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THREE
SCREENPLAYS
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by Robert Bresson
VOLUME II

Introduction by Annette Michelson


~ Translated by Leon Burch
Urizen Books, Inc.
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New York
1981

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A PICK POCKET

by
Copyright © 1981 by Robert Bresson

ROBERT BRESSON
This translation copyright © 1981 by Urizen Books, Inc.

All rights reserved


Printed and bound in the United States of America

ISBN 0-916354-53-9

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--
His wandering gaze
momentarily meets the
other man's as he goes
past, then drops again to ..

1) C.U .. . . the purse hang- (Crowd hum)


ing from the woman's arm.

2) M.S. (as no. 2) Michel is (Crowd hum)


still leaning against the
railing. His gaze moves
from the woman's purse to
the man who now turns
away from the window.

3) M.S. The man leaves the


window, still holding his
receipts and putting his
wallet back into his picket.
He is facing Michel and
glances at him absent-
mindedly as he goes by. (Bell)

4) M.S. (as n. 4) Michel


meets the other man's gaze (Crowd hum)
and immediately looks
away. Then he turns V.O.: Would I be as bold
towards the man who has and cool as the occasion
just passed in front of him. required?

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5) M.S. The man overtakes
The woman turns around
the woman. The couple (Crowd hum) instinctively (facing
(backs to camera) go
towards the track.
camera) towards Michel
(perhaps because she
senses that
6) M.S. (as n . 6) Michel V.O.: Would I lose my someone is standing too
makes up his mind to nerve at the last minute? close to her). She glances
follow them. He moves
away (out of shot). at him briefly.
(Crowd hum)
7) M.S. The man and 9) M.S. Michel (facing V.O.: I should have gone
(Crowd hum) camera) meets the woman's away.
woman (into shot) follow
V.O.: There were no ethical gaze briefly (her shoulder
the crowd into the passage-
way under the stands. objections. I had made up and the back of her head
my mind several weeks are seen in the
before. foreground). Then he ap-
Seen from behind, Michel pears to be watching the
(into shot) sets out after race for a moment. Now he
them (out of shot). makes sure that no one is
watching him. His gaze
8) M.S. Man and woman goes back to the purse and
(Crowd hum, then silence)
(intp shot) reach the bot- remains there .
tom of the stands where
the crowd is gathering. 10) C.U. Michel's hand
They pause (backs to moves slow! )( towards the
camera). purse, pulls back, moves
forward again, hesitates,
Michel (into shot) comes opens the purses-jerks
and stands behind them back to its original posi-
(back to camera). tion .

Everyone is watching the 11) M.S. (as n. 11) Michel


start of the race. (facing camera) looks now (Distant galloping)
at the purse, now at the
The start is given (off- race which is is pretending (Low voices, low crowd
screen) to watch. hum)

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7
'-
..
All the faces around him PAN with him for a mo- (Crowd hum)
are intent on the horses ment. Alone now, he heads
(off· for the main gate (out of
screen) as they come down
shot)
the stretch.
14) M.S. Micchel (into shot) V.O.: I no longer felt the
Crowd reaction to the goes through the gate (fac- ground under my feet. The
finish . Michel glances ing camera) and walks world seemed to belong to
quickly at the purse. away. me.
12) C.U. (as n. 12) As soon PAN and TRACK following (Crowd hum dying out)
as the race is over, there is him for a dozen steps. He
a rush in the crowd. At the turns around as he walks
same time (or perhaps a se-
and sees two police inspec-
cond earlier) Michel's hand tors (off-screen).
dives into the half-open
purse and seizes the bun-
He keeps on walking: The
dle of bank-notes. (Crowd hum)
two plainclothesmen (into
shot) fall in behind him
PAN with Michel's hand as (backs to camera).
he stuffs the notes into his
.pocket, then to Michel
DISSOLVE
himself (M.S.)
POLICE VAN - DAY
He walks away into the
crowd pressing against 15) M.S. Michel (facing
him on all sides (out of camera) is seated between (Sound of moving car)
shot). two police inspectors (no
handcuffs).
13) M.S. Michel (into shot)
comes forward with the In the front seat, next to
crowd following at a short the driver, the figure of a
distance the horses which uniformed policeman (in
have just been raced and foreground 011 edge of
are now heading for the screen).
paddock. He moves to one
side to avoid the crowd. DISSOLVE

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'-
COMMISSAIRE B'S The Commissaire picks it
OFFICE - DUSK up and hands it to Michel
who puts it in h~ pocket.
16) M.S. Commissaire B.,
seated at his desk. Behind CAMERA PULLS BACK
him and a little to one side, AND PANS to Michel, then
a half-open door leading to follows him (in M.S.) to the
another room. Comings door, which the Com-
and goings of a few (Distant street sounds missaire opens for him. He
bureaucrats. through the window). disappears from view (out
of shot).
Facing the Commissaire, MICHEL: But since you
Michel (3~ rear view), can't bring definite
stands between two charges, since you can't be "C.I.D." STAIRCASE-
plainclothesmen. sure ... NIGHT

19) M.S. Michel (into shot)


COMMISSAIRE B.: That, goes down some twenty
my dear sir, is why we are steps, rather hastily . (He
not holding you, you're passes several people to
free to go. whom he pays no atten-
tion).
17) M.S. Michel (facing
camera, not over Commis- PAN with him - then
saire's shoulder) looks at camera comes to a stop
Commissaire, then at the and Michel goes out of shot
little bundle of banknotes (back to camera).
on the desk, then back at
Commissaire. ENTRANCE, 36 QUAI DES
ORFEVRES
18) Commissaire (facing
camera, not over Michel's 20) M.S. Seen from behind
shoulder) looks at Michel, (into shot) Michel goes
then at the bundle of bank- through the entrance way
notes. and walks away (out of
shot)

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II
QUAI SAINT-MICHEL- NIGHT - ENTRANCE TO
MICHEL'S APARTMENT HOUSE MICH~L'S ROOM - DAY

21) M.S. Michel reaches 23) Michel sits up in bed,


the building where he puts his feet on the floor.
lives. (camera in entrance
hall, on a level with the top (Street sounds, car) 24) M.L.S. Michel (seen
steps, looking out at the through partly open
embankment and the pass- skylight) comes towards
ing traffic). the window, looks out over
rooftops, goes back to the V.O.: I was famished. I'd
He comes up the steps fac- middle of the room and scarcely eaten in two days.
ing camera (out of shot). goes out (back to camera).

MICHEL'S ROOM - NIGHT DISSOLVE

22) M.S. Michel, preceded CAFE MAHIEU - DAY


by the sound of his
footsteps in the corridor, 25) M.S. Standing at the
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pushes open the door to counter, Michel finishes
his room - there is no lock, eating a croissant and
or else the lock is broken drinking a cup of coffee.
-and 'goes in. He flops He pays ...
down on the bed, fully
dressed. He has not turned (Distant street sounds) 26) Michel at the counter,
on the light and the room seen through the glass .~

is in semi-darkness (a faint door (which opens and


light through the window closes). He pays and leaves.
from the street).
DISSOLVE
Soon he shuts his eyes. V.O.: I wanted to put my
thoughts -to order. I was
CAMERA PULLS BACK, dead tired. I slept till
then PAN to M.S. of Michel morning.

(QUICK) FADE-OUT

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STREET AND APARTMENT HOUSE IN CHATILLONI STUDIO SET
DAY - LOCATION SET
30) M.S. (as n. 30) Michem
27) M.L.S. A bus pulls up
sees the girl coming
at the curb.
towards him .
Michel (M.S.) gets off the CAMERA PULLS BACK
bus and goes into the AND PANS TO TWO-SHOT
apartment house (out of (M.S.)
shot). MICHEL: Who are you?
The girl puts a key in the
(camera is in entrance hall) lock and opens the door.
STAIRCASE AND LANDING CHAT/LLON- DAY 31) M.S. Michel does not
LOCATION SET
go inside , but remains
standing in front of the
28) M.L.S. Michel (into
half-open door. MICHEL: How is she?
shot) reaches third floor V.O.: I hadn't seen my
landing.
mother in over a month. I 32) M.S. Jeanne. JEANNE: Not well. She
was hesitant.
PAN. worries a lot.

33) M.S. (as N. 33) Michel MICHEL: She's destitute!


and stops (in M.S.). He is
hesitant. He hears a Aoor
34) M.S. (as n. 34) Jeanne. JEANNE: She has so few
open on the floor below.
He leans over the needs. She's not a
balustrade and sees ... demanding person. It's you
she needs.
35) M.S. (as n. 35) Michel
29) M.L.S .. .. a girl (16-17 takes some bills out of his
years old) coming out of pocket.
her apartment onto the se-
cond floor landing. Her lit- 36) M.S . (as n . 36) Jeanne. JEANNE: Aren't you
tle sister (9-10 years old) coming in? Aren't you
tries to follow and she GIRL: Wait! I've got the going to say hello?
shooes her back inside. key.
37) M.S . (as n. 37) Michel MICHEL: Will you please
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A suburb of Paris holds the bills out to her. give her this money?

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...

38) M.S. (as n. 38) Jeanne ' MICHEL: I'm out of work.
JEANNE: Why don't you 43) M.S. Michel (3/.i rear
takes them . give it to her yourself? Are view) and Jacques (facing I'll take any kind of work.
you embarrassed? camera) at counter. Have you got any address?
39) M.S. (as n. 39) Michel
leaves Jeanne rather brus- MICHEL: Good-bye, JACQUES: To line your
quely - PAN- and starts Jeanne. pocket with?
back down the stairs.
44) M.S . Michel (facing MICHEL: This is serious.
camera)
40) M.S. (as n. 40) Jeanne JEANNE: You'll be back?
takes a step forward and JACQUES: O.K., I don't
45) M.S. Jacques (facing
leans over the balustrade. mind ... One more
camera) takes a piece of
paper and a fountain pen time .. .
41) M.S. Michel, seen from
out of his pocket.
behind, continues down the JACQUES (writing): You're
steps (fairly briskly MICHEL: Yes, yes. clever with your hands.
Bending over the marble-
without turning around). You deserve better, of
top counter, he quickly
scribbles down some ad- course. You have to learn
(SLOW) DISSOLVE to be patient, to be satis-
dresses.
fied with what you're of-
fered . That way you can
BOULEVARD SAINT-MICHEL (PLACE MEDICIS) become the proud owner of
and CAFE MAHIEU (NIGHT) a new suit and a smashing

tie.
42) M.S. Seen through the V.O.: Jacques was a good
glassed-in terrasse, Michel fellow, upright and He waves his tie about and
comes across the sidewalk resourceful. I'd been looks up at Michel.
looking for someone inside avoiding him of late, but
the cafe. that evening ... 46) M.S . (as n. 46) Michel
is not listening and his
Michel (facing camera, gaze is elsewhere (over Jac- V.O.: I'd been looking at
M.S.) sees Jacques (off- ques ' shoulder). him for some time without
screen) at the counter. He being able to place him.
comes in. He holds out his hand to Like a fool, I held out my
Commissaire B. hand.
(QUICK) DISSOLVE

