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Gabriel Marquez
Professor Presnell
UWRT 1104
23 April 2019
Throughout the past couple of decades, the topic of traumatic brain injuries and more
specifically the topic of concussions in the game of football has now recently become to emerge
into a major issue that the National Football League (NFL) faces. The NFL has constantly
continued to receive backlash from the media stemming from the 2007 season due to the NFL
not reporting concussion incidence rates from each position. In order to help tackle and resolve
this issue, the NFL has constantly been introducing a variety of measures in order to make the
sport of football as safe as it can possibly be every possible measure being aimed at solving just
one question; how can the quality of football be improved to become a safer sport to play in
order to reduce the amount of concussions that occur as a result of it? Even after such regulation
changes and increased media scrutiny, the lack of available data and statistics suggests the need
for an evaluation of current concussion incidences in football to validate the accuracy of past
One of the negative consequences that comes as a result of participating and playing such
a violent sport that football is, are the long-term impacts that come from taking repeated blows to
the head. Aaron Yengo-Kahn's article, "Concussions in the National Football League: A Current
Concepts Review," begins by stating about how significant attention has been directed toward
contact sports, particularly football. As human beings, our brains were not made to withstand
countless blows to the head, but as we see in the game of football, it happens on almost every
play which is a big reason that we have seen the evolution of the football helmet. Although it is
concussions have received increased recognition and attention in recent years. Zachary Kerr's
Concussions in Retired Professional Football Players," begins by stating about how the members
of the National Football League Retired Players Association responded to a baseline General
Health Survey in 2001 and they also completed a follow-up survey in 2010. Health survey results
published in 2007 revealed that 11.5 percent of players with 1 or 2 concussions believed
concussions had a permanent effect on memory, while 31.1 percent of retirees reporting three or
more concussions held this belief. The long-term cognitive effects of concussion have been
Approximately 65% of all respondents self-reported sustaining at least 1 concussion during their
professional careers. Professional football players self-reporting concussions are at greater risk
for having depressive episodes later in life compared with those retired players self-reporting no
concussions. The long-term cognitive effects of concussion have been studied predominantly in a
The N.F.L. has stated that the number of concussions from the 2017 season had been
reduced by 11.3 percent when it was then compared with the 2016 season’s record high
percentage. The reason because of this is believed to be because we are seeing an increase in the
number of players that are now reporting their suspected head injuries. During the 2018 playoffs,
only three players were diagnosed with concussions which was a 70 percent decline from 2017.
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In 2002-2007, 152 players had repeat concussions and four of the players had three or more head
injuries. During 2002-2007, over half of the players with repeat concussions were removed from
play, and fewer returned immediately. For adolescents and younger adults, sports tend to
contribute to a substantial proportion of traumatic brain injuries (TBI), particularly mild TBI or
concussions within studies of high school and collegiate football players particularly reporting
high concussion rates. The concussion rate among professional football players in the National
Football League (NFL) is also higher than most other sports, with 0.41 concussions per NFL
game with quarterbacks, wide receivers, tight ends, and defensive backs being at the highest risk.
NFL players serve as a useful study unit because of the availability of public data sources. Sport-
related concussions are a significant public health problem, with an estimated 3.8 million
concussions per year occurring in the United States during sport and recreational activities.
Concussions in the National Football League have been a topic of interest now for over two
decades. Over the cumulative twelve-year period of study, 353 of 1200 players experienced a
repeat concussion, with 126 players having three or more concussions and twelve players
sustaining five or more concussions. The odds for a repeat concussion were highest for
quarterbacks and tight ends. Loss of consciousness and medical action were taken and the data
on repeat concussions were analyzed for the twelve years and compared between the two
periods. The study of concussions in the NFL has been limited by lack of recent empirical data,
reliance on self-reported concussion history, and ascertainment bias of brains donated for
autopsy studies. The positions that were most often associated with repeat concussion in 2002-
2007 were the defensive secondary, kicking unit, running back, and linebacker.
The NFL is attempting to make the sport of football a somewhat safer game to play by
enhancing the game through rule changes and adding more on-field personnel because the league
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has been trying now for years to reduce concussions. Once a wraparound hat made of leather, our
modern helmets that we see today are aimed at softening these repeated blows to the head with
special technology placed within them in order to reduce the movement of the brain within the
head which is what ultimately leads to a concussion. The highest level of football, the National
Football League (NFL), has received significant attention and criticism regarding player
management and safety after mild traumatic brain injury. The highest level of football, the NFL,
has received significant attention and criticism regarding player management and safety after
mild traumatic brain injury. The scientific community, as well as the public, should be cautious
Several review articles have reported data related to concussion in the NFL, but an
adequate review and synthesis of data regarding NFL concussions is currently lacking. Medical
spotters at games are currently pulling more athletes aside to exam them to determine whether or
not they are fit enough to continue playing. Ira Casson's article, "Repeat Concussions in the
National Football League," begins by stating how since 1996, team physicians and athletic
trainers in the National Football League (NFL) have been collecting data on the clinical signs
and symptoms, medical action, and management of concussions to provide a basis for
improvements in player safety. Several review articles have reported data related to concussion
in the NFL, but an adequate review and synthesis of data regarding NFL concussions is currently
lacking.
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Works Cited
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