英文写作技巧

写作保命招
Correct sentences before a good essay ！

掌握 CCC-Check(查)-动词; Cut(切); Count

和 TSVC table-Time; Subject; Verb;

Complement
Section C Question 2

先切后丢

-friends (noun)-flying(verb)-kites(noun)-wind(noun)-landed(verb-past tense)-tree(noun)-全部

用 past tense, 不可能是 present tense！

尽量别用“I”, 用单名字如 Alex, he, she was/were/is /are/am

Time/Linker Subject Verb Complement

 T 时间 S 主语 V 动词 C 补充词语

Time/Linker Subject Verb Complement

T 时间 S 主语 V 动词 C 补充词语
 Time/Linker Subject Verb Complement
T 时间 S 主语 V 动词 C 补充词语

_____ words / 80 words - 不够字，怎么办？补充一些剧情/情景，加 closure 结尾

Last Friday, Henry and his friends were flying kites at the park. But, the wind was too
strong and snapped the string of Henry’s kite. His kite was blown away and then it landed on

a tree.

After that, Henry climbed up the tree to get the kite. Out of the blue, the branch he

was stepping broke. Henry fell onto the ground. Later, he was sent to the hospital.

The next day, Henry’s friends came to the hospital to visit him. They brought a new
kite for Henry. Henry was as happy as a lark. At last, Henry had learnt his lesson and

promised not to repeat the mistake.

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9 Common mistakes in essay

 写英语作文的九大常见错误

1. 没用 past tense
Last Friday, I go to the park. (went)

2. 错误使用 past tense

He was wrote an essay just now. (was writing) / 删除 was (记得!不要随便加 was)

3. To (老大) 后面没有用原本字
Fion wanted to joined the contest. (talked / walked)

4. 复数(plural)后没有加-S (复数-多过 1)
After a few (几-多过 1)minute, his father came. (minutes) / after two hours

5. 没放 article (a/an/the)-名词前面一定要放 article (the/a); vowel 就用 an

the
At last, we reached ∧hotel. / saw a man

6. when (当)和 went 去 (go 的 past tense)分不清楚

Went she reached the school, she saw her friends. (When)

7．Arrive (到达/抵达) 后面没放 at, but reached no need to put at

at
We arrived ∧our destination after an hour journey.

8. 心情形容词没放-ed
We are so exciting about our trip. (excited) / I was interested (feeling) / the game (不是人
类) was interesting / The trip (东西) was exciting

9. 我-I-的次序-I 放在后面（谦卑的看法）
I and my family went to Ipoh last weekend. (My family and I) 被华语影响 (My friends and
I/ Ahmad and I)

*如果以上都不是你的 mistake, 恭喜你，你可以（拿 D）及格！