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CAMERA PULLS BACK 51) M.S. Michel MICHEL: Me?
AND PANS REVEALING
COMMISSAIRE anf fram- 52) M.S . (as n. 51) Com- COMMISSAIRE: Let's hear
ing the two of them in M.S. MICHEL: You recognized missaire. it.
me?
(QUICK) DISSOLVE 53) M.S. (as n. 53) Michel. MICHEL: You've read it
and heard it a hundred
47) M.L.S. Jacques and times. It's nothing new.
V.O.: It must seem that I
Commissaire B (I) leave
was being thoughtless and
the counter, each carrying 54) M.S. (as 54) Commis- COMMISSAIRE: Let's hear
rash. But what did I have
his glass, and sit down (in to fear? saire. it anyway.
M.S.) at a table (in fore-
ground). 55) M.S. (as n. 55) Michel. MICHEL: Well, why
shouldn't capable,
(The Commissaire is facing \ intelligent men, especially
the camera, Jacques is in if they have talent or
% front view, Michel in 3~ genius, and are therefore
JACQUES: And are there
rear view). indispensible to society,
many thieves?
instead of having to lead
COMMISSAIRE: A great aimless lives, be allowed,
many. Many different in certain instances, to
kinds, an infinite variety. break the law ...
48) M.S. Jacques, over
JACQUES: All thefts are 56) M.S. (as n . 56) Com- COMMISSAIRE: It sounds
Commissaire's shoulder. equally serious. Sometimes missaire. unfeasible to me ... And
it's excusable in short. If dangerous.
you're driven by property.
57) M.S. (as n. 57) Michel. 1 MICHEL: Society would
49) M.S. Commissaire
COMMISSAIRE: True. have everything to gain .
50) M.S. (as n. SO) Jacques JACQUES: Can't one 58) M.S. (as n . 58) Com-
.I imagine some thefts being missaire.
COMMISSAIRE: A kind of
official permit, in short.
tolerated, accepted? (He
turned to look at Michel). 59) M.S. (as n. 59) Michel. MICHEL: Not exactly.
. You have a whole theory
about that. 60) M.S. (as n . 60) Com· COMMISSAIRE: And who
(I) And Michel as well. This is no doubt an error in missaire. is to distinguish these
original script. superior men from the
others?
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61) M.S. (as n . 61) Michel. MICHEL: They themselves. CAFE MAHIEU (TERRASSE)- NIGHT
Their own consciences.
67) M.S. Michd (back lo
62) M.S . (as n. 62) Com- COMMISSAIRE: Do you camera) leaves cafe, with JACQUES: Are you going
missaire. know anyone who doesn't Jacques following him. to explain to me?
consider himself superior? They come through the
door.
63) M.S. (as n . 63) Michel. MICHEL: Don't worry,
Michel turns around and MICHEL: But I just
they'd only want a taste of
stops (on terrasse) explained everything to
it, then they'd stop.
you!
64) M.S . (as n . 64) Com- COMMISSAIRE: One 68) M.S. Jacques (uver •
missaire. Michel's shoulder) . JACQUES: They admitted
doesn't stop, I can tell you
they were wrong. They
that . . . A kind of useful
thief, in short a apologized.
benefactor of society. Why
69) M.S. Michel (cJl'er Jac- MICHEL: Of course.
my dear sir, that would be
lflle 's shoulder) .
turning the world upside
JACQUES: It's hateful just
down!
70) M.S. (as n . 70) Jacques . the same. But you should
MICHEL: Since it's already have kept still! Why put
65) M.S. (as n . 65) Michel.
ideas into his head? . . Or
upside down, that might
put it right side up! weighed your words, at
least.
66) M.S. (as n. 66) Com-
missaire glances sharply at 71) M.S . (as n . 71) Michel. MICHEL: In the first place,
Michel, gets up, and calls I'd like to point out that it
to the waiter. was you who forced me to
talk, and in the second
(QUICK) DISSOLVE place it's of no importance
whatsoever. Let's have
those addresses .. .
72) M.S. (as n . 72) Jacques
takes the list of addresses
out of his pocket and
hands it to Michel.

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1/LOCATION SET WITH He looks thoughtful. (Silence)
EXTRAS (after 2 o'clock in
the morning). Several passengers pass in (Footsteps of passengers
front of him (out-of-focus coming onto platform).
CAMERA PULLS BACK silhouettes).
and PANS to two-shot. V.O.: On the other hand I
couldn't stand the idea of
2/LOCATION SET WITH going back to my room.
REAL CROWD
(More and more footsteps.
He takes the list of ad-
M.S. of Michel and Jac- JACQUES: Will you go? Sound of a train approach-
dresses out of his pocket
ques. They walk away. ing in the tunnel)
and glances at it.
(QUICK) FADE-OUT V.O.: I'd go.
He gets up suddenly.
METRO ENTRANCE- STAIRS- DAY (Roar of train)
(QUICK) DISSOLVE
73) M.S. Michel comes
quickly down the steps ( ~ METRO CARRIAGE (MOVING)
front view) and goes into
the metro(~ rear view) 75) M.S . Michel(~ rear (Sound of train)
view) stands facing a pick-
(PAN) pocket who holding an V.O.: How was it that I
open newspaper in front of found myself face to face
(QUICK) DISSOLVE his face and pretending to with a man whose strange
read it gradually moves behaviour was such that I
METRO PLATFORM closer to his prey . could not take my eyes off
of him?
74) M.S. Michel(~ front (Sound of train moving
view) sits down on a bench. away in tunnel). 76) M.S. Michel (facing (Sound of train)
camera), with his eyes
V.O.: So what if I did earn glued to the pickpocket.
a little money .. . Was that
what I needed? Did I really 77) M.S. The pick-pocket is
pin any hopes on this job- now holding his open
hunting? newspaper under his

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prey's chin. He is waiting CAMERA. PULLS BACK
for the right moment. cmd PANS to: Michel (in
M.S.) as, having laid news-
The train comes into the paper and notebook on
station. Some passengers table, he takes off his
get up. There is some jost- (Squeaking of brakes) jacket. He puts it on a
ling. hanger which he hangs on

CAMERA DOLLIES IN on
the window hasp .
.
the pickpocket's news- 79) M.L.S. (direct match)
paper and hands as they
suddenly fold the paper Seen through the room's
and- PAN- follows them half-open (CAMERA in
(in C. U.) to the carriage hallway) Michel comes for-
door which opens allowing (Crowd's footsteps) ward, glances (in M.S.) up (Silence)
the pickpocket to make his and down the deserted
getaway. hallway, pushes the door
to shut it.
DISSOLVE
80) M.L.S. (direct match)
MICHEL'S ROOM - DAY
, Michel latches the door
78) C.U. Above the table, (CAMERA inside room) and
covered with books and returns to the jacket (in
notebooks, is a folded M.S.). On his way, he picks
newspaper held in Michel's up the newspaper and the
hand. He spreads his notebook.
fingers.
(CAMERA trucks forward
to a close-up of newspaper
The other hand, open and a
and Michel's hands).
bit further down, catches
1: the notebook (the size of a They are holding the paper
wallet) which slides down by its edges, between
between the sheets of the thumb and index. The last
newspaper. V.O.: Of course, the wallet two fingers of the right
was underneath (1) hand dip into the pocket in V.O.: How should I take
an attempt to grasp the hold of it? Which fingers
(1) The placing of this line in the original script is so
odd that a typing mistake seems probable (tr.'s note) notebook ... should I use?

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DISSOLVE The train comes to a halt.
Passengers get off, passing
METRO CARRIAGE (TRAIN MOVING) in front of him .
81) C.U. The open news- (Sound of train) 85) M.L.S. (Camera on plat-
paper held in Michel's
form)
hands(~ rear view) moves V.O.: I knew perfectly well
slowly towards passenger's it wouldn't come to me (Direct match). The
chin (facing camera). overnight. passengers get off (seen
from plat form). Others get (Passengers' footsteps)
The passenger gives Michel on. Among them , a certain
a blank look. (Sound of train) passenger ...

82) M.S. Michel (facing V.O.: My hands shook and 86) M.S. (direct match)
camera) inadvertently so did the newspaper ... I
meets the man 's gaze, and had the feeling that every- The passenger takes his
he immediately looks one was looking at me ... s tand, leaning a low parti- (Doors closing, whistle,
away. His gaze returns to Someone was going to cry tion (Michel off-screen). train starting, train
the newspaper and out and raise the alarm . running).
pretends to be reading. 87) M.S. Michel glances
briefly at the passenger
, Suddenly the passenger (in and moves gradually
foreground) makes an towards him , unfolding his (Train running)
abrupt movement. (Train- Brakes) newspaper.

83) M.S. (direct match) (CAMERA follows him un·


til newspaper is in C. U.)
The passenger turns
around abruptly towards a 88) M.S. The passenger
seat and sits down . looks up at him .

84) M.S. (as n. 82) Michel 89) M.S. Michel, his eyes
stops reading. The hand (Brakes- Train stops in focused on the newspaper, V.O.: My heart was ready
holding the newspaper station -doors open) pretends to be reading. He to burst.
drops to his side. is waiting for his chance.
(Sound of brakes)
(CAMERA PULLS BACK on (Passengers' footsteps) We see (behind him)
this movement). passengers leaving their
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seats to get off. There is a He gets up immediately
bit of jostling. Michel is and vanishes into the
shoved against the crowd.
passenger . . . Suddenly he (out of shot)
folds the newspaper in half
and turns towards the exit. (Sound of opening doors). METRO ENTRANCE AND BOULEVARD

90) M.L.S. (CAMERA on 92) M.S . Michel in the (Passengers ' footsteps.
platform) crowd at the metro exit. Street noises. Cars).

(Direct match) He comes up the stairs V.O.: That first successful


Just as the doors are open,; towards the camera (PAN) attempt was encouraging
ed, a split second before a nd walks away with his even though it owed more
the train comes to a stand- back to the camera. to luck than skill.
still, Michel, carrying his
folded newspaper, hops on- (Passengers ' footsteps). FADE-OUT
to the platform.
CAFE MAHIEU AND BOULEVARD - NIGHT
(CAMERA PANS an instant
through the crowd with 93) M.S . Michel is sitting
him, then stops.) on the glassed-in terrasse .
He glances towards the
(He goes out of shot). door.

91) M.S. Michel (into shot) 94) M.L.S. The Com-


steps out of the stream of missaire, with Jacques
passengers and sits down ·(Doors closing. right behind him, leaves
on a bench. The last Whistle the cafe. The Commissaire
passenger goes past him. Train starting waves good-bye to Jacques
Michel glances about to Sound of train in tunnel a nd walks away .
make sure no one is wat- Passengers' footsteps.)
ching him. Then, hiding Jacques heads toward
what he is doing, he takes Michel (out of shot).
out a wallet, removes the
two bills it contains and 95) M.S. Michel. MICHEL: Well?
drops it under the bench.

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Jacques comes up to him JACQUES: He didn't automatic gate leading to
(into shot) and sits down swallow your social the platform. (A train is
(~ rear view). theories. It's you he's standing in the station).
interested in.
The gate opens. Train starting)
MICHEL: Did he ask you
any questions? Michel steps out onto plat- (Sound of train roaring
form. away into tunnel)
96) M.S. Jacques (facing JACQUES: Don't worry, he
camera). (Passengers' footsteps)
knows what sort of person
you are now, it's all
V.O.: I'd taken great care
cleared up . .. What about
to vary my routes, never
your job-hunting?
traveling twice in
97) M.S. Michel (facing succession on the same
MICHEL: I need nothing.
camera) stands up. line.
JACQUES: Nothing? How (QUICK) DISSOLVE
(CAMERA PULLS BACK can you live on nothing?
with his movement to two- Where are you going?
shot in M.S.) 100) M.S. (Camera is on
Don't leave! platform)
Jacques tries to hold
A train draws into the sta- (Sound of brakes)
Michel back by the sleeve. (Sound of doors opening)
tion . The doors open.
Michel walks away (PAN)
Michel jumps onto plat- (Silence)
form and vanishes through (Passengers' footsteps)
FADE-OUT
crowd.
V.O.: I kept it up for a
98) M.S. Michel appears, whole week. My pickings
coming down the last en- were slim, sometimes nil,
trance steps and starting (Michel's and passengers' and certainly not worth the
across the ticket-booth footsteps) risk.
level (out of shot).

99) M.S. (Into shot) Michel CAMERA PANS with


goes down a short flight of (Doors slam shut - Michel, then stops moving.
stairs and pauses with the Whistle-
crowd in front of an (He goes out of shot)
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30
101) M.L.S. Michel (into he takes a wallet out of his
shot) walks briskly to the pocket and puts it into the
bottom of a narrow, short other man's hands.
flight of steps jammed
with an ascending crowd. (CAMERA PULLS BACK
Michel pauses (in M.S.), and PANS on movement to
then worms his way two-shot of Michel and
through the crowd (out of (Passengers' footsteps) passenger).
shot).
Michel passes through the
102) M.L.S. Michel (into crowd. He moves away
shot) appears (facing slowly at first then starts
to run as fast as he can. He (Michel's footsteps.
camera) coming up the
vanishes (back to camera) Street noises, cars).
broad main staircase to the (Passengers' footsteps)
street. He slows down, a (Street-sounds, cars) around a street corner.
passenger is following him,
catches up with him (in FADE-OUT
M.S.). Michel pulls up
short. PASSENGER: Give me MICHEL'S ROOM AND HALLWAY- NIGHT
back my wallet.
The passenger stands fac- 1OS) M.S. Michel leaves his
in,g him (-% rear view) on room, pulls his door (no
the steps. lock) shut behind him and V.O.: During the days that
goes down the hall (out of followed I stayed in my
Michel returns his gaze shot). room - out of an instinc-
and says nothing. tive sense of caution,
perhaps - going out only
103) M.S. The passenger for noon and evening
(facing camera) confronts meals.
Michel (-% rear view).
(Around and behind him PASSENGER: Do you want
we see passers-by me to call the police? MICHEL'S APARTMENT HOUSE- STAIRCASE AND
stopping). ENTRANCE

104) M.S. (as n. 102) Michel 106) M.S. Michel (into shot)
(facing camera) is still star- comes down the last steps
ing back at him. Suddenly, and sees . ..

