropriately to address audience,
purpose, and situation (Standard 7). The conceptual knowledge that students are supposed to
obtain is meaning, clarity, and critical listening. The procedural knowledge that students are
supposed to obtain are adding details to and description to a topic, using adjectives and
prepositional phrases to describe, use complete sentences when speaking, and listening skills.
This lesson was broken into 2 parts and was scheduled to take about 1 hour and 15 minutes. The
location of the lesson was taught in multiple areas: carpet and student desks.
Before starting my lesson, I did a warm-up activity with my students. Since my lesson
took place during the morning, I wanted to incorporate an activity where students greet each
other one by one. So, I had students take off one of their foot wears (slippers or shoes), place it
in the middle, and sit in a circle with the rest of their classmates. One by one, each person were
assigned to pick one foot wear in the middle, find the person with that foot wear, look him or her
in the eye, and say “good morning” following with his or her name after the greeting. Because
my lesson was on Oral Language, I figured that this would be a great warm-up activity to get
There are several components that happened in this lesson: independent work and partner
work. However, both components fall under the teaching strategy of Direct Instruction. To
begin my lesson, I held a discussion with my students about the topic of pets: what are they, what
animals make good pets, etc. Then, I did a read a loud of a book (The Pets You Get! By: Adrian
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Reynolds, Thomas Taylor) to better engage the students in the lesson and for them to have an
easier transition to the next activity on the agenda. After reading the book, I explained the first
part of the activity, which was for students to independently draw their dream pets – a pet that
they would want – and list 6 key physical characteristics that are shown in their pictures; the
students were open to listing more than 6 details if they wanted to. They completed this
assignment on a worksheet called “My Dream Pet.” For students to acquire a better
understanding, I explained to the students the definition of characteristic - the way something
looks or acts – and provided them with an example using my personal dream pet. I drew a
giraffe with 2 brown antlers/horns, a yellow body and face, brown spots on the body, 2 black
dots as its nose, 2 brown feet, and 2 yellow ears with pink in the inside. To involve my students
in the learning process of how to identify characteristics, I asked students to define some
physical characteristics that they saw in my picture. Before excusing my students to their desks
to complete the first part of the activity, I did a “Thumbs Up, Thumbs Down” to check their
understanding. The whole class understood the instructions, was excused back to their desks,
10 minutes into their independent work time, I checked to see the students’ progress of
their drawings. Majority of the students were almost done drawing and writing their 6 details.
After 20 minutes passed, I called the students back to the carpet area to explain Part 2 of the
activity. For Part 2 of the activity, students were assigned to partner up heterogeneously and take
turns drawing each other’s dream pets by listening and asking questions. So, I explained that
while one student explains their dream pets verbally with clarity and appropriate volume, the
other person is listening, asking questions, and attempting to draw his or her partner’s dream pet.
And, all students will have the chance to speak, draw, and listen. To provide students with a
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better understanding of how to do this activity, I had them watch a video of an example of me
doing the activity with another person. This provides them with a better understanding because
it shows them how they are supposed to act and what they are supposed to do while doing the
assignment. I also provided them with an example of a completed worksheet to show them the
quality of a finished assignment. The students’ drawings are used as assessments to see if the
students were listening and speaking clearly. The students’ pictures do not have to look exactly
alike; however, they must portray the 6 details that their partners wrote down and explained.
After explaining the drawing portion of the activity, I explained to the students that in
order to complete the lesson, they would have to write a summary of what they drew in the back
of their worksheet. This portion is used as an assessment to see if they were using their listening
skills. Their writing will be based off what they drew and heard from their partners.
comprehension check. For those who did not understand, I had them stay seated on the floor so
that I could help them acquire a better understanding of what to do. Only one pair of students did
not understand. For those who did understand, I had them partner up heterogeneously and start
the assignment at their desks. All students were able to find partners on their own. There was
one pair that was the same gender because there were not enough boys.
30 minutes later, students were finishing up their worksheets and reflections. For those
who finished earlier than others, I had them read a book. Students followed directions and did
what they were told to do. My lesson ended right when the bell rang, so I was not able to close.
When the bell rings, students usually pack up and go back to their homerooms when excused.
