Descriptive Essays

I. SPECIFIC TOPIC: (2 points) Centaur physical feature and characteristics

2. THESIS STATEMENT: (2 points) “Centaur” is a Greek mythological
creature, which has a feature of half-human and half-horse.

3. OUTLINE:(2 points)
I. Introduction
A. Question statements
II. Body
A. Centaur physical feature
B. Centaur characteristics
III. Conclusion
A. General fact

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4. ESSAY: (4 points)

What does “Centaur” look like?

Have you ever seen some mysterious animal or a strange creature outside of
your house? Or maybe anywhere that you had gone before? I bet you probably have
none of this kind of experience at all. However, most of you might have heard about
a Centaur. “Centaur” is a Greek mythological creature, which has a feature of half-
human and half-horse. (use the thesis statement that you have presented already)

This half-human and half-horse whose most of them are usually male and
rarely a female. Their physical features are the mixed of human and horse. The
upper body has a look of human and the lower part, which below the hip, has a look
of a horse. Their average height is approximately six and nine feet tall. They weigh
about 1,000 to 2,500 pounds, which is heavier than some animal, such as, Tiger,
Gorilla and a Grevy’s Zebra. The colours of the centaur are definitely unique
because of their genes. They hardly wear any clothes unless they are warriors. The
warrior Centaur has to carry a bow and an arrow all the time to prepare for an
unexpected attack. About the strength, Centaur strength is very powerful and
dangerous. When they attack their enemies, most of the victims never survive or
maybe suffer a lot. They have many traits, which cover both good and bad
characteristic. They are all very kind, lovely, and friendly, they also love to take care
of each other in their tribe. This creature is also intelligent and has a lots of
knowledge. However, sometimes, they can be as harmful as an evil creature in the
Greek mythological creature. Centaur is very uncivilized when they stay with the
other tribes or different species .

Last but not least, Centaur is a creature that comes from a Greek mythology.
Some people believe that this creature had lived on the planet before, but some is
not.

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- use pronoun
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