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107) M.L.S .... a man stan- He gets up suddenly, look- (Footsteps approaching).
ding on the sidewalk in ing at the door.
front of the door (both
sides of the double-door 11 0) M.S. Preceded by the
are open). He is looking up sound of his footsteps , Jac-
ques pauses on the thres- JACQUES: I ran into this
and down the fran t of the
hold. Jeanne is standing young lady ... she was
building.
behind him . looking for you.
108) M.S. (as n. 106)
Ill) M.S . (as n . 109) Michel MICHEL: What is it,
Michel, at the bottom of
(in room's semi-darkness) Jeanne?
the stairs. He watches the
man for a second, then
112) M.S. (as n. 110) Jac- JACQUES: Why don't you
goes back upstairs (out of
ques and Jeanne. turn on the light?
shot).

Jacques takes a step into (to Jeanne): Look where the


HALLWAY AND MICHEL'S ROOM - NIGHT
the room and flicks the great man lives! Just look
lightswitch. Light floods at this dirty hole!
109) M.S . Michel (into shot)
comes to the door of his the room .
room, pushes it open and
goes inside. (He does not Jeanne hangs back a little,
• close the door completely in the hallway.
behind him). He does not
turn on the light. He takes 113) M.S. (as n . 111) MICHEL: It's my mother,
a few steps towards the Michel. isn't it? Quick, tell me!
window (glow from the
street), comes back to the · 114) M.S. (as n. 112) JEANNE: She's seriously
bed, remains standing for Jeanne and Jacques ill, and she keeps saying:
a second, motionless in the why did he come all the
semi-darkness, then sits way to my door and then
down . turn back?

(Seen through the door, JACQUES: You did that?


still ajar. Camera in hall-
way). JEANNE: You've got to
(Footsteps on staircase, come!
He pricks up his ears. then in hallway).

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34
MICHEL'S APARTMENT HOUSE- ENTRANCE-
115) M.S. (as 113) Michel. MICHEL: Yes ... later,
NIGHT
later ... Thank you,
Jeanne.
119) M.L.S. (Camera is on
116) M.S. (as n. 114) sidewalk)
JEANNE (leaving): You
Jeanne and Jacques . will come?
Jeanne starts to leave. Michel (into shot) comes
out of door, looks (in M.S.) (Street noises - cars)
JACQUES: Do you want me
first right, then left . ..
to go?

117) M.S. Michel takes a 120) M.L.S .... the man,


MICHEL: Fine, get going. (Street noises- cars)
step towards Jacques . standing by the curb a bit
Jeanne will take you there.
further down the street,
(CAMERA PULLS BACK looking at him.
JACQUES: You egotist!
AND PANS to two-shot). And you claim to love your
The man suddenly turns
mother!
Michel glances out into the around and walks away
hallway at Jeanne moving (slowly).
MICHEL: More than
away . myself. But leave, please
121) M.S. Michel starts
leave, go away. (Street noises - cars)
walking (in the same direc-
tion as the man).
JACQUES: You're a funny
chap.
Jacques hurries out of the (FOLLOW SHOT -% FRONT
room. (CAMERA PANS VIEW)
(Jacques ' footsteps in
with him) hallway, then on stairs)
122) M.S. The man walk-
118) M.S. Michel. one foot ing.
(Jacques' distant steps in
in the room, one foot in the the stairway).
(FRONT SHOT -% FRONT (Street noises- cars)
hallway, turns out the light
(in the room). He waits a VIEW)
Silence.
few seconds, then starts to
walk away. Michel (into shot) catches MICHEL: Who are you?
up with him. They walk What do you want with
(CAMERA PANS, then stops side by side. me?
moving. He goes out of
shot in M.S.)

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36
The man smiles and goes He reappears inside cafe.
on his way (out of shot). He goes up to the man and
Michel slows down and sits down on the stool next
stops. (CAMERA STOPS to him.
MOVING). He sees ...
(Seen through window)
123) M.L.S . .. .the man get- (Street noises, cars)
ting on a bus. (QUICK) DISSOLVE

124) M.S . Michel suddenly (Street noises - cars) ROCHECOUART CAFE- NIGHT
decides to follow him (out
of shot) 127) Michel and the man
are sitting side by side at
125) M.S. Michel (into shot) the bar. They empty their
(in M.S.) runs(~ rear view) glasses, hop down from
after the bus it is pulling their stools, walk a few
V.O.: I had to find out.
away and jumps onto the steps, pause by a table (in V.O.: A quarter of an hour
rear platform. foreground). later, we were friends.
(Street noises, cars, bus)
(QUICK) DISSOLVE The man (in M.S.) picks up (Distant street noises, car)
an object from the table
, BOULEVARD ROCHECHOUART AND CAFE-NIGHT (brioche, hard-boiled egg?)
and with a swift movement
126) Michel, walking along conceals it inside his
the sidewalk, comes up to jacket. His empty hand
the cafe window and drops back to the table.
glances (in ~ rear view) in-
side. He sees the man go- (CAMERA DOLLIES IN V.O.: His skill and
ing towards the bar and and PANS to C. U. of hand). dexterity were extra-
sitting on a stool. Michel ordinary.
moves away from the win-
dow (out of shot). (Street noises, cars)
DISSOLVE (or FADE-OUT)
(CAMERA REMAINS MO-
TIONLESS)

38 39
ROCHECHOUART CAFE- DAY 130) C.U .... and reappears
at bottom of jacket.
128) C.U. The man's (Pick- Michel's left hand catches
pocket's) right hand grasps it, transfers it to other
(two-finger hold) Michel's hand, then to Pickpocket's
wallet in his inner jacket hand (in C. U.)
pocket; holds it for a se-
cond above the pocket, (QUICK) DISSOLVE
then drops it. It slips back
into the jacket and disap- (Distant street noises, cars) 131) C.U. The Pickpocket's
pears. left hand, then his right.
V.O.: It was in that little Limbering-up exercises on
129) C.U. Bottom of Rochechouart cafe that I the corner of the
Michel's jacket. learned most of my tricks. marbletop table. Then the
He taught them to me with right hand manipulates a
Slipping under the jacket, unhesitating willingness. coin, passing it from finger
the wallet appears again to finger. Finally, the hand
below it. The Pickpocket's (Distant street noises, cars). picks up a glass on the V.O.: I had to do finger
left hand catches it, trans- table and the Pickpocket exercises for greater
fers it to the other hand. raises it to his lips. flexibility.

• (CAMERA PULLS BACK (CAMERA PULLS BACK


AND PANS to two-shot (in and PANS to M.S.).
M.S.) of Michel and pick-
pocket). He glances at Michel's
hands.
He repeats the movement
again (in M.S.) 132) Michel's hands doing
the limbering up exercises
(CAMERA DOLLIES IN on the edge of the table,
and PANS to C. U. of then, with the two-finger
Michel's right hand) hold, picking up a wallet
(lying on the table).
Michel's right hand grasps
(two finger grip) the wallet, 133) M.S. Pickpocket gets
slides it out of pocket, up, looks away from
drops it. Wallet disap- Michel's hands and
pears ... towards pin-ball machine.
40 41
134) M.L.S. (direct match) 138) C.U. (CAMERA in
Pickpocket leaves table room. Direct match)
and comes (in M.S.) up to
pin-ball machine (in fore- Michel's foot trods on the
ground). He slips coin into (Sound of machine) sheet of paper as he comes
machine. through the door and turns
to swing it to, hook it shut
135) Michel is still exercis- and switch on the light. (Michel's footsteps)
ing his hands. Then he gets The paper is suddenly lit
up and goes over to Pick- (Sound of machine) up.
pocket (out of shot).
(CAMERA DOLLIES IN
136) M.S. Pickpocket (fac- even closer for B.C. U. just
ing camera) playing pin- V.O.: The pin-ball machine as Michel's feet leave shot).
ball machine. was good for the reflexes.
We read the words: "Come (Michel's footsteps as he
Michel (into shot in ~ rear quickly, Jeanne". moves about his room).
view) comes up to him and
looks over his shoulder. DISSOLVE

DISSOLVE 139) C.U . The piece of


paper lit by the light of
HALLWAY AND MICHEL'S ROOM - NIGHT DAY.

137) M.L.S. Michel appears Michel's feet (into shot)


in the hallway and heads step on it as he unhooks
toward the door to his V.O.: I only went back to the door and opens it to
room. my room to sleep. leave.

As he takes the last few 140) C.U. (Direct match)


steps, CAMERA TILTS (CAMERA in hallway)
DOWN his legs and
COMES TO A STOP on a Michel's feet pivot about,
piece of paper, slipped then remain motionless
under the door. At this while his hand (into shot)
point, the door is pushed grasps piece of paper.
open by Michel as he
enters his room.
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42
Jeanne (into shot)(~ rear
(CAMERA PULLS BACK
AND PANS with sheet of
view) takes a step in his
paper as Michel (in M.S.) V.O.: How long had it been direction.
picks it up and looks at it.) there? I'd stepped on it
He glances at her briefly,
without noticing.
then his gaze returns to
He pulls the door open,
the bed in which his
and hurries out and away.
mother is lying.
Then he starts running.
He suddenly falls to his
DISSOLVE
knees (in M.S.) takes his
mother's hands in his and
STAIRCASE AND THIRD FLOOR LANDING
presses them to his lips.
(CHATILLON)
(QUICK) DISSOLVE
141) M.S. Michel climbs (Distant street noises,
last stairs, gradually slow- trucks, cars)
143) M.S. Michel (~ rear
ing down. (Distant street noises,
view) is sitting at his
mother's bedside(~ front trucks, cars).
On the landing, he pauses
for breath, turns key in view).
lock, opens door.
(Michel's face is better lit
than his mother's). She
He goes into hallway (out
speaks clearly but in a low MOTHER: I know you
of shot).
voice. don't like to answer
questions, so I won't ask
HALLWAY AND ROOM (CHATILLION)- DAY any . You don't have to tell
me about your private
142) M.L.S. Michel (facing affairs. I used to think I
camera) (into shot) appears
just bored you. Now I
at the bedroom door understand everything.
(leading directly into (Distant street sounds,
hallway). trucks, cars). MICHEL: (looks at her)
144) M.S. Michel (facing
The bed is in the camera) Behind him we set MOTHER (off): Your friend
foreground. The room is in Jeanne moving about the came to see me. He talked
semi-darkness (closed shut- room. to me about you.
ters).

44 45
MICHEL: About me? What CHATILLON CHURCH- DAY
did he say) Did he speak ill
of me? 151) M.S. Michel(~ rear
view) is sitting next to
145) M.S. Mother (facing MOTHER: I would never Jeanne with his head
camera) have stood for that. He down. (Catafalque in back- (Libera sung)
likes you and admires you. ground)

146) M.S. (as n. 144) Michel MICHEL: (looks at her) He turns (facing camera)
(facing camera) towards Jeanne and looks
up. His face is streaming
147) M.S. (as n. 145) MOTHER: I was worried, with tears.
Mother but I was wrong. Gifted
(facing camera) and intelligent as you are, 152) M.S. Jeanne (Jacques
you'll come out on top is next to her) turns
when you want to. towards Michel and looks (Libera)
at him.
148) M.S. (as n. 146) Michel MICHEL: I want to now. I
(facing camera) want to make you happy. 153) M.S. Michel looks
away from Jeanne and gets
down on his knees. (34 rear (Libera)
149) M.S. (as n. 145) MOTHER: But I'm going
away, child. We're going to view)
be separated.
(CAMERA PULLS BACK
150) M.S. Michel (facing MICHEL: No, no. AND PANS)
camera) Tomorrow you'll be better.
In a few days you'll be on The catafalque is seen in
He bends over his mother your feet. The doctor says its entirety.
and takes her hands in his. so. Isn't that true, Jeanne?
I know it is. I'm sure it is. DISSOLVE
(CAMERA PULLS BACK
AND PANS to two-shot)

(Jeanne in background).

DISSOLVE

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46
HALLWAY AND MICHEL'S ROOM- DAY 160) M.S. Jeanne (reverse JEANNE: Don't you believe
angle) in anything?
154) M.L.S. Michel and
Jeanne are on their way to 161) M.S. (as n. 159) MICHEL: I believed in God
Michel's room. He is carry- once, Jeanne. For three
ing a small valise and a minutes.
package, while she has 162) M.S. (as n. 160)
several bundles tied Jeanne glances at Michel,
together. turns and starts to leave.

