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Pride Rewrite
Pride Rewrite
interpreted as arrogance and bluster. This false impression of pomposity may hinder
society. Having had some exposure to western culture, mostly through the medium of
television, I adopted the persona that I felt would carry me through the initial awkward
isolated because of language and cultural barriers. As I grew more distant from my new
escalating my torment of not fitting in, I agreed to attend Camp Challenge Christian
retreat. The first preaching session began, as Ryan, wearing stereotypical thick black
Asian glasses, plaid button-downs, and casual straight-legged jeans, strolled into the
worship hall and greeted the group of adolescents. His conventional yet comforting
addressed the student body with his assertive tone and several uproarious personal
anecdotes, such as the eating of a spider alive, Ryan seized the attention of every single
audience with his inspirational messages. I was profoundly stirred by his words, in
particular, his message concerning chasing after the expectations of others. During the
next few days of camp, I excitedly arrived at the worship hall, hungrily anticipating for
more meaningful life lessons and bizarre narratives. On the last night before the
campers returned to their stressful and hectic lives, many campers shed tears as Ryan
recapitulated his messages and spoke the last time. During the sharing session,
numerous campers spoke of their personal thoughts and the impact that Ryan’s
messages had on them. I was not the most adept orator, but I felt the need to express
myself in front of my peers. Ryan was just an ordinary person, yet he was able to
influence so many teenagers just in four days, receiving praise and gratitude for what he
had done for the campers. I felt no regret for coming to Camp Challenge because I
grasped a precious life lesson. The chase after trends and popularity will ever end, and it
is time for me to stop. I don’t need to be “the cool kid” at school to be accepted. My
Detaching the superficial shell of false personality was a gradual and tedious
impractical. The fake impressions that I gave my peers in the past several years was still
quite promising as I learned to intermingle with many more people with my own
distinctive personality. Before, I had been baffled trying to fit in the crowd, but now I
had found my own self after relating to Ryan’s analogous ordinary yet influential
persona. I no longer worry about changing myself to be accepted by others. With this
new healthful mentality, my personality will not change under the influence of my
surroundings.