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Cal State Northridge
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Northridge, CA 91330
Welcome to my portfolio that I have created for my English 113 A-Class. So there are a
few things included in my portfolio one of them being this letter that you are reading now to give
you a little background insight on what else is included in my portfolio so to start something else
that is included is one of my out of class essay that I wrote where I talk about Iran and which
policy course within the JCPOA is best for benefiting itself with the United States. And it goes
into really good detail with other countries and how the president is affecting the situation. Also
it includes my rough draft and my final draft so you can see the differences on how my essay has
progressed and it follows the same format for my second essay that we did out of class however
this one has a different topic this topic has to do with the book we read in class Persepolis 2 and
the prompt that I’m following for this second out of class essay is has the book conceive you to
revise your own preconceived notion of Iran and Iranians? And this both includes my rough draft
and final draft to show the differences again on how it has progressed. The other two things that I
have included in my portfolio are my progression exercises The first progression that I chose had
to do with me describing a picture through words so that a person reading my words would be
able to create the picture in their mind and draw it out. And the second progression that I chose
has to do with a set of stories that we read in class more specifically Zen stories and it was my
both of my essays are very strong and well organized and I’ve used all of the resources that have
been provided to me by my 113 A professor and SI leader. Both of my essays clearly follow the
prompts and give enough information with citations to complete the assignment.
I do believe through all my papers the challenge that I had was my thesis is making sure that it
was clear and well driven throughout the whole paper but other than that I don’t feel like I have a
problem getting my words across I think another thing that needs more work in my writing
would have to be my punctuation and making sure that I have the correct commas and periods in
all of the right places. But I did use a few strategies that my SI leader provided for me one of
them being how to write a well-driven thesis by using a specific format that she showed us in
class.
Overall the advice I would give myself in the future is to ask for help and listen to what people
say and it will help you write your paper one thing that I definitely can reflect on from learning
this semester was there is a big difference in writing a college level paper versus a high school
level paper. College level papers require way more work and they’re way more articulate and
that is something that I have found very interesting to me because now the papers have taken an
interest to you before I was just writing prompts that were provided for me because that’s all the
teacher wanted now writing In college the papers have to do with what you want and how you
wanna write it so I have taken a lot more pride in writing each of my papers now. The
recommendations I would give anyone getting ready to take English 113A would be to go to the
LRC, go to all of the writing labs and learn from what they are saying because it really does help
Bryson Banks