155) M.S. (Direct match) (CAMERA PANS with her)


(CAMERA in room)
FADE-OUT
They enter the room and
put what they are carrying BANK- LOBBY - DAY
on the bed. Michel sits MICHEL: There, that's all
down on edge of bed. 163) M.L.S. (Camera inside
that's left. Papers, letters (Silence)
Jeanne starts back towards and a few snapshots. It's lobby)
the door (out of shot). all over. And there's no
A man appears in the door- (Man's footsteps)
way back. Are you leaving?
way. He enters(~ front
You're always in a hurry.
view)and crosses the lobby
156) M.S. Jeanne, standing JEANNE: I have to collect (goes out of shot).
in the doorway. my sister at school.
164) M.S. A cashier's win-
157) M.S. (as n. 155) dow. Man (into shot) comes
MICHEL: Do you believe (Man's footsteps)
Michel, seated. we'll be judged? up to the window (~ rear
view)
158) M.S. (as n. 156) JEANNE: Yes. But you
(On a movement which the
have nothing to fear for
159) M.S. Michel gets up man makes to his left, put-
her, she was faultless.
and takes one step toward ting down his briefcase,
Jeanne (who thus enters MICHEL: How will we be CAMERA PULLS BACK
the shot(~ rear view) judged? According to some AND PANS revealing Pick-
system of laws? What pocket from Rochechouart
system? It's ridiculous. cafe).

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48
From his movements we side to avoid Michel.
gather that the man (back Michel lets him go by (Street sounds)
to camera) is taking his without making a move.
wallet out of his pocket His face is tense. V.O.: I lost my nerve. I was
and putting into it the bills flustered. He got away.
which an employee is coun- Pickpocket (into shot) goes
ting out to him behind the (Silence)
rapidly past him, he turns
window. He puts the wallet and follows him (out of
back in his pocket. shot in ~ rear view).
(Distant street sounds)

Pickpocket takes out hand- CHAMPS EL YSEES or GRANDS BOULEY ARD -


kerchief and puts it into NEWSSTAND
right inside jacket pocket.
He glances at . .. 169) M.S. Man (into shot)
goes up to rack, takes out
165) M.S. Michel, sitting a paper, pays and moves (Street noises, cars)
on a bench. He catches (Silence) away. He pauses in M.S.,
Pickpocket's glance. He opens the paper.
gets up and looks at the (Man's footsteps)
man. 170) M.S. Michel on
sidewalk, in the crowd. (Street sounds)
166) M.L.S. Man crosses
the lobby, heading for 171) M.S. Pickpocket, stan-
door. (Man's footsteps) ding on sidewalk a bit fur-
ther on. Glances at Michel, (Street noises)
167) M.S. Michel, his gaze then at man.
fastened on man, starts to
move ... (out of shot) (Man's footsteps) 172) Man folds his
newspaper and heads
168) M.S. The doorway. toward the curb (out of (Street noises)
shot)
Michel (into shot) reaches
the exit just before the 17 3) M.S. A taxi is stan-
man, turns and is face to ding by the curb.
face with him, blocking his
(Street noises)
path. The man steps to one

51
50
The man (into shot) goes
(in ~ rear view) toward the
ROCHECHOUART CAFE - DAY
taxi . Pickpocket (into shot)
gets there first, opens (Distant street noises, cars)
17 6) Michel (facing
door, puts one foot in car.
camera) and Pickpocket (3.4
Man puts his hand on his
rear view) are sitting at a
shoulder and pulls him V.O. We divided up
table, playing cards.
back . . . the take playing
Michel jots down some
figure on a piece of paper cards. That way we
174) C.U. (direct match) could handle the
with a pencil, takes some
Man's hand swings money openly and
bills out of his pocket and
Pickpocket around; without apprehen-
hands them to the
Pickpocket turns toward sion.
him as he does so, slips his Pickpocket.
hand into man 's jacket- (Distant street noises)
177) M.S. (Reverse angle)
pocket. (Street noises) Pickpocket puts bills in
pocket, shuffles cards and
Pickpocket steps aside to PICKPOCKET: Next time
motions to a man sitting
let man get into cab, and we'll play three-handed
next to him to come closer.
as he does so, his left hand instead of two.
catches the wallet below
178) M.S. The man comes
the jacket.
closer.
•17 5) M.S. (direct match) (Distant street noises-
(CAMERA PULLS BACK
Michel (into shot) comes up cars)
AND PANS to include the
from behind and
three of them in the shot).
Pickpocket slips him the (Street noises, cars)
wallet.
First Pickpocket deals
three hands. PICKPOCKET: Get it?
(CAMERA PULLS BACK
AND PANS with him). MICHEL: I've got it.
The three players pick up
their cards. V.O.: We didn't waste
He gets into next cab in
line; it makes a U-turn and words. And during all the
Michel(~ rear view) starts time we worked together,
sets out in the opposite
to play. he never knew any more
direction . (Cab starting up)
about me than I did about
DISSOLVE him.
(Distant street noises, cars)
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53
HALLWAY AND MICHEL'S ROOM- NIGHT 182) M.S. Michel and Jac-
ques.
179) M.S . Michel comes
across the hall, heading for Michel gives him back the MICHEL: Where did you
his room . The door is part- book. get it?
ly open. He can see the (Michel's footsteps)
light through the opening. Michel moves away. JACQUES: Right there on
the table.
180) M.S. (direct match) (CAMERA moves in on
(CAMERA is in room) (Distant street sounds, cars) movement to frame Jac-
ques alone, in M.S.)
Michel (Facing camera) JACQUES (off-screen): Ah,
pushes open door and there you are! Would you Jacques leafs through JACQUES: You have to
pauses on threshold. mind telling me . . . book. admit, though, that those
thieves were a lazy, under-
He steps foreward . handed lot .. .
2(Camera pulls back and
pans on movement reveal- 183) M.S. Michel standing MICHEL: Barrington
ing:) at other end of table (in wasn't lazy. He often sat
front of window) up all night reading and
Jacques sitting on edge of cultivating his mind.
' bed with a book in his MICHEL: You've been
hands. going through my things? 184) M.S. (as n. 182) Jac- JACQUES: In order to at-
ques. tract rich people and make
(He has taken off his jacket friends with them. He stole
and it is lying on the bed from his friends .
behind him). 185) Jacques' jacket, lying
on bed. Michel picks it up JACQUES: Do you think
Michel takes the book out in such a way that the in- that's right?
of his hands. side pocket gapes open. He
glances into the pocket. (Semi-silence) (sic)
181) C.U. The book. Then quickly looks up at
Jacques.
"THE PRINCE OF PICK-
POCKETS" "The life and 186) M.S. Jacques (~ rear
adventures of John Barr- view) turns suddenly
ington 1735-1795" towards Michel and their
gazes meet.

54 55
(CAMERA PULLS·BACK BOULEVARD AND CAFE MAHIEU
AND PANS to)
191) M.S. Michel and Jac-
Jacques and Michel just as MICHEL: Come on, let's go ques cross through ter-
Michel hands Jacques his out. rasse and enter(~ front (Street noises, cars)
jacket. view)
JACQUES: At least he was
Jacques gets up, puts on courageous. In his day they (QUICK) DISSOLVE
his jacket. Michel (~ rear hung thieves . .. Now, they
view) helps him . just go to jail . . . 192) M.S. Michel and Jac-
ques at pin-ball machine (Jingling of pin-ball
MICHEL: Have you the (in foreground). machine).
187) M.S. Michel (facing slightest idea what jail is
camera) like? Michel (~ rear view) is
operating it.
188) M.S. Jacques (facing JACQUES: I can imagine it.
camera) The Commissaire (entering
MICHEL: You have no shot) passes behind Jac-
189) M.S. (as n. 187) imagination. ques, pauses briefly (facing
camera). He glances at the COMMISSAIRE: Still the
190) M.S. (as n. 188) JACQUES: Can I borrow machine, then at Michel. same opinions?
Jacques picks up book this?
•(from bed). 193) M.S . Michel (facing MICHEL: Still the same.
camera)
Michel anticipates his ac- MICHEL: If you wish.
tion. Glancing at Commissaire
I he watches him move away (Hum of conversation)
(CAMERA PULLS BACK (to counter), then looks (Jingling of pin-ball
AND PANS on movement to back at machine. machine) ·
two-shot)
194) M.S. Commissaire (Hum of conversation)
... and hands him the (facing camera) Jacques
book. Jacques puts it in his and Michel ( ~ rear view) at
pocket. They go our(~ counter.
rear view).

(QUICK) DISSOLVE

5o 57
202) M.S. (as 200) Michel. MICHEL: If I did, you're
COMMISSAIRE: No, no, certainly not the person I'd
my dear sir, I don't care tell.
what you think, 203) M.S. (as 201) Com-
pickpockets, no matter missasire. COMMISSAIRE: Evidently
how artfully they practice not.
their craft, will never He catches sight of the
contribute to human book sticking out of Jac- (Hum of conversation)
progress. ques' pocket. He takes it in
hand. COMMISSAIRE: May I?
195) M.S. Michel (facing MICHEL: I never said they
camera) would. (Hum of conversation)
(CAMERA PANS on move-
ment back to M.S.)
196) M.S. Jacques. JACQUES: That's absurd. COMMISSAIRE: Barring-
He leafs through book. ton .. . Never heard of
197) M.S. Commissaire. COMMISSAIRE: Just one him . Perhaps he was one of
question: do you think that them . . . One of those
there are many of those superior men?
people among them?
He gives book to Michel.
198) M.S. (as 195) Michel. MICHEL: What people?
(CAMERA PULLS BACK MICHEL: Not exactly. But
199) M.S.(as 197) Commis- COMMISSAIRE: Those AND PANS to two-shot in if you'd like to look
saire . who ought to have rights M .S.) (Jacques in back- through it . ..
that are denied to others. ground)
COMMISSAIRE: I have a
MICHEL: How can Michel holds out book to better idea. Come and see
200) M.S . (as 198) Michel : anybody know? They don't m e some morning. And
Commissasire who does
get caught. bring the book.
not take it.

201) M.S. (as 199) Com- COMMISSAIRE: But those


misssaire. Commissaire walks away
people exist, since you say (Back to Camera). Michel
they do. Perhaps you know and Jacques watch him go.
a few such cases. Don't Jacques takes book back
you know just one, some and puts it in his pocket.
special case?
(QUICK) DISSOLVE

59
58
204) M.S. Michel and Jac- MICHEL'S ROOM AND HALLWAY - DAY
ques (facing camera) leav-
ing cafe. They go through MICHEL: Of course he 212) M.S. Michel picks up
door. suspects me. the book from a table
(covered with other books,
Jacques stops. Michel (leav- JACQUES: I can't believe sheets of paper and (Distant street sounds)
ing shot) goes on walking. it. notebooks). He ponders a
moment, then goes out(+~
205) M.S. Michel (Back to MICHEL: You don't have rear view).
camera) turns (facing to believe it. Anyway, so do
camera) to Jacques. you, go on, admit it. (QUICK) DISSOLVE

206) M.S. Jacques. JACQUES: So do I what? CRIMINAL INVESTIGATION DEPARTMENT-


ENTRANCE TO BUILDING- DAY
207) M.S. (as 205) Michel. MICHEL: Nothing.
213) M.S. Michel(~ rear
208) M.S. (as 206) Jacques. JACQUES: What are you view) carrying the book,
going to do? passes under the archway. (St reel noises)
A building directory reads:
209) M.S. (as 207) Michel. MICHEL: He's no fool.
"PETTY LARCENY SQUAD
,210) M.S. (as 208) Jacques. JACQUES: You're a Commissaire Belin
3rd floor to the right"
hundred times smarter
than he is, but don't go.
"VICE SQUAD
211) M.S. Michel tries to Commissaire X
take book out of Jacques' MICHEL: Give it to me ...
3rd floor to the left"
pocket.
JACQUES: No ...
"C.I.D. Superintendant
(Camera pulls back and 2nd floor"
pans on movement to two- MICHEL: Yes ... (taking
shot). the book)
etc ...

Jacques tries to stop him. JACQUES: All right, then


(In and around the glassed-
Michel takes possession of go if it amuses you. It
in reception cubicle, one or
book. looks like you're acquiring
two plain-clothesmen and
a taste for this sort of
two uniformed policemen).
thing. And laugh in his
FADE-OUT face! (QUICK) DISSOLVE
60 61
CORRIDOR "C.I.D." DAY COMMISSAIRE: Of course
218) M.S. (as 216) Com-
missaire looks up at .. . a young writer like
214) Michrel, with book in
Michel. yourself ...
hand, sits waiting on a
bench. The corridor is
219) M.S. (as 217) Michel V.O. : I thought I saw a
rather dark. People come
meets his gaze. He comes glimmer of mockery on his
and go around him.
closer to Commissaire face .
(who thus enters frame)
V.O.: I sat in the waiting and leans over his MICHEL: He devised
room for a long time. I'd shoulder. He turns a few hooks, fishhooks, that he
imagined he would see me pages of the book. slipped into people's
immediately. pockets.
220) C.U. An engraving
A door opens (in showing hooks made by
background) Someone Barrington .
comes towards him. Michel
gets up(~ rear view) 221) M.S. Michel and the
Commissaire leafing COMMISSAIRE: That's
(QUICK) DISSOLVE through the book. certainly out of date.

