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Clip Time code Image description Sound Notes

1 00:00-00:05 Shows someone’s feet (Footsteps) Camera tracks the
walking along tunnel Dialogue pair of feet as it
or an alley. walks along.
2 00:05-00:10 Reveals character’s (Footsteps) Shot starts with a
face and a hooded Dialogue wide shot then cuts
figure following from to a close up of the
behind. hooded figure
following from the
back.
3 00:10-00:20 Shows a side view (Footsteps) As the hands come
shot of the character’s Dialogue into frame the scene
face as he is walking cuts to a close up
along an alley, as a shot of the hands as
pair of hands come they are about to
into frame covering touch the character
his mouth and pulling and cuts back to the
him back then the side view shot as the
screen cuts to black character is pulled
back. Screen cuts to
a black screen.
4 00:20-00:25 Black screen for 5 Low volume Fade from black
seconds heart beat and screen to next shot.
muffled beeping
sound with some
muffled dialogue
5 00:25-00:30 Aerial shot of the Low volume Aerial shot will be
character’s face with heart beat and still
his eyes barely opened muffled beeping
and a light source sound with some
seems to be moving in muffled dialogue
a swinging motion
6 00:30-00:33 Brief shot of a lamp Muffled dialogue Still shot
hanging from the and low creaking
ceiling swinging back sound as lamp
and forth swings
7 00:33-00:36 Black screen No sound Blank screen

8 00:36-00:41 Wide shot of a room Ambient sound Only light source is

with a TV at the centre Low volume high the TV
of the room and three pitched sound
bodies covered with a
blanket
9 00:41-00:42 Close up of As the eye open Cut to next shot
character’s eye as it the character
opens in shock. gasps for air
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10 00:42-00:47 Character quickly sits Ambient sound Cut to next shot
up and takes the
blanket off his face, he
gasps for air and looks
around and sees the
bodies.
11 00:47- 00:50 The character quickly Ambient sound Cut to next shot
shuffles backwards
away from the bodies
while gasping
aggressively
12 00:50-00:51 The character hits his Ambient sound Cut next shot
head on a door knob Gasps
as he shuffles
backwards.
13 00:51-00:53 The character looks up Ambient sound Cut next shot
to see what he hit and Gasps
realises it’s a door
14 00:53-00:58 The character quickly Ambient sound Cut to next shot
gets up and tries to Door knob being
open the door but it is shuffled
locked.
15 00:58-01:00 Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s hand Banging on door
banging on the door, volume
while shouting.
16 01:00- 01:03 Close up of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s face, Dialogue sound of shuffling is
showing him shouting. heard
17 01:03-01:05 Close up of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character looking back
at the source of the
sound
18 01:05-01:10 Shot of main character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
walking towards one
of the bodies while the
body is seen at the
bottom of the frame.
19 01:10-01:15 Eye line shot showing Ambient sound Camera grows
the body on the closer to the body.
ground
20 01:15-01:18 Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s hand
pulling the sheet off
the body.
21 01:18-01:21 Shot of character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
pulling the sheet off
showing his concerned
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expression
22 01:21-01:25 Aerial shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
body’s face
23 01:25-01:26 Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
body’s eyes opening Loud instant
up instantly sound as the eyes
opens
24 01:26-01:29 Shot of character 2’s Ambient sound Cut to next shot
hand grabbing the
main character’s
neck/collar
25 Shot of main character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
falling and landing on
his rear.
26 Shot of 2nd character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
looking around the Dialogue
room confused and
shouting at the main
character
27 Shot of the main Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character trying to
explain the situation to
the 2nd.
28 Side shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
glancing at the third
body,
29 Eyeline shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
third body on the
ground covered with a
sheet.
30 Close up shot of 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s hand
picking up the sheet
covering the third
body.
31 Shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character lifting the
sheet up.

