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Montage of messages and dates being crossed out.

FADE IN:

INT FAY'S BISTRO -DAY

Camera tracks our dater walking into the Bistro and looking around for our

protagonist.

FABIAN

(confident)

Becky?

Camera tracks our dater turning around and then immediately cuts to Close up of her
face of realisation. Camera then cuts to a pan as she goes to sit down at the table.

Camera cuts to an over the shoulder from the dater’s perspective facing our
protagonists
BECKY
(Shocked)

…UHM So, you look a bit…

Camera cuts to Close up of protagonist.


FABIAN
Close up of dater
Different?

BECKY
(Feeing awkward don’t know what to say)
Well Yeah

FABIAN
(Confident, but with a hint of cheekiness. Protagonists takes of glasses as he says
the line)
Ah, yeah, I wasn’t wearing glasses in my pics

Camera cuts to a Close up of dater speechless.

Awkward silence high angle shot.

Camera cuts to an over the shoulder from the protagonists perspective facing the
daters
FABIAN

As it happens you’re more beautiful than your pics


BECKY
(looking flattered)
Er..ha..er. thanks…

Fabian
And you’re even a rock climber?

BECKY
Yeah I wanted to meet someone to climb with
Camera cuts to an over the shoulder from the dater’s perspective facing our
protagonists

FABIAN
I loved it
Close up of protagonists looking sad

BECKY
(Nervous and worried.)
Oh you don’t mean
Camera cuts to an over the shoulder from the protagonists perspective facing the
daters

FABIAN
(Sad)
Yeah

Close up of dater shocked face

Awkward silence

The camera follows the dater, tracking downwards, looking at the protagonist’s leg.

Low angle of leg. Leg twitches. Movement.

Close up of protagonist looking at leg shocked

Close up of dater looking at leg shocked

Close up of protagonist looking at leg shocked

Close up of dater looking at leg shocked

Over the shoulder from protagonist point of view

FABIAN
(Sarcastic shock)
OH MY GOD, IT’S A MIRACLE! Ah, no, just kidding..
No accident, I was born a legend. Don’t panic, I can really feel everything down
there, if you get what I mean.
Becky
(Looks a little embarrassed)

FABIAN
Excuse me, I’m just going to pop to the gents.
Then, we can move on?
BECKY
Oh ok, do I need to help with anything?
FABIAN
(Cheeky)
No, no. I’m good.
Close up of dater sat on her own.

Fabian returns

Fabian
Ah amazing, you stayed, I was worried you might…
(nods head to the right)

Becky
Really? Ok well I’ll admit once I saw you weren’t exactly the guy in your pics,(flexes
her muscles) I did worry about your honesty a bit. I thought I was going to have to
call my mate and make something up to get out of here

Close up of protagonist facing the dater


FABIAN
Yeah, I know what you mean I usually say I have to go to bathroom and climb out
the window

FABIAN
Are we all set here?
Staff member walks across to the table, with bill in hand. Camera tracks.

Close up of staff member talking from a low angle. Camera looking up at the staff
member.
STAFF MEMBER
I am going to give this to her ok?

Close-up of protagonist looking at staff member


FABIAN
(Cheeky)
Yeah, bonus!
Age of equality n’all that

Becky
Wow you really know how to treat a lady

FABIAN
I’m kidding of course, please allow me.
Anyway, I know a really good bar down the road, do you fancy a drink?

Becky
Yeah you know what, a drink would be great. I’ll give you a shout if you like.

Fabian
Great, thanks.

Fabian
Don’t forget, I can only have one drink since I’m driving!
The two both smile and leave

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