Michel looks up toward (Sound of footsteps)


•COMMISSAIRE'S OFFICE - DAY
one of the doors . It opens. (Door opening)
215) M.S. Michel(~ front (Distant street noises) He sees ...
view) comes towards the
desk where the Com- 222) M.L.S . . . . a plain-
MICHEL: I brought you
missaire (~ rear view) is the book. clothesman. He comes in
sitting. He holds out book. with a dossier in his hand.
He lays it on
COMMISSAIRE: What
book? Commissaire's desk. He
glances at Michel.
216) M.S. Commissaire COMMISSAIRE: Oh yes ... 223) M.S. Michel and Com-
(facing camera) takes the It had slipped my mind. missaire. Michel meets the
book, opens it. Are you interested in this plainclothesman's gaze,
Barrington? then looks down at book.
(Plainclosthesman's
217) M.S. Michel (facing MICHEL: I'm interested in
camera) footsteps
everything. Door shutting)
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Commissaire opens a COMMISSAIRE: Look ... (CAMERA PULLS BACK MICHEL: Keep it.
drawer and takes out a A Nuremburg cutler made AND PANS to two-shot)
knife with very thin blades, fifteen of these. COMMISSAIRE: Thank
one curved, the other en- you, I don't need it.
ding in a hook.
Michel closes knife, hands
Michel takes the knife it to Commissaire who
which the Commissaire puts it back in drawer.
hands him and, stepping
back from the table Commissaire goes to door (Michel's and
(CAMERA follows him, so leading to corridor and Commissaire 's footsteps)
that Commissaire goes out opens it.
of shot) tests the blade on
the cloth of his jacket. (CAMERA PANS with him,
so that Michel is out of
He looks up at another (Sound of footsteps) shot).
door. He see ... (Opening of door)
CORRIDOR - DAY
224) M.L.S .... another
plainclothesman. He stops 228) M.S. (Direct match)
in doorwawy. He glances (CAMERA in the corridor)
at Michel.
The door opens, Michel (in- COMMISSAIRE
225) M.S. Michel meets to shot), book in hand, (off-screen): See you again.
plainclothesman's gaze. steps out into corridor.
Door closes. Michel walks (Michel's footsteps)
226) M.L.S. (as 224) The away (out of shot)
plainclothesman signals to
the Commissaire with his STAIRCASE "C.I.D."- DAY
eyes.
229) M.S. Michel (into V.O.: Why hadn't I
227) M.S. Commissaire shot), carrying book, comes realised? It was a trap. If I
sees the plainclothesman's slowly down the top steps, hurried, I might still find
signal. He gets up, shuts then hurries down the rest. them in my room.
book, holds it out to COMMISSAIRE: You'll
Michel. have to excuse me. (PAN with him)

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He hurries away(-¥.# rear carrying onto the bed,
view) quickly slides the bed into
the middle of the room,
(QUICK) DISSOLVE and kneels at the base of
the wall (CAMERA PANS
STAIRCASE, HALLWAY AND MICHEL'S ROOM-DAY with him) . He removes a
section of the base-board
230) M.S. Michel (-¥.# front (Distant street noises, cars) and raises a floorboard.
view) carrying book, comes
rapidly up the last steps (Michel's footsteps) (CAMERA MOVES IN Dur-
and slows down on the lan- ing his action to C. U.)
ding . He looks toward the
door to his room. He In a recess we see several
moves forward cautiously wads of bills, a watch ... V.O .: Everything was in its
and on tip-toe (out of shot). proper place.
Michel covers up his
231) Door to room. Michel, hiding place again (C. U.)
carrying book preceded by
the almost inaudible sound (Michel's all but inaudible FADE-OUT
of his footsteps, ap- footsteps)
proaches door on tip-toes BOULEVARD DE LA MADELEINE - DAY
(into shot)(-¥.# rear view).
233) M.S . Michel comes
He cocks his ear. He towards camera, pauses, (Street noises, cars)
pushes door open. He walks away a few steps,
pauses in doorway. comes back, pauses by the
curb (and at a street-
232) M.S. (direct match) corner). He watches the
Michel pauses in doorway. passers-by. He glances (fac-
He looks all around the V.O.: Nothing seemed to ing camera) at . . .
room. He steps into room, have been disturbed.
glances quickly to the 234) M.S . .. .accomplice n.
right, then to the left; he 1. He is doing the same (Street noises, cars)
comes up to table (in thing as Michel, on the op-
foreground), examines it at posite sidewalk. He
great length without glances at . . .
touching a thing, tosses the
book (which he was still

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235) M.S .... accomplish n. (Street noises, cars)
2. He is watching a passer- him, leaping backward at
by who slows down to look the same time. Michel and
at his watch. He follows the passer-by end up on
him a second, then stops to the sidewalk. The passer-
look at ... by moves away, Michel
puts his (closed) right hand (St reel noises, cars)
236) M.S .... Michel (fac- (Street noises, cars) into his pocket (in C.U.)
ing camera). He meets n.
2's gaze. He walks to the (QUICK) DISSOLVE
curb and stands facing,
across the street, the HALLWAY AND MICHEL'S ROOM - DAY
passerby who is now stan-
ding on the opposite side- 240) C.U. Michel's right
walk. Now Michel is wat- hand pulls three wrist-
ching him intently. watches out of his pocket. V.O.: Luck was with me.

237) M.S. The passer-by (Street noises, cars) (CAMERA PULLS BACK
(facing camera) steps off AND PANS on movement to
the sidewalk across the M.S. on Michel.)
way and comes straight
toward Michel. He steps over to the table
• and lays the watches on
238) M.S. Michel (facing (Street noises, cars) the edge (in C. U.)
camera) holds his ground,
waiting for the man. (QUICK). DISSOLVE

239) M.S. The passer-by 241) C.U. A wrist-watch (Michel's footsteps)


(facing camera) is about to strapped to the back of a
set foot on the sidewalk chair. Michel's right hand V.O.: This trick required a
where Michel is standing. (into shot) encircles it. The great deal of dexterity
Michel (~ rear view) steps trick is performed (in C.U.) which admittedly I did not
forward (into shot) and without the assistance of yet possess. I practiced it
blocks his path. Cars come the left hand. A light often.
along and Michel grabs the pressure of the thumb
passer-by by the wrists, slides the strap through
pulling him sharply toward the loop and out of the
buckle. A single finger - the
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middle one - holds the (Silence) Michel pulls door shut
strap to keeping it from (Distant street noises, cars) behind him and leads Jac-
slipping around. ques away. They move off
( -!4 rea.r view).
The unbuckled watch
drops into the palm of (CAMERA follows them an
Michel's hand. Michel gets instant, then stops moving)
up (he has been sitting on (They go out of shot)
the bed), with the watch in
his hand. MICHEL'S APARTMENT HOUSE- ENTRANCE-
DAY
(CAMERA PULLS BACK
AND PANS on movement to 243) M.L.S. Jeanne (facing
M.S. of Michel) camera) is waiting in en-
trance .
He cocks his ear towards
the hallway. He quickly V.O.: It was Sunday. (CAMERA is in entrance
hides the watch under the Jacques and I had made hall, facing street).
mattress. He picks up his plans to go out together.
jacket and opens the door Jeanne was going to join Michel and Jacques (into
(which was hooked shut). us. shot, 3.4 rear view) join her.
They all go out (-!4 rear
' 242) M.S. (Direct match) (Jacques' footsteps) view)
(CAMERA in hallway)
(QUICK) DISSOLVE
Slipping into his jacket,
Michel pauses in doorway. MICHEL: All spruced up, a
He sees Jacques, off- regular beau Brummel! ... NEUILLY FAIRGROUNDS- TABLES IN FRONT OF
screen. Where's Jeanne? SMALL SIDEWALK CAFE - DAY

Jacques (entering shot) JACQUES: She's waiting 244) M.S. Michel (facing (Different kinds of music,
comes up to Michel. downstairs. camera), Jacques (-!4 front noise of fair)
view) and Jeanne (-!4 rear
(CAMERA PULLS BACK view) are sitting at a table.
AND PANS on movement
to two-shot) Behind them, fair is
reflected in windows.

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Jacques gets up and goes
(CAMERA PULLS BACK
into cafe. Michel turns to a
AND PANS to M.S.)
nearby table and glances at JEANNE: You're . .. pays the waiter and
a man wearing a gold depressed. starts off (toward the side-
watch (and at the watch
itself). shows).
MICHEL: No.
248) M.S. Michel sees him
245) M.S. Jeanne (facing JEANNE: You're a day- lleave . He lays a coin
camera) dreamer. You don't live in (rather quickly) on the
real life. Nothing that in- table and sets out after the (Music, noise)
Her gaze shifts to .. . terests other people in- man with the gold watch
terests you. (out of shot)
246) M.L.S . ... Jacques.
He comes out of the cafe JACQUES: Coming, 249) M.S. Michel (in/o shot)
and back to the table (fac- Michel? Are you coming, makes his way through the
ing camera in M.S.) next to Jeanne? (Music, noise)
crowd (in front sideshows)
Michel. Jeanne (.Y., rear
and disappears.
view) gets up. Michel re- MICHEL: Where are you
mains seated. going? (semi-silence)
250) M.S. Crowd behind
(Sounds of running
side-show stands . Several
JACQUES: We're going up footsteps)
people come running
, Jeanne moves close to Jac- in a balloon. (Sounds of running
through crowd. Others
ques. footsteps)
start to run too. Jeanne
MICHEL: You two go and Jacques come into
Jacques and Jeanne move ahead. I'll stay here. WOMAN: Look, look, he
view and go up (in M.S.) to
away. fell down.
a couple.
(CAMERA MOVES IN AND (Music, noise) JEANNE: What is it?
Jeanne and Jacques con-
PANS on movement to What's the matter?
tinue through the crowd
Michel alone in M .S.)
(Out of shot)
MAN: A thief.
He turns toward gold
251) M.S . Empty sidewalk
watch. (Music and noise)
table in front of little cafe .
247) C.U. Gold watch on
Jacques and Jeanne (into
man's wrist. Man takes JACQUES: Where's
shot) come up to table,
some change out of his Michel?
stand by it (in M.S.)
pocket ...
(QUICK) DISSOLVE
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STAIRCASE, HALLWAY AND MICHEL'S ROOM-DAY
256) M.S. (as 254) Jacques . JACQUES: Just frightened.
252) Michel comes up last
steps, crosses the landing 257) M.S. Michel. He MICHEL: Explain .
(in M.L.S.) and turns cor- glances unthinkingly at his
(Distant street noises) cut hands.
ner in hallway (out of shot)
(Michel's footsteps) JACQUES: You hurt your
258) M.S. (as 256) Jacques. hand?
253) M.S. (Camera inside
room) (Michel's footsteps)
259) M.S . Michel goes to MICHEL: A little . . . It's
the window, turns back to nothing. What have you
Michel, preceded by the
Jacques. done with Jeanne?
sound of.his footsteps,
pushes open door and
260) M.S. Jacques takes a JACQUES: I took her
comes in. He goes straight step toward the door. home. But I can go collect
to the bed and sinks onto it
her again .
in a sitting position (in
M.S.) (short pause)

261) M.S. (as 259) Michel MICHEL: You're in love


He remains motionless for
in front of window . He with her . . . admit it . . .
a moment, then glances
comes back towards Jac- Does she love you?
down at the palms of his
ques. (semi-silence)
hapds, which are bleeding
slightly. He takes a han-
262) M.S. Jacques is in JACQUES: I'm hoping and
dkerchief out of his pocket
(Footsteps in the hallway) doorway. waiting.
and daubs at the cuts. He
cocks his ear toward the
(Sound of the door being 263) M.S. Michel goes MICHEL: Take her to
hallway, quickly puts his
pushed opened) towards door. shows. Give her presents.
handkerchief back in his
pocket, and turns suddenly
to face the door. JACQUES: Are you in 264) M.S. Jacques goes MICHEL: Have you
here? down hall. After two or thought about presents?
254) M.S. Jacques steps in- three steps, he turns
to the room . JACQUES: I was so around. Michel (~ rear
frightened. view) (into shot) watches
255) M.S. (as 253) Michel him go.
gets up. MICHEL: Frightened of
what?