32 Aerial shot of the third Ambient sound Cut to next shot

body, dead with a
knife lunged into his
head.
34 Shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s face
showing his shocked
reaction as he flinches
back.
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21 Main character looks Ambient sound Cut to next shot
over and also gets a
shocked reaction
21 Shot of the second Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character looking up
to the main character
clearly stressed.
21 Shot of the main Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character looking
down on the 2nd
character also looking
stressed but more
concerned
21 Wide shot of the two Ambient sound Cut to next shot
where the 2nd is
crouched down
looking at the main
character standing
21 Low angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
speaker in the corner
of the room and half
of the main character’s
face is seen in frame.
21 High angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
two characters talking
to each other.
21 Shot of the third body Ambient sound Cut to next shot
while the camera
slowly zooms in.
21 Side shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character shouting at
the speaker.
21 Shot of the telly in the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
middle of the room
turning from a blank
static screen to a game
that is titled “Mortal
Kombat”
21 Low angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
two characters looking
down on the telly
while looking
confused.
21 Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
main character’s face
as he explains what
the game is to the 2nd
character
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Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
2nd character’s face
looking confused.
Shot of the characters’ Ambient sound Cut to next shot
feet standing in front
of the two controllers
Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
main character’s face
head down while
looking straight
towards the telly.
Shot of the main Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s hand
pressing one of the
buttons n the
controller.
Shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character flinching
backwards as if
something hit him.
High angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
2nd character on the
ground holding his
face and screaming at
the main character
Low angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
main character looking
down on the 2nd
character.
Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
2nd character’s hand
picking his controller
up.
Close up of the 2nd c Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s hand
pressing one of the
buttons on the
controller
Shot of the main Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character flinching
side ways
High angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
main character on the
ground holding his
face
Low angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
2nd character looking
don on the main and
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screaming at him.
Low angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
speaker
Shot of the two Ambient sound Cut to next shot
characters looking at
each other as if they
are hesitant
Shot of main character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
picking is controller
up
Shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s head
flinching sideways as
if getting punched
Shot of 2nd character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
holding his face as if
in pain shouting at the
main character
Shot of the main Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character looking
concerned
Shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s hand
pressing a button on
his controller
Shot of main character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
flinching backwards
Low angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
2nd character looking
down on the main
character
High angle shot of Ambient sound Cut to next shot
main character holding
his face looking up to
the 2nd character while
having an angry
expression.
Close up of main Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s hand
pressing a button on
his controller
Shot of 2nd character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
flinching left
Shot of Main character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
flinching right
Shot of 2nd character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
flinching left
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Shot of Main character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
flinching right
Shot of 2nd character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
flinching left
Shot of Main character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
flinching right
Side view shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
main character leaning
on the wall as if to
catch his breath
Wide shot of the 2 Ambient sound Cut to next shot
characters leaning on
the wall looking at
each other.
Close up of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s hand
holding a picture of a
girl.
Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
main characters’ face
as if he is shocked.
Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
2nd character’s face
looking at the main
character confused.
Wide shot of the 2 Ambient sound Cut to next shot
looking at the third
body while a part of
the third body appears
at the bottom of the
frame.
Side shot of the third Ambient sound Cut to next shot
body’s feet and 2nd
character’s legs come
into frame.
Low angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
speaker as it turns on.
Side shot of the 2 Ambient sound Cut to next shot
characters looking up
at the speaker
Shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s face as he
turns and looks at the
main character with
rage and anger.
Side shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character tackling the
main character
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Shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character on top of the
main punching him
and knocking him out.
Shot of 2nd character Ambient sound Cut to next shot
glancing at his
controller and
realising how he can
end this.
Shot of the controller Ambient sound Cut to next shot
on the ground
Shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s face as he
tries to glance at the
speaker while
mumbling something.
Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
2nd character’s hand
mashing the buttons
on his controller
Shot the main Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character on the
ground repeatedly
flinching left and
right.
Shot of the screen with Ambient sound Cut to next shot
the words “You Win”
appearing.
Aerial shot f the main Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s passed out
face.
Low angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
speaker while 2nd
character’s face is
seen at the corner of
the screen shouting
Closer low angle shot Ambient sound Cut to next shot
of the speaker.
2nd character glances Ambient sound Cut to next shot
to his right.
Shot of the third body Ambient sound Cut to next shot
with the knife shown
still stuck to its head.
Shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character’s face as he
debates with himself
as to what he should
do.
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Low angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
speaker
High angle shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
2nd character
screaming at the
speaker
Shot of the 3nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
characters face talking
to the speaker while
the third body is seen
to be getting up.
Close up of the third’s Ambient sound Cut to next shot
hand holding the knife
stuck to his head.
Shot of the 2nd Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character getting
stabbed at the back
and the third body can
be seen standing right
behind him. While the
screen slowly zooms
in.
Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
main character’s eye
closed
Close up shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
main character’s eyes
slowly opening.
Eye line shot of the Ambient sound Cut to next shot
third dragging the
2nd’s body out of the
room
Shot of the third’s face Ambient sound Cut to next shot
looking back at the
main character
mumbling something
Shot of the main Ambient sound Cut to next shot
character on the
ground trying to
shuffle his way
towards the door while
its open
Shot of the door Ambient sound Cut to next shot
slowly closing until it
closes shut.
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