in the finger of the armored glove of Antonius, his right hand covered with blood and dirt.
1.2 The bird flies into a red
sky where it seems to be more covered by fog than any clear cloud. It is very easy to see that it is someplace in a street alley. Some sorts of a city limit. There is a brick wall filled with tubes and rare crumbling sculptures all around it.
1.3 Antonius stands looking SALMOS
up watching how the bird So you were waiting for me here. disappears inside the red I’m glad you kept your promise. sky. A voice is heard from You wanted to get rid of me. You the back. He is wearing some wanted to change, huh?! kind of a powered suit.
1.4 In the right side of Antonius
is possible to see an underground river filled with bodies and parts of garbage, parts of cars, robots, etc. Antonius is silent.
1.5 We can see the back of Salmos
(also wearing a power suit) and Antonius is still giving his back to Salmos. We can see a wider scenario, the horizon is somehow clear, a city very far, a wide river at both of their right sides, tunnels on their left sides, sculptures even a couple of bodies lying on the ground. They don’t look alike at all. Salmos and Antonius, I mean. Page 2
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2.1 Salmos is touching the ground.
2.2 We see that Salmos is touching
blood.
2.3 Salmos is painting something
with the blood.
2.4 There are three faces, one
happy, another serious and another sad face.
2.5 Salmos looks up. A shadow
reflects on him.
2.6 Salmos looks surprised but
smiling.
2.7 Antonius has delivered a
massive punch that destroyed the ground. Salmos dodges the attack.
2.8 Salmos is jumping and moving SALMOS
backwards. Of us, who is the shadow? Should we change? Should we create a new one? What are we?
2.9 There is fog surrounding
Antonius, we see part of his chest up to his face, the other parts of his body are clearly unwatchable because of the fog obviously caused by the attack he did against Salmos. Antonius is serious with hate and somehow horror in his eyes after hearing what Salmos just said. Page 3
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3.1 Antonius stands up from the
ground.
3.2 Salmos is carelessly seated on
the ground, his mouth smiles but his eyes are seriously looking at Antonius.
3.3 Antonius looks at the sky. ANTONIUS
We are the only ones that remain of our team. We are nothing but mere clones of a once good man brought back to life in the form of us. We are nothing but viruses, going from place to place killing, exterminating everything.
3.4 Salmos is standing up with one SALMOS
hand on the ground impulsing You make me wanna cry! Sure you himself getting up. do.
3.5 Salmos is completely stand up SALMOS
seriously looking at Antonius. We both know that we don’t know where we come from. But saying that we are clones of somebody else that died long ago is a very poor thing to say. Not to mention that you begun attacking me.
3.6 Antonius looks like he
realizes about something.
3.7 Antonius is sweating. Looking
calm and serious.
3.8 Salmos starts walking.
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4.1 Perspective view from the back
of Antonius we can see how Salmos is getting close by walking.
4.2 Viewing from the chest to the SALMOS
whole of his head Salmos is We are no clones nor even related walking, talking and seeing at by nothing except of what we do. Antonius. If guessing in this circumstances we are, then, I guess, we are survivors but we can’t remember being survivors of what. Or simply we erased something from our memories to keep things safe because of what we do. I’m not even sure if fighting to the death is the real answer.
4.3 Antonius smiles. ANTONIUS
For some reason, I know that if any of us survives this fight we will get to know why we know each other and why we can’t remember anything up to this point. So the answer is totally pointless.
4.4 Salmos looks serious, his face SALMOS
even shows a sad looking grin. I know what it is. Either way, you will never know.
4.5 With a smile on his face, ANTONIUS
showing fury in his eyes This is the reality of life, there is Antonius preparing right? Yes, it is. to attack.
4.6 We see the shadow of Antonius
reflecting on the wall in his right side. Page 5
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5.1 A close up into the shadow of
Antonius, something strange shows out of the shadow, like several tiny little eyes around a tiny brown and green head.
5.2 We see Salmos and his shadow
reflecting itself and also something weird coming out of it too.
5.3 Salmos runs to confront
Antonius.
5.4 Antonius is running directly
to Salmos in an offensive position of brutal attack.
5.5 Antonius and Salmos appears
in this same Panel getting close to each other. Antonius is jumping, while Salmos is running from below. We can clearly see the other side of the river and all those stacked things of a pyramid of garbage.