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Jacques' gaze alights on
Michel's trousers, torn at A couple get out of a cab.
the knee and a bit dusty. (Jacques' footsteps moving
While Jacques walks away. away) At this point, Michel comes
towards station, crosses
sidewalk and disappears .
Michel turns around (fac-
ing camera), bends over A porter loads the couple's
and brushes the dust off suitcases onto a dolly.
his knee. They enter (* front view,
in M.S.) the ticket hall (out
He straightens up again, of shot).
takes the gold watch out of V.O.: It was a very fine
his pocket and gazes at it watch. GARE DE LYON TICKET HALL- DAY
lying in the palm of his
hand, with a smile on his 266) M.L.S. In the crowd,
face. the couple (into shot)(*
rear view) cross the hall,
Then he goes back (BACK heading for the platform. A
TO CAMERA) into his woman, carrying a small
room. suitcase in each hand,
passes them in the op-
FADE-OUT posite direction. She moves
on (CAMERA PANS with
GARE DE LYON - PROMENADE - DAY her) and stops in front of a
ticket window.
265) M.L.S. Cabs and
private cars draw up in TICKET WINDOW
front of the main entrance
leading to the department 267) M.S. Woman(* rear
platform. view). She lays her hand-
bag on the window counter
(CAMERA-inside TICKET in front of her, opens it,
HALL) pays for her ticket (the
clerk hands it to her) turns
(Passengers, luggage, around (facing camera) and
porters) glances absent-mindedly at

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77
268) M.S .. .. Michel, stand- A RECESS
ing behind her. He meets
her gaze and then im- 272) M.S. A recess in one
mediately looks away. corner of the hall.

269) M.S. (as 267) The Accomplice n. 2 (into shot)


woman turns back to the appears carrying the bag
window, closes her hand- (already open), quickly
bag, and puts it under her takes out the money
left arm. (hiding his actions) and
drops it at the foot of the
(CAMERA MOVES IN AND wall.
PANS on movement to C. U.
(CAMERA MOVES IN AND
of handbag).
TILTS DOWN on move-
ment with bag for C. U.)
Michel's hand (into shot)
takes bag from behind,
271) M.S. A traveler takes
while his right hand
out his wallet and, holding
replaces it with a bundle
it in his left hand, ap-
of folded newspapers of
proaches the (crowded)
similar shape and size.
• window .
The woman presses the (CAMERA MOVES IN AND
bundle of newspapers PANS with wallet to C.V.)
under her arm, thinking it
is her bag. Several bills are sticking
out of wallet. Hand of ac-
Michel's left hand slips the complice n. 1 (into shot)
bag ... hidden behind magazines,
passes over wallet and
(CAMERA PANS with bag). snags the bills in passing.

. . . to accomplice n . 1, who N. 1's hand disappears .


slips it under a folded rain-
coat hung over his arm to 272) C.U. N.1's hand (into
accomplice n. 2 who disap- shot) appears, slips bills in-
pears (in M.S.) (out of shot). to Michel's hand, who slips
them into his pocket.

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(CAMERA PULLS BACK
AND PANS on movement platforms ( ~ fran t view)
for two-shot of Michel and (out of shot).
n. 1 in M.S.)
PLATFORM ENTRANCE- GLASS BOOTHS
Michel walks a few steps
(Pickpocket n. I is thus 278) M.S. (Camera facing
eliminated from shot) ... platform)
and stops. He sees ... The passnger (into shot)(~
rear view) heads for a
273) M.L.S .. . . a plain- booth. Other passengers
clothesman (glimpsed in are already lined up.
Commissaire's office). He V.O.: Where had I seen him
passes through the crowd before? I should have 279) M.S.
without looking at Michel. recognized him. (REVERSE ANGLE)
The passenger(~ front
274) M.S. (as 272) Michel
view) approaches guard
watches him go, then turni
towards ... punching tickets. He takes
out his ticket. At this point,
a hand takes him by the
27 5) M.L.S .... Pickpocket
left shoulder (it is Pick-
n . 2. He is standing near a
pocket n. 2 who, pretends
titket window. Next to him
to be in a hurry to get
a passenger bends down to
through). The passenger
pick up his suitcase. Pick-
looks to his left. Michel's
pocket n. 2 takes out his
hand slips into his right
handkerchief and as he
pocket, grasps his wallet,
puts it into his right inside
lets it fall.
pocket, glances at Michel.
280) C.U. Michel's other
276) M.S. (as 274) Michel
meets his glance. hand catches the wallet at
the bottom of the jacket.
277) M.L.S. (as 275) Carry-
ing his suitcase, the 281) M.S. Passenger and
Michel. Passenger sudden-
passenger heads for the
ly turns towards Michel.
Michel meets his gaze.

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81
282) C.U. Michel's hand and(* front view) gets in-
quickly slips wallet into to coach. He turns into the
the side pocket of a nearby corridor (out of shot).
passenger. (This
passenger's checkered Michel appears, pauses,
jacket is very easy to looking for him, then goes
recognize). Wallet vanishes on his way.
into pocket.
285) M.S.
283) M.S. Michel(* front (CAMERA in compartment)
view) and passenger with The passenger with the
suitcase (glances) get their checkered jacket (into shot)
tickets punched and move passes in corridor, pauses
onto the platform. in front of compartment
door. Michel appears, com-
(THE CAMERA PANS TO:) ing from opposite direc-
tion, dips his hand into the
plainclothesman, followed pocket into which he had
by two other dropped the stolen wallet
plainclothesman just as and takes possession of it.
they go through the gates He goes on down the cor-
from platforms to ticket ridor (out of shot).
hall, in opposite direction
from Michel's and without 286) M.S.
noticing him. (CAMERA in corridor fac-
ing the coach door.)

PLATFORM- RAILWAY COACH Michel (into shot)(* rear


view), is about to get off. A
284) M.L.S. passenger is getting on. He
(CAMERA in corridor fac- helps him on by seizing his
ing coach door) right wrist and pulling him
up.
Through open door, we see
passenger with suitcase (CAMERA MOVES IN AND
passing (without stopping), PANS to C. U. - of stolen
then passenger with watch just as Michel slips
checkered jacket arrives it in his pocket).

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He gets off and vanishes 289) C.U. Wallet falling on
along the platform. tracks between wheels.

287) M.S. DISSOLVE


(CAMERA in corridor of
another coach) ROCHECHOUART CAFE- DAY

Pickpocket n. 1 (~ front 290) C.U. of several bank-


view) squeezes by a notes which Michel lays on
passenger going in the a table and which are seiz-
other direction and ed by second pickpocket's
relieves him of his wallet hand.
as he does so. The
passenger goes on his (CAMERA PULLS BACK
wawy (out of shot). AND PANS on movement)
to show Michel and two
Pickpocket n. l takes one pickpockets seated in cafe V.O.: It was too good to be
step forward, empties the playing cards. true. It couldn't last.
wallet of the bills it con-
tains (hiding his actions), First Pickpocket is work-
then turns around (wallet ing out their accounts on a
i'n hand) just as the piece of paper. Michel
passenger comes back shuffles, someone cuts,
again. They squeeze past etc....
each other once more.
Pickpocket n. l puts empty DISSOLVE
wallet back into
STAIRCASE AND ENTRANCE TO MICHEL'S APART-
passenger's pocket (both go
MENT HOUSE - DAY
out of shot).
291) M.S. Michel (facing
288) M.S. On the platform.
camera) with Jacques right
Between two coaches (near
behind him, is coming
coupling and hood). Michel (Street noises)
down the last few steps.
(entering shot) comes up,
takes a wallet out of his
(CAMERA PANS)
pocket, rifles it (hiding his
actions), throws wallet They head for the door
under coach. (Backs to Camera).
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In the doorway, Michel MICHEL: Why, what's the
stops and turns to Jacques. 299) M.S. (as 297) Michel. MICHEL: What arrange-
matter . .. Tell me . .. Tell ments?
me ... Looking at Jacques.
292) M.S. Jacques
hesitates, then takes a 300) M.S. (as 298) Jacques. (Street noises)
JACQUES: Here, read this.
piece of paper out of his Looking at Michel, without
pocket and hands it to saying a word .
Michel.
301) M.S. (as 299) Michel JACQUES: Michel!
(CAMERA PULLS BACK suddenly turns away from
AND PANS to two-shot). Jacques and (Back to
camera) runs out the door.
Michel takes piece of Jacques (into shot) tries to
paper, unfolds it ... (Street noises, cars) hold him back. He goes out
quickly and sets off in
293) C.U .... piece of (Street noises, cars) another direction.
paper. Police summons ad-
dressed to Jeanne. (QUICK) DISSOLVE

294) M.S. Jacques. GARE DU NORD- COURTYARD- DAY


JACQUES: The police want
to question Jeanne. Why
Jeanne? 302) M.L.S.
(CAMERA in TICKET
HALL)
295) M.S. Michel. MICHEL: I have no idea.
Cars, passengers, porters , (Street noises, cars, dollies,
296) M.S. (as 294) Jacques. JACQUES: What do you dollies. general din)
advise her to do?
Three plainclothesmen go
297) M.S. (as 295) Michel. MICHEL: What? Why, she across the sidewalk and
He folds paper again and had to go! She can't do enter (-% front view) ticket
holds it out to Jacques. anything else. (he gives the hall (out of shot( (the two
paper back to Jacques). Is seen at the beginning, plus
that all? plainclothesman glimpsed
298) M.S. (as 296) Jacques in Commissaire's office).
JACQUES: I wanted to let
takes paper and puts it
you know so you could
back in his pocket.
make your own
arrangements.
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COMMISSAIRE: I'm not
322) M.S. (as 320) Michel. MICHEL: Why? 329) M.S. Commissaire.
mistaken.
323) M.S . (as 321) Com- COMMISSAIRE: Because, MICHEL: You have odd
330) M.S. (as 328) Michel.
missaire. very often, the thief is a methods .
relative or a friend, and
the victim doesn't want 331) M.S. (as 329) Com- COMMISSAIRE: Let's just
him arrested. Now, this missaire. forget about my methods .
lady had a son . . .
332) M.S. (as 330) Michel. MICHEL: If you wanted to
have proof instead of
dabbling in psychology,
MICHEL: (Wordless why didn't you have my
324) M.S . (as 322) Michel. reaction). room searched when I
came to see you?
325) M.S. (as 323) Com- COMMISSAIRE: Oh,
missaire. stealing from one's mother 333) M.S. (as 331) Com- COMMISSAIRE: But my
isn 't really stealing. dear sir, when you came to
missaire.
Perhaps they even pooled see me, I did have your
their resources? However, room searched.
a month later the same
young man was caught at MICHEL: And what did
the Longchamp race-track. they find?
334) M.S . (as 332) Michel.
The case was not very
clear, and I let him go. You COMMISSAIRE: (wordless
335) M.S. (as 333) Com-
have to admit that all of reaction)
missaire.
these things taken together
336) M.S. (as 334) Michel. MICHEL: Nothing, of
326) M.S. (as 324) Michel. course .
MICHEL: And who is this
young man?
327) M.S. (as 325) Com- COMMISSAIRE: (wordless
COMMISSAIRE: What? 337) M.S. Commissaire. reaction)
missaire.
Why it's you, my dear sir,
it's you. MICHEL: All of this is a
328) M.S. Michel stands 338) M.S . Michel takes
up, takes a step (towards three steps, then to Com- great bore. I've had
MICHEL: You're mistaken. missaire again . enough.
the door?), then turns back
to Commissaire.