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Creating my lesson, I was very excited! However, it was challenging because there were
a lot of components to think of thoroughly. I had the hardest time trying to figure out a lesson
that dealt with Oral Communication. The only thing I knew was that Oral Communication dealt
with speaking. I did not know how I could assess Oral Communication. What really helped was
reading through the Hawaii Content and Performance Standards examples. Luckily, I was able to
come up with this activity from reading the examples and relating them to a game that I played
with my family last Christmas. One thing that I enjoyed was picking out the book to read. I feel
that books are very good resources when it comes to teaching students, especially the younger
grade levels! I was excited because I thought the book that I chose was very engaging. It was
about animals, and my students love animals! It also had a rhyme that made the reading flow
smoothly.
Detailed Analysis
After meeting with my mentor teacher, Ms. Bala, I am happy to say that my lesson went
really well. She said that she was very impressed with my performance and that she could tell
that I had experience working with kids because of my classroom management. She pointed out
that I was very calm throughout my lesson and that my lesson flowed smoothly from activity to
activity. What helped with the smooth transitions were my constant use of reminders to help
guide students through the assignment; how I went to each table for small group instruction to go
over examples so that the students better understand what to do and how to execute an
assignment; how I showed multiple examples: videos, finished worksheets, chart example to
target all learners; how I pulled those who do not understand what to do on the side to better
explain the instructions and to check their understandings; and how I incorporated a read aloud
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in my lesson because it engaged the students to listen attentively. Overall, my mentor teacher
liked my lesson because it targeted Language Arts standards, and it challenged all students.
From my point of view, I feel that my management skills definitely improved from last
semester when I taught at Alvah Scott Elementary School. I used multiple strategies that I
learned from both my mentor teacher last semester and my mentor teacher this semester. One
thing I took from my mentor teacher last semester is the different ways to start a lesson through
morning activities. For this lesson, I used the slipper activity, which I learned from my previous
mentor teacher, to start my lesson. I used it as a warm up activity so students can practice their
oral communication and interacting with their peers. One thing that I learned from Ms. Bala, my
mentor teacher this semester, is the phrases “sit where you will focus” or “eyes and ears.” I used
these phrases to better manage the class while doing my first lesson at Pearl City Highlands
Elementary School. The students are familiar with these phrases therefore, I thought I’d use
Although my mentor teacher said that I did really well, there were some things I feel that
I could have done to make my lesson better. One thing that I did not have the chance to do was
end my lesson in a meaningful way. My lesson took longer than expected due to my morning
activity; therefore, I did not get the chance to close my lesson. The students were already having
a fun time doing this assignment; too bad I did not get the chance to end it the way I wanted to. I
wanted to do a short discussion about the lesson whether the students enjoyed it or not or had a
hard time completing it. This ending activity would allow them to have input on their
Another thing I feel that I need to work on is specific praise. I have to work on praising
my students for their good work and actions. This is a good classroom management strategy
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because it motivates others to try and do just as well as their peer that is being praised. I caught
myself doing some specific praise throughout my lesson but not loud enough for others to hear.
Majority of the time, my “good job” was just a simple high five. This is why I have to work on
giving out specific praises. For my future lessons, I will keep this in mind so that I can start
giving out more specific praises. With more practices, hopefully it becomes a “good” habit.
Implications/ Conclusion
There are many things that I have learned from this experience, especially about myself.
I feel that I have gained more confidence speaking in front of my students, teaching a lesson, and
speaking without hesitation (following through with my comments). These are the qualities that
I have been working so hard on. With more practice, hopefully it becomes more natural for me
to teach and speak without hesitation. Another thing that I learned about myself is that I really
want to teach the lower level grades, specifically 1st, 2nd, or 3rd grade. I was placed in a pre-
kindergarten, first, and second grade class for my field placements, and so far, I have a love for
One thing that I learned for 1st grade is that they learn best with direct instruction.
Because they are still young and need more guidance, I found that direct instruction best helps
with their learning experience. They love the teaching model: I do, We do, You do. It provides
I do not think I would do anything drastic to change my lesson because I feel that I
executed it quite well. With structure and organization, it was quite easy to flow through my
lesson. However, I know that there are some things that I have to work on. These are the things
that will come with more practice. With more experience, I will build more confidence, and I
will learn to give specific praises more often. From this lesson, I feel a little more confident than
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I felt last semester. I can definitely say that I look forward to having a classroom of my own and