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Corey Habecker
Mrs. Rutan
Creative Writing
17 April 2019
My cheap N ew Balance shoes planted on the rough turf: I felt empty. Running and exercising,
doing bro things like seeing who could bench more; I was gonna fit in, be a straight football
jock. The only thing that could amount to the barrel of toxic masculinity that was gonna
overcome me was the fact that I was a full fledged raging homosexual.
ANGER
Now I was never that kid in middle school that was gonna cut themself then post pictures on
snapchat for sympathy. I was never the one to cut myself at all, actually. It wasn’t even sad, it
was angering, I wanted to scream. I wanted to end it all furiously, but I could never do it
because I cared. That’s all that kept me from breathing this very moment that I’m writing this,
and I thank God that I cared. Anywho, I got in a ton of fights in middle school. I would normally
just snap on people. Steam would shoot out of my ears and my face would turn to a beet red;
swearing was the first thing that came to mind, and that didn’t go over well with the principal.
fight it, yell, scream and kick
block it out, it's just a tick
I could never tell anyone how I was feeling or how I was doing. I didn’t even have a best friend
that I could secretly come out to. I had to bottle up all my feelings, and that hurt. I had been so
angry and frustrated that I just wanted to give up. I wanted everyone and everything around
me to just go away because nobody was helping me. Better yet, I wasn’t even helping myself.
Caleb has always had anger issues, and what I wouldn’t give to be able to put a hole in the wall
and it be justified. If I were granted just one moment where I could throw and break everything
I could see.
BARGAINING
Surely I could meet halfway and just be bisexual. I could one day like girls and one day like
boys, or I could just get married to a girl and just not like boys as much. Surely I could do tons of
things. I could always repent for thy sins and hope and pray that one day I would wake up
magically arising out of bed going “Oh wow this works!”. It was exciting to know that I could get
out of a situation.
he’d be the first to convert to straight
a trade off won’t just seal your fate
I would roam the halls of the Harper Creek Middle School, acting as straight as could be. Too
bad toxic masculinity is what I’m most allergic to now as an openly gay kid. I distinctly
remember all of the girls that would go “Oh yeah, Corey is gay” and brush me off as if I were a
hair on their shoulder. I would brush them off the same, I was so obviously straight and they
didn’t know what they were talking about. Actors usually drop the act once they go backstage,
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but I was acting even when I was by myself. I was trying to sell a role to myself! Hilarious,
right?
DEPRESSION
Who was I kidding? Straight? I wasn’t destined for happiness; I was destined for a life of hating
myself. I would hide myself under my covers, tears streaming down my face like the Niagara
Falls. My pillow was stained. Stained just like the heart that resided in little Corey. Stained with
depression.
it’s over now kid, happiness is dying
you can cry, you can lie, just stop trying
Walking through school with a fake smile on my face was so easy. I should be nominated for an
Oscar. Reflecting back, it was almost like I was empty. I know, it’s so cliché, but I would laugh
and talk with friends, but there was genuinely nothing to take from it. I would just go home,
and question why it’s like this: Why did it have to be this way? Why me? I was meant for failure.
This is who I am. A failure.
ACCEPTANCE
It was enough. I had enough. All of my life I had been keeping a deadly secret that was me being
what w asn’t accepted b y others. Eventually I knew that if I was not standing for something, I
was falling for everything. After endless nights of just staring at my ceiling. I grabbed my
weapon, and that was my phone. I would tell everyone that I was gay via text, did you really
expect me to tell them in person?!
they want some drama, they want a grand show,
i’m coming out, i want the world to know
The only bad response I had gotten to coming out was my bible thumping Christian cousins.
Now don’t get me wrong, I do love me some Jesus, but really, cmon now! Anyways, they didn’t
bother me, and they still dont. Now I am as happy and open as can be, and I’ve never been
striving more. When I was in my darkest moments, I was on a crashing plane, and the only
thing that didn’t send me head first into a coffin was hope. I held on, and I thank myself
everyday that I waited it out, and that I was brave, and that I overcame, and I told myself that
it really d
oesn’t m
atter what O THERS want as long as it’s what YOU want.
And to my fellow readers out there wondering about the Hole of Grief, not only did I escape it,
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I buried the hole.