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339) M.S. Commissaire. He gets up and goes to
COMMISSAIRE: (wordless
door (leaving shot).
reaction)
346) M.S . Michel watches
340) M.S. (as 338) Michel. MICHEL: What do you
Commissaire as he passes
want with me?
in front of him (entering
and leaving shot)
COMMISSAIRE: I wanted
341) M.S. (as 339) Com- to get you to open your
missair~.
347) M.S.
eyes . . .
(CAMERA In hallway)
342) M.S. (as 340) Michel. MICHEL: They're wide
Commissaire opens door,
open ...
goes out, heads for stair-
343) M.S. (as 341) Com- case (out of shot).
COMMISSAIRE: . .. and MICHEL: And what are
Michel follows him and
missaire. take a look at yourself. But your intentions now?
pauses in doorway (in M.S.)
it's been a waste of time ..
. As for the future ... COMMISSAIRE: My
348) M.L.S.
Commissaire turns around intentions?
344) M.S. (as 342) Michel. MICHEL: What's it to you?
and stops.
Are you in the fortune- MICHEL: I'd like to know
telling business? Is my what they are!
349) M.S. (as 347) Michel.
future any concern of
yours? COMMISSAIRE: Why are
350) M.L.S. Commissaire.
you suddenly so worried?
345) M.S. Commissaire. COMMISSAIRE: That's just
He continues on his way
it, it does concern me a
He starts to rise, then sits ·little . .. and disappears.
again.
. . . For routine's sake, I 351) M.L.S.
should have asked you a (CAMERA in room)
few questions. I haven't
done my duty. However, Michel in doorway watches
you don't have to confess, I Commissaire walk away,
don't care about that. An comes (facing camera) back
ordinary police report is into the room, thinks for a
all I need. The testimony of few seconds, turns around
one of my men is enough again and goes out (back to
to have you arrested and camera) pulling door shut.
sent to prison.
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TICKET HALL CAMERA PANS to follow
him.
303) M.S.The three plain- (General din)
clothesmen, (into shot) DISSOLVE
separate as they go V.O.: Had they seen me?
through the crowd. HALLWAY AND MICHEL'S ROOM - DAY

NEWSSTAND 307) M.S. Michel is sitting


on the bed. He gets up as if
304) M.L.S. Passengers to go to the window, but
standing in front of news- then turns suddenly
stand. Michel appears towards the door and
behind one of them, steps listens. He goes to the door
forward, goes up to a and opens it ...
display and seems to be
leafing through a 308) M.S. (Direct match)
magazine. Then he moves V.O.: I had to appear to be (CAMERA IN HALLWAY)
away (leaving shot) and neither hiding nor running
disappears into crowd. away. Michel opens the door.
Commissaire (in
TICKET HALL foreground, ~ rear view) MICHEL: It's you.
t
stands before him.
305) M.L.S. The three
plainclothesmen (into shot) Commissaire (34 rear view)
appear in the crowd, escor- enters room .
ting the two accomplices
(handcuffs). They move 309) M.S. (Direct match)
away. (CAMERA In room)

MAIN ENTRANCE Commissaire ( ~ front MICHEL: Sorry the room's


view) comes in . Michel so untidy ...
306) M.S. Standing in the pushes door shut behind
doorway, Michel watches him. COMMISSAIRE: I came by
them move away, then goes three days ago ... I waited
out of the station (out of (Table, covered with books quite a while .
shot). and notebooks, in
foreground) MICHEL: I was out for
some air.
92 93
Commissaire comes 314) M.S. (as 312) Michel. MICHEL: .. . Playing with
(Michel out of shot) me, making a fool of me. I
towards the table, puts out won't put up with it!
his hand and runs one COMMISSAIRE: You're
finger over a notebook, right. It's unhealthy to stay 315) M.S . (as 313) COMMISSAIRE: What? A
then over a book. shut up in this little room Commissaire. doubt . .. ?
of yours , buried in your
(CAMERA MOVES IN AND notebooks and your MICHEL: I don 't have it,
PANS to C. U. of hand, reading. 316) M.S. (as 314) Michel. do you hear?
notebook and books).
317) M.S. (as 315) Com- COMMISSaiRE: Don't
Finger leaves mark. Com- missaire shout. Calm down . Get a
missaire withdraws hand grip on yourself. Don't get
(CAMERA PULLS BACK all worked up. I came here
AND PANS) and gazes (in . .. do sit down . . .
M.S.) at his dust blackened because I am interested in
finger-tips, then goes to a you.
chair and sits down (slow-
ly). 318) M.S . Michel sits down MICHEL: I don't give a
(on edge of bed). hang about your interest in
310) M.S. Michel (standing) MICHEL: I've known for a me.
• stares at him in silence. long time that you suspect
Then bursts out. me . If you think you have 319) M.S. (as 31 7) Com- COMMISSAIRE: ... and to
the right to arrest me, then missaire. tell you about something I
arrest me. Put me in hand- didn't know about before.
cuffs. You've got handcuffs Over a year ago (we hadn't
in your pocket there. Put met yet, you and I) a girl
them on me ... but don't lodged a complaint at her
drive me too far. local police headquarters.
311) M.S. Commissaire COMMISSAIRE: (wordless
(seated). reaction) 320) M.S. (as 318) Michel. MICHEL: What girl?
COMMISSAIRE: It doesn't
312) M.S. (as 31 0) Michel MICHEL: I don't want you make any difference . A
(standing) to keep on hanging around small sum of money had
me like this . .. 321) M.S. (as 319) Com- vanished from the apart-
313) M.S. (as 311) Com- COMMISSAIRE: But I've missaire ment of an old lady who
missaire. been leaving you alone, on lived in the same building.
the contrary. The next day, the
complaint was withdrawn .
94 95
(QUICK) DISSOLVE
358) M.S. (as 356) Jeanne. JEANNE: No. What?
CHATILLON APARTMENT HOUSE- SECOND
359) M.S. (as 357) Michel. ' MICHEL: But now .. . you
FLOOR LANDING AND JEANNE'S FLAT- DAY
do know.
352) M.S . Jeanne (facing
camera) opens her door to
360) M.S. (as 358) Jeanne . JEANNE: (wordless
Michel (3/4 rear view). reaction)
Michel goes in. Door closes
behind him . 361) M.S. Michel paces MICHEL: Have you all
briefly about the room and made up your minds to
(VERY QUICK) DISSOLVE comes back (in M.S.) drive me mad! Now look,
the police have been ques-
BEDROOM, DINING ROOM IN JEANNE'S FLAT- tioning you about me ...
DAY
362) M.S. Jeanne. JEANNE: They never men-
353) M.S. Michel (facing tioned your name.
camera) and Jeanne (3/4
363) M.S. Michel. MICHEL: But you see me
rear view), both standing. JEANNE: They asked me if
I had withdrawn my living without any source
complaint on my own of income, or any that I
initiative, or at your can admit to. And you
mother's request. can't guess? Use your
head, you goose.
MICHEL: And what did
364) M.S. (as 362) Jeanne. JEANNE: It can 't be.
you say?

354) M.S. Jeanne (facing 365) M.S. (as 363) Michel. MICHEL: Me. And they're
JEANNE: I said it was
camera) your mother. going to arrest me.

355) M.S. Michel. (facing MICHEL: Was it? 366) M.S. Jeanne sinks on- ' JEANNE: Good Lord!
camera) to the bed-sofa behind her
and buries her head in her
356) M.S. (as 354) Jeanne . JEANNE: Yes . hands.

357) M.S. (as 355) Michel. MICHEL: So she knew. 367) M.S. (as 365) Michel. MICHEL: However, they
And did you know too, have no real proof and will
Jeanne? be forced to let me go.

96 97
378) M.S. Jeanne (facing JEANNE: What?
camera) Michel (3/.1 rear
368) M.S. (as 366) Jeanne, JEANNE: How could you!
view in foreground). She
seated. There is nothing so low, so
backs away.
ugly, don't you know that?
379) M.S. Michel comes MICHEL: Tell the truth. Do
MICHEL: One can be you believe I'm a thief?
forward.
369) M.S. Michel takes a perfectly well aware that
step towards a chair and something is low and still MICHEL (off-screen):
380) M.S. Jeanne goes
sits in it. do it. What's wrong? Don't lie.
backward.
370) M.S. Jeanne gets up. JEANNE: But why? why? JEANNE: Yes, I believe
you are.
371) M.S. (as 369) Michel, MICHEL: To extricate
seated. myself. I wasn't getting MICHEL: Then I won't
381) M.S. Michel.
anywhere. I was shake hands (1)
exasperated. 382) M.S. Jeanne breaks
into tears and throws her JEANNE: You've destroyed
372) M.S. (as 370) Jeanne, JEANNE: There were a yourself!
arms around Michel's
standing. thousand ways.
neck.
(Silence)
373) M.S. Michel gets up. MICHEL: You take (CAMERA PULLS BACK (Distant street noises, cars)
everything lying down: a AND PANS to Michel in ~
father who drinks, a rear view in foreground.) JEANNE: What are you
mother who leaves you. going to do? Go away?
And the whole burden of and kisses him.
life on your shoulders.

JEANNE: Perhaps there's a


374) M.S. Jeanne. reason for this burden.

375) M.S. Michel. MICHEL: What reason?


(l) We must remember that the hand-shake is a
376) M.S. Jeanne. JEANNE: There's a reason customary mode of greeting and leave-taking in
for everything. France, even among people who see each other every
day (tr.'s note)
377) M.S. Michel steps MICHEL: Jeanne! Are you
across the room closer to naive! ... Those are all
Jeanne (bringing her into just words ... But do you
shot (3/.1 rear view) really believe me? 99

98
383) M.S . Michel (Jeanne V.O.: That impossible idea opens up hiding place,
-% rear view in fore~row1d) suddenly seemed a takes out bills, puts them
possibility. inside the lining of his
He pulls himself away. jacket, takes out gold
(CAMERA PULLS BACK MICHEL: No, no ... watch and straps it on his V.O.: I no longer quite
AND PANS for two-shot of wrist, closes hiding place knew what I was doing.
(-% rear view)
Michel and Jeanne in M.S.)

Michel heads for the door (QUICK) DISSOLVE


(-% rear view) and goes out
(rather quickly). MICHEL'S APARTMENT HOUSE- ENTRANCE
MAIN DOOR - DAY
DISSOLVE
386) M.S.
(CAMERA On sidewalk)
STAIRCASE, HALLWAY AND MICHEL'S ROOM-
DAY
Michel(~ front view) hur-
384) M.S. Michel(~ front ries to the doorway, then
view) hurries up last steps stops short. He is half-
and vanishes down hall hidden behind door. He
catches sight of a cab (off- (Street noises, cars)
(P'}N) (out of shot).
screen) steps onto
sidewalk, so that he is
385) M.S. completely in the open,
(CAMERA in room) hails driver and rushes for-
ward (out of shot).
Michel (facing camera)
pushes the door open and 387) M.S.
comes to a sudden stand- Taxi (+4 rear view)
V.O.: I remember wanting
still. to pack a sui tease.
Michel (into shot) opens
Then, very quickly, he door, jumps inside, shuts (Street sounds, cars, taxi
(Distant street noises, cars)
pulls his bed into the the door. Taxi drives away. starting up)
center of the room, gets
down on his knees, 388) M.S . Camera in taxi.

Michel(~ front view) sits V.O.: Would they let me get


(CAMERA MOVES IN AND
motionless. as far as the station?
PANS on movement)
100 101
TICKET HALL
PLATFORM- CARRIAGE
390) M.S . Michel (i11to shot) (Noise, brief distant
(-% rear view) heads for whistles) 393) M.S.
ticket window. (CAMERA inside a coach,
at one end of the corridor
V.O. : I went straight to the
He buys a ticket (in M.S. -% shooting through the door.)
ticket window.
rear view) comes back (-%
front view) heading for the The door is open .
(Noise - Distant whistles)
departure platforms (leav-
ing shot). We see several passengers
to quickly by on the plat-
GLASS BOOTHS form, then a guard (into
(TICKET TAKERS) shot) comes up and shuts
door. Suddenly door opens
391) M.S. again . Michel appears, (Slamming of door)
(CAMERA Facing plat- scrambles up the three (Opening of door)
forms) steps, pulls door shut
behind him and goes into (Slamming of door)
Michel (into shot -% rear corridor (out of shot)
view) and other passengers (Passengers' footsteps,
make their way towards dollies)
394) M.S.
' the glass booths where the (CAMERA on platform)
tickets are punched .
Michel (into shot) is seen
392) M.S.
through a window entering
(REVERSE ANGLE) compartment. He comes
(-% front view in M.S.)
Michel hands his ticket to towards window.
guard (off-screen), takes it (Passengers' footsteps,
back, glances quickly dollies) V.O.: That minute left me
Just at that point, the train
towards the departure plat- gets under way. A sign on an unforgettable memory.
forms and hurries forward the side of the coach,
(out of shot). under the window, reads: (Locomotive whistle)
"MILAN, via (etc . .. )"

(SLOW) DISSOLVE

102
103
395) C.U. Michel's hand V.O.: From Milan, I moved (CAMERA is inside Jeanne's
writes these words: on down to Rome and soon flat (hallway)
afterwards to England.
During the two years I Front door is ajar. Michel
spent in London I brought (preceded by the sound of (Distant street sounds)
off some spectacular jobs. his footsteps) appears in
(SLOW) DISSOLVE But most of the take I opening, coming up stairs. (Michel's footsteps)
gambled away or wasted
with women . I found He puts his suitcase down V.O.: My footsteps led me
myself back in Paris on the landing, hesitates, back here.
almost penniless. pushes door open (in M.S.)
comes in and pushes it to
GARE DU NORD- DAY behind him.