5.6 From the above part of that
pile of things in the river something is coming up from the insides of a part where the light doesn’t reach. Page 6
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6.1 The thing that is coming up BROWN-GREEN HEAD
is nothing but that strange Is coming to an end. We should Brown-Green Head with several better kill them now. No, we can’t eyes around it. This thing do that, we don’t know if there talks. The balloons come from are more of them. We better be different directions around careful and patiently absorb all it. their energies until one of them dies or them both. This is what we have learned.
6.2 Antonius is kicking at Salmos
in the stomach, it is hurting him, Salmos even spits blood like vomiting.
6.3 Almost instantly Salmos takes
some kind of a sword out of some part of his back.
6.4 Salmos attacks Antonius left
side with the sword doing a very fast move.
6.5 Antonius tries to evade the
attack but his left arm is easily cut off.
6.6 Antonius looks furious but
equally scared.
6.7 Antonius with a sudden move
and clearly losing balance of his body stretches his right arm.
6.8 With his right hand, Antonius
grabs Salmos head. Page 7
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7.1 Salmos is preparing another SALMOS
attack but is surprised by Grrrr!!! Antonius’ move which makes him desperately angry.
7.2 They both are falling to the
ground.
7.3 Antonius kicks with his left
foot the right arm of Salmos.
7.4 Some kind of energy is coming
out of Antonius right arm.
7.5 Salmos moves his arm with the
sword in another direction to blow Antonius chest.
7.6 Salmos head explodes.
7.7 Salmos makes a cut in the
chest of Antonius, but it causes superficial damage only.
7.8 Both bodies are in the ground.
7.9 Antonius is lying there on the ANTONIUS
ground looking at the sky. He You were wrong, Salmos. I can’t thinks for himself. remember nothing. No signs, no memories. I see, you were right.
7.10 His arm, through his powered ANTONIUS
suit is regenerating. Only remains the feeling that we were hurting each other forced to do it by something else. Page 8
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8.1 We see the headless body of ANTONIUS
Salmos. We got it all wrong. We lost sight of things. Just plane and simple darkness.
8.2 Antonius faints.
8.3 From the bulk of garbage BROWN-GREEN HEAD
and other things inside the He can’t see us. But he survived. river. The Brown-Green Head We got to find a way and get is growing like a tree with inside of him again, fight their several arms, but here are will which we can’t control. We several heads instead and each should get better and stronger and one of them saying different powerful. Those words. Yes. things to each other.
8.4 From a more wide open view of
that part of the river where the several Brown-Green Heads are, something is appearing from above.
8.5 It looks like a spaceship
materializing out of the invisible.
8.6 The shadow of the spaceship is BROWN-GREEN HEAD
covering the Brown-Green Head, It was a trap. We got careless. it realizes about it, probably too late.
8.7 A mechanical arm is out of the
below part of the ship and it deploys some kind of energy light pointing and covering the whole of that Brown-Green Head. Page 9
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9.1 A view from above looking down VOICE
at where Antonius is inside Negative, no signs of life on any the spaceship looking at the of them. But in one of them the pilot looking down. His voice arm is regenerating though. is heard.
9.2 At the top of the garbage ANOTHER VOICE
where the Brown-Green Head No. The machines inside the suits was, there is nothing but sometimes makes mistakes. We can’t smoke. afford to lose another person.
9.3 The spaceship flies across the
sky.
9.4 The spaceship is looking more
like a shooting star.
9.5 We are getting a closer look
from above looking at the bodies of Antonius and Salmos. But this time not inside the spaceship which is very far now but still visible from where is Antonius.
9.6 Antonius arm is almost
completely regenerated.
9.7 We are getting a closer look
at Antonius face, from his chest, looks like he is trying to open his eyes.
9.8 A close-up to Antonius face
opening his eyes.
9.9 A close-up from another
perspective but from the same range of circumference around Antonius. Or it could be from the same perspective anyways. Page 9
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9.10 The left arm of Antonius is
completely regenerated.
9.11 Antonius moving his head and ANTONIUS
eyes to his left side, looking Nice. A shooting star. at the sky, he is smiling.
9.12 We see the sky from the
right side of Antonius on the ground. Very far is the spaceship moving fast, a ray of light closely behind it.