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Synthesis Essay
Synthesis Essay
Katherine Huber
Mrs. Cramer
Comp Pd. 2
27 Sept. 2018
Fraternities across the country have been in the hot seat lately, and rightfully so. Many
fraternities have multiple rape cases and hazing-related incidents. Hazing is the imposition of
strenuous, often humiliating, tasks as part of a program of rigorous physical training and
rape cases against women in college. There have been three hazing deaths that have only been
looked over quickly and there have been multiple rape cases that no one has done anything
about. In the past two years, fraternities have had deaths due to hazing, multiple rape and
sexual assaults, yet the presidents and leaders of these colleges and fraternities are only now
Although fraternities may seem fun, there have been a lot of deaths due to students
hazing. In the year 2017, three fraternity pledges were killed due to hazing related incidents.
Tim Piazza died due to an intoxication of alcohol and then fell down a fleet of stairs in a
fraternity house in February 2017. Piazza was only 19 when he was walking around drunk in the
fraternity house right before he fell down those stairs. None of his “brothers” called for help
until hours later (Brown). Andrew Coffey was only 20 years old when he died in November at a
“big brother night” party that the committee had organized. Coffey drank a bottle of Wild
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Turkey 101 Bourbon bought by his “brothers.” He died because his fellow “brothers” told
Coffey to participate in the hazing ritual. Maxwell Gruver was announced dead at a hospital in
mid-September following an initiation called “Bible Study.” In “Bible Study,” pledges were
ordered to drink repeatedly to become a fraternity member. After drinking so much, Gruver
had passed out but never woke up, so his “brothers” finally called for help but after multiple
hours of drinking (Biemiller). These parties that include hazing have ruin families, friends, and
other people’s lives. Hazing has left a huge impact and will be forever reminded by those family
members. As can be seen, fraternities are not as fun as they seem. In fact, there are hazing
incidents that have led to three deaths and will lead to more if presidents and leaders don’t
At the same time, fraternities are also raping and sexually assaulting young women
because they think it is okay and acceptable to do. Women have been abused, sexually
assaulted, and harassed by fraternities across the United Sates, and no news feeds or networks
are talking about it (Rekic). Men in fraternities are down-sizing women and making them seem
as little as possible. They are treating women like whores and sluts even though they do not
possess such ruthless names. It is more likely that a woman will be sexually abused in a college
fraternity, then in a regular college dorm (Martin, Yancey and Hummer). Fraternities have
parties, and those parties are used for sexually assaulting women where they have no power
and can’t do anything but stay and be quiet. The men in these fraternities are using women and
mistreating them. Fraternity leaders are saying “boys will be boys,” and don’t take the rapes
serious or decide to investigate them. The leaders and captains say the rapes are just jokes and
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laughs to have with other classmates and fellow friends. Given these points, rapes and sexual
As hazing-related incidents and rapes continue, leaders and presidents are only now
looking at these problems. In April 2018, three presidents talked about trying to change the
way fraternities are treating their pledges and women (Brown). These presidents were
discussing the incidents that they have been made aware of but haven’t been able to do
anything about. They believe that it is now time to change the way fraternities are treating the
other pledges and many women. The trio was pleased to see that multiple administrators felt
the same as they did. Since the deaths of Tim Piazza, Andrew Coffey, and Maxwell Gruver,
multiple administrators have had lots of thought and decided that something does need to be
done. Hazing in Pennsylvania is now illegal, and prosecutors have filed many alcohol-related
frowned upon and people are trying to make it illegal as well. There are multiple states that
want hazing to be illegal, but the state officers cannot get this to take place because not
everyone thinks hazing is a problem. As has been noted, the presidents are only now taking
these issues to hand when they should have noticed these problems a long time ago.
All in all, fraternities have had deaths because of hazing and multiple rape cases, yet the
administrators and presidents are only now looking into these problems. Three students-of
which were all young and smart-died due to hazing-related incidents. Tim Piazza,19, drank too
much and fell down a flight of stairs, Andrew Coffey, 20, was at a “big brother night” party, and
was given Wild Turkey 101 Bourbon by the committee and drank himself to death, and Maxwell
Gruver, 18, was in “Bible Study,” where he was forced to drink and then consumed to much
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which lead him to death as well. Women are being raped each night at fraternity parties and
there is nothing being done. These poor women are being shamed as sluts and whores when
there is no choice but for them to sit there and “take it.” Presidents and administrators are now
seeing what fraternities are really doing. They haven’t done anything until the year of 2017.
After all the deaths, assaults, and rapes, the councils are only now seeing what should be done.
Presidents are getting together to discuss what should be done and how to handle these
situations. Fraternities across the United States may seem fun at first, but when a woman gets
raped or a man gets killed because he wanted to be in a fraternity, it gets serious and
dangerous. In conclusion, fraternities are brutally hurting people and these presidents are only
now doing something when action should have been taken many years ago; maybe those three
students would still be alive if college administrators would have done something sooner.
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Works Cited
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Brown, Sarah. "Their Students Died at Frat Parties. Now These Presidents Are Demanding Real
Change." The Chronicle of Higher Education, 17 Aug. 2018, p. A18+. Academic OneFile,
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Martin, Patricia Yancey, and Robert A. Hummer. “Fraternities And Rape On Campus.” Gender &
Society, vol. 3, no. 4, 1 Dec. 1989, pp. 457–473., doi:10.1177/089124389003004004.
Rekic, Denis. “Why Fraternities Promote Misogyny and Should Be Removed.” The Northern
Times, 25 Jan. 2018, thenortherntimes.net/1467/opinion/why-fraternities-promote-
misogyny-and-should-be-removed/.