396) M.L.S. The train from 398) M.L.S.


London is standing in the (Direct match)
station - Steam loco- (Locomotive letting out
steam) (CAMERA in bed-sitting V.O.: Nothing was recog-
motive .
room). nizable, everything had
changed.
(CAMERA facing platform,
neqr ticket taker). Michel closes door behind
him, crosses the hall and,
Passengers are getting off still hesitating, goes into
train. Michel with his coat the bed-sitting room.
over his arm, and carrying (Passengers' footsteps)
a suitcase. He stops (In M.S.) and sits
down on the edge of a V.O. Why did I take such
(When he is framed in chair, with his coat over pleasure in looking at that
M.S., CAMERA DRAWS his arm. child?
BACK, preceding him for a
few seconds). He gazes at the child for a
long moment (off-screen).
(QUICK) DISSOLVE
He leans forward, picks up
a toy at his feet and holds
CHATILLON APARTMENT HOUSE- DAY it out to child, who is sit-
ting on rug in middle of
397) M.L.S. room.
104 105
(CAMERA PULLS BACK 404) M.S. (as 402) Michel MICHEL: Why didn't you
AND PANS for two-shot). get married?

Then he sits back again. 405) M.S. (as 403) Jeanne JEANNE: I was the one
(CAMERA MOVES IN). He V.O.: I was about to leave. who didn't want to.
hears footsteps in the hall,
turns around and sees ... (Footsteps in hallway) 406) M.S. (as 404) MICHEL: You, Jeanne?

399) M.L.S. 407) M.S. (as 405) JEANNE: Living a life-time


of lies, pretending that you
... Jeanne. She is closing love someone .. .
the front door, she stops. 408) M.S. Michel gets up,
She sees Michel across the takes a step, turns back to MICHEL: And you didn't?
hallway. Jeanne.

400) M.S. 409) M.S. (as 407) Jeanne. JEANNE: No, not enough.

Michel stands up, gazing at MICHEL: Jeanne! 41 0) M.S. (as 408) Michel MICHEL: Where is he?
Jeanne. (standing)

(QUICK) DISSOLVE 411) M.S. (as 409) Jeanne. JEANNE: For three
months now he hasn't been
to see me.
401) M.S.
412) M.S. Michel goes MICHEL: Jacques? I can't
Jeanne (FACING CAMERA) MICHEL: What did your believe that of him!
and Michel (-!1.4 REAR father say? toward the little bed in
VIEW) are sitting near which the child is sleeping
(in foreground), looks down (Street noises, cars)
each other. JEANNE: He went away
and took my sister with at it.
MICHEL: I'm going to help
him. He took everything you. I'll take care of this
with him.
child.

JEANNE: You must leave


402) M.S. Michel (FACING MICHEL: Having a baby
me now and never come
CAMERA) isn't a crime, after all! 413) M.S. Jeanne gets up.
back.
403) M.S. Jeanne (FACING JEANNE: Yes it is, I was
CAMERA) out of my mind.
106 107
414) M.S. Michel. MICHEL: But I'm still Michel (seen through (Street noises - cars)
capable of leading an window) comes out of
He picks up his coat from honest life. Let me at least factory and heads for cafe.
a chair and goes towards try.
the door (BACK TO He comes in, pauses at
CAMERA) counter, takes envelope out
of his pocket and takes out
bank-notes. He puts half
FADE OUT back in his pocket and the
other half back in the
envelope.
FACTORY- CORRIDOR- DAY
(CAMERA moves in and
PANS)
415) C.U. On a table, near
the entrance, there is a (QUICK) DISSOLVE
row of envelopes, each
with a name on it. A hand CHATILLON APARTMENT HOUSE- 2ND FLOOR
is passing them out .. . LANDING and JEANNE'S FLAT
Michel's hand (in to shot) (Workers' footsteps)
takes an envelope.
417) C.U. Envelope in
(CAMERA PULLS BACK Jeanne's hand. She is
standing in doorway, (Michel's footsteps on
AND PANS as it moves to
taking bank-notes out of landing and stairs)
show Michel pocketing his
envelope and going envelope.
through factory door [out
of shot] [314 REAR VIEW] (CAMERA DRAWS BACK
with several other workers.) and PANS to M.S.)

She glances at the bank-


notes, then at Michel.
HOTEL CAFE- STREET- FACTORY- DAY
418) M.L.S. Michel is going
416) M.L.S. down stairs. He glances
(CAMERA in the cafe, back at Jeanne once more
behind the bar). then goes out of sight.

108 109
419) M.S. Jeanne remains LONGCHAMP- PADDOCK
standing for a second in
doorway with envelope in 425) M.L.S. Man takes a
hand, then she goes back few steps in crowd, peer-
inside. She closes the door ing around, looking for
behind her. some one. (In M.S.) he
catches sight of Michel (off-
screen).
FADE OUT
He goes towards him (out
of shot).
HOTEL CAFE - NIGHT
426) M.L.S. Michel (BACK
420) M.S. Michel at the V.O.: The police and I had TO CAMERA) in crowd.
counter. lost sight of one another. I Man (into shot) (~ REAR
was in the clear. VIEW) goes up to him .
He goes up to a man
(CAMERA PANS with him) At the last minute, Michel (Crowd noises)
(bringing man into shot) turns around. They recog-
who is studying a news- nize each other . They move
paper. He leans over his away side by side and
shoulder. disappear into the crowd
going towards the grand-
421) C. U. Racing page - MAN (off-screen): Do you stands.
Longchamp. play the horses)

422) M.S. Michel MICHEL: Not much .. . a (QUICK) DISSOLVE


little. What about you?

MAN: Yes. Will you be 427) M.L.S. Michel and


423) M.S. Man going? man , in crowd returning
from grandstand. They
424) M.S. Michel goes back pause (in M.S.) in front of
to the counter. MICHEL: Maybe ... board on which names of
winners are posted. They (Crowd noises)
glance up at board. Man
FADE OUT moves away (into shot)
towards betting windows.
110 111
428) M.S. Man (into shot, 435) M.S. Michel glances V.O.: Perhaps I was
*REAR VIEW) heads at bank-notes, then at man . mistaken? It seemed odd.
toward a crowed window (Crowd noises) The winner wasn't the
and falls into line (in (CAMERA PULLS BACK horse he had bet on.
M.L.S.) and PANS to two-shot as
they head back to (A bell rings)
429) M.S. Michel is waiting grandstands).
in front of the board. he (Crowd noises)
looks up at it. (CAMERA PULLS BACK
several strides)
430) C.U. The board, just
as winning horses' names (Crowd noises) Michel cocks an ear as he
and (winning odds) go up. hears the bell.

431) M.S. (same as 429)


Michel looks away from (QUICK) DISSOLVE
board and walks off (out of (Crowd noises)
shot) towards betting
windows. IN FRONT OF GRANDSTAND

432) M.S. Michel (into shot 436) M.S. Michel and Man
* RE'AR VIEW) goes (Crowd noises) (BACKS TO CAMERA)
towards windows. approach (into the shot) (Crowd noise)
with crowd gathering at (Silence - Start of race)
Man (FACING CAMERA) foot of grandstand.
coming from a window,
joins Michel(* REAR MAN: Win anything? All faces are intent on
VIEW). race. V.O.: I should have left
then and there.
433) M.S. Michel (Facing MICHEL: Nothing.
Camera) Man is standing a little in V.O.: I thought I saw a
front of the others. Michel glint of mockery in his
434) M.S. Man opens is standing close beside eyes.
jacket and half draws a him . He turns and glances
wad of bank-notes out of MAN: Look at this. at him.
the inside pocket.

112 113
437) M.S. Man (FACING PRISON - DAY - MICHEL'S CELL AND CORRIDOR
CAMERA) and Michel(~
FRONT VIEW). They gaze 443) M.S. Michel is sitting
at each other, then turn motionless on edge of cot. (Silence)
back to watch the race. He hears steps in corridor, (Guard's footsteps)
turns toward door. The (Squeaking lock)
438) C.U. Michel's hand, lock squeaks.
behind Man 's back,
gradually approaches 444) M.S. (CAMERA in
Man 's jacket and pulls it corridor)
open .
The door. A guard (~
439) M.S . Michel and Man REAR VIEW) in
watching race . foreground opens it.
Michel gets up and goes
440) C.U. Michel's hand out ( shot).
gradually slides into
pocket and with two finger (QUICK) DISSOLVE
pincers removes wad of
bills.
VISITORS' ROOM
441) M.s. Man and Michel
watching race . Michel and 445) M.S. Michel is sitting
Man glance at each other. (End of race)
on a stool (~ REAR VIEW, MICHEL: These walls,
Suddenly, Michel's face (Crowd noise) in foreground) Jeanne (seen these bars? I couldn't care
goes tense. through grille, FACING less, I don't even see them .
CAMERA) It 's the thought of it.
442) C.U. Man's hand
violently grips Michel's JEANNE: The thought of
hand holding the bills from what ?
behind.
446) M.S. Michel (FACING MICHEL: I should have
(CAMERA PULLS BACK
CAMERA) been been on my guard. I
and PANS).
let myself be tricked. I
Michel tries to pull away. can 't stand the thought of
Man's other hand slips on Crowd noise) that.
handcuffs.
FADE OUT

114 115
447) M.S. JEANNE JEANNE: How you are (CAMERA PULLS BACK
(FACING CAMERA) suffering! and PANS).
448) M.S. (as 446) Michel MICHEL: I confessed to Michel goes out, with
everything. guard behind him .

449) M.S . (as 44 7) Jeanne JEANNE: They'll take that


into account. FADE OUT

450) M.S. (as 448) Michel MICHEL: But when I go


before examining MICHEL'S CELL - DAY
magistrate, I'll deny
everything. They'll have 457) M.S. Michel walks (Silence)
their work cut out for back and forth, sits down
them! on the cot. V.O.: There was something
else I hadn't told her. I
He raises a corner of the hadn't made up my mind
451) M.S. (as 449) Jeanne JEANNE: You're the only mattress . The cloth ye t. Why go on living?
one I have left. underneath is sewn
together with string. He
452) M.S. (as 450) Michel MICHEL: Is that so. I'll tell rips it out and twists it in
you I did something I his fingers .
shouldn't have done and
you act righteous? I don't He hears footsteps in (Footsteps in the corrido r)
want anyone or anything. corridor. He goes to the
door and peers through the
453) M.S. Jeanne gets up. peep-hole.

454) M.S. (as 452) Michel MICHEL: Don't go. . (CAMERA TRUCKS IN and
PANS with him) V.O.: Jeanne didn 't come
455) M.S. (as 453) Jeanne back.
sits down again . He turns around (FACING
CAMERA)
456) M.S. (as 454) A hand
(guard's hand is laid on (Guard's footsteps and
Michel's shoulder). Michel's) DISSOLVE

116 117
458) C.U. Michel opens a 460) M.S. The door (held
letter. open by guard who
remains in shadows of (Michel's footsteps)
The letter (1 ): The baby is corridor).
sick, he's been running a
high fever for nearly three Michel goes out (tf REAR
weeks. Now at last I can VIEW, out of shot).
stop worrying. I'll come to V.O.: As I read that letter,
visit you in prison soon, my heart beat wildly.
Michel. VISITORS' ROOM

Michel's hands fold letter 461) M.S. Michel comes in


and put it back in (Distant footsteps in (tf FRONT VIEW), does
envelope. corridor and voices) not sit down, but stands in V.O.: I didn't know what
front of stool gazing at was happening to me. I
(CAMERA PULLS BACK Jeanne (off-screen) wanted to speak but could
and PANS to M.S. of not.
Michel)

Michel sits on edge of cot, 462) M.S. Jeanne is sitting


with tQe envelope in his on other side of the bars
hand. (or grating). She gets up
and slowly approaches V.O.: She was pale and
bars (or grating) until she began to tremble. An
DISSOLVE is touching them. inexpressible joy lit up her
face .
Tears are streaming down
459) M.S. Michel, sitting her face.
on edge of cot, hears foot-
steps in corridor. He gets 463) M.S. Michel (seen
up and turns to the door through grating, Jeanne in
(before steps pause at door). (Steps draw near, pause) foreground, over-shoulder
shot???)
The lock creaks. (Creaking lock)
He too goes slowly V.O.: Oh, Jeanne, did it
He goes toward the door (Michel's footsteps) towards grating until he is take all that for me to
(out of shot- t4 FRONT touching it. There are tears deserve you and to love
VIEW) in his eyes. you.

118 119

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