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Kishōtenketsu for Beginners – An

Introduction to Four Act Story Structure

Recently we presented a series of articles on three-act structure here on Mythic Scribes. This inspired
me to try and write an article about a kind of four act structure known as Kishōtenketsu. It’s used in
classical Chinese, Korean, and Japanese narratives, and is often mentioned as an example of a story
structure without conflict.

Now, I’m not well versed in narrative theory. I find it interesting, but I’m far from an expert, and most of
what I know of writing I have figured out myself (though the forums here on Mythic Scribes have been
invaluable in doing just that). As such, this article will really only scratch the surface of Kishōtenketsu.

I’ll begin by explaining the word itself and the basic principles behind the story structure. I’ll then show
two examples of stories told in this way, and finally I’ll give a few tips I’ve found useful for wrapping my
head around this whole concept.

That’s not all though. Like I mentioned, this will be very basic, so I have included a list of links to further
reading for those of you who are interested in digging a little deeper into this.

Sounds good? Okay, here we go!

Kishōtenketsu

Let’s start with the word itself. It’s made up of the names of the four different acts of the structure:

 Ki : Introduction

 Shō : Development

 Ten : Twist (complication)

 Ketsu : Conclusion (reconciliation)

The first act is self explanatory. It’s where we’re introduced to the story and we get to know the
characters taking part and the world they live in.

Similarly, the second act also doesn’t require much explanation. This is where we get to know the
characters a little better. We learn about their relation to each other and their place in the world. This is
where we develop an emotional connection to the characters.

The third act however, the twist, is where things get a bit complicated. I’ve seen this act referred to as
complication, and while I don’t think that’s technically correct, I feel it’s a better name. Calling it a twist
brings with it associations to plot-twists as we know them from more traditional western narratives.

This isn’t necessarily the case here. It can be, but it doesn’t have to. However, it’s often something
unexpected, and usually unrelated to what’s happened in the first two acts.
Finally, the fourth act is about the impact of the third act on the first two acts. This is why I like the term
reconciliation. The third act will affect the situation presented in the first and second act, and in the
fourth act the state of the world in first and second act is reconciled with the events of the the third.

No Conflict?

I mentioned earlier that Kishōtenketsu is a story structure without conflict. This doesn’t mean there isn’t
any conflict in stories told through this kind of story structure, only that it’s not built into the structure
by default.

Let’s compare it with the three act structure:

In the first act, a conflict is introduced. In the second act the conflict is escalated, and in the third it is
resolved. As we see, the conflict is an integral part of the structure as a whole. That’s not the case in
Kishōtenketsu. In none of the four acts is a conflict a requirement.

This holds true even for the third act. The complication doesn’t have be something that the character
struggles against – but it can be.

Examples

Let’s look at two examples. First one I’ve made up myself just for this article, and then a favorite movie
of mine: Kiki’s Delivery Service.

Example 1 – A Made Up Story

This is the story of a fisherman and his family.

 Ki: In act one we see the fisherman in his boat out to sea. He’s sitting around fishing and waiting
for a catch. It’s a long day and he hasn’t had much of a catch.

 Shō: In the second act the fisherman decides it’s time for him to return home. It’s late and he
longs to be reunited with his wife and children. He loves the sea, but he loves his family more.

 Ten: The third act is about a woman hiding in the forest with two crying children. She’s the
fisherman’s wife, and she’s hiding because their village got attacked by brigands.

 Ketsu: The fourth act is about how the fisherman reunites with his family in the ruins of the
burned-down village. Then they all set off in his boat to find another village.

The introduction is where we first meet the fisherman. In the second act we get to know him a little
better. We learn about his relation to the sea, and to his family, and we learn about his life and
struggles. Perhaps it’s been a bad year and food supplies are low.

In the third act, we have no idea what happened with the fisherman. We see his wife hiding, and
perhaps we don’t even know it’s his wife at first. We don’t know if she’ll make it, and we don’t know if
the fisherman will come home while the brigands are still ransacking the town. What will happen?

This is the complication.


It’s not a conflict though. The woman and her children are hiding. Perhaps the kids are crying and the
woman is struggling to keep them quiet, but then again, there may not even be any brigands nearby.
The woman and her children may be perfectly safe.

But even then there is still tension, and it comes from the contrast between what we’ve seen in the past
(the fisherman on his way home after a day on the sea), and what we’re seeing at the moment (the
village being ransacked).

Finally, the first two acts are reconciled with the third one. The fisherman reunites with his family, but as
their village is no more they have to find somewhere else to live.

Example 2 – Kiki’s Delivery Service

Kiki’s Delivery Service (IMDb Page) is a Japanese animated movie directed by Hayao Miyazaki. The
synopsis on IMDB reads:

A young witch, on her mandatory year of independent life, finds fitting into a new community difficult
while she supports herself by running an air courier service.

The movie is from 1989, and the plot isn’t built on any major surprise, but don’t worry, I’m going to
leave out a lot of details to try and avoid spoilers.

Ki

In the first act we’re introduced to Kiki. It shows how she bids her friends and family farewell and sets
off into the world on her flying broomstick. Eventually she ends up in a big city where she decides to
stay. Among the people she meets is a friendly woman who runs a bakery and who lets Kiki stay in a
spare room.

Kiki doesn’t quite feel at home in the big city which is very different from her own little village.

Shō

In order to get by and to pay for her accommodation, Kiki starts a delivery service. In this way she ends
up meeting a lot of new people, some of them friendly, some of them less pleasant. Among them is the
boy Tombo who’s an avid fan of all things aviation, and he falls for Kiki like a pile of bricks.

Kiki is beginning to doubt whether a witch can be accepted in such a big city.

Ten

Tombo gets an opportunity to ride on a big dirigible that’s visiting the city. Having dreamt all his life
about flying he’s really excited about it and can’t wait to go. When he finally gets there, something
happens and poor Tombo ends up hanging from the dirigible in a rope while the dirigible drifts across
the town without anyone being able to control it.

Tombo gets into trouble and Kiki saves the day.

Ketsu

Life goes back to normal again. Only now, Kiki is an accepted part of the city. She’s good friends with
Tombo. Her delivery service is doing well, and she feels like she’s found her place in life.
Everything works out well in the end.

Comments

If you’ve seen the movie you’ll have noticed that I left out a lot. This is to avoid spoilers and to try and
make the example as clear as possible. If you haven’t seen the movie, I strongly recommend it. There’s a
lot more to it than what I’ve mentioned above.

Tips and Tricks

If you’ve not come across Kishōtenketsu before this may all seem a little bit weird to you. I know it did to
me when I first heard about it.

One thing that might help is to think about it, not as a different way of telling a story, but as focusing on
different aspects of the story.

Let’s have a look at A New Hope, which was analysed in the article series about Three Act Structure.
How would you go about telling that through Kishōtenketsu? Perhaps, you could tell the story from Han
Solo’s perspective? Let’s see how that goes:

 Ki: You introduced Han and Chewie – a smuggler and his sidekick. They’re just kicking around in
Mos Eisley, not doing very much.

 Sho: Some old guy shows up and wants transport for himself and his friend, and their robots.
You introduce the new characters, and Han’s ship, and you show your audience how Han’s a
down to earth guy who doesn’t believe in hokey religions. You show that Chewie is a bit of a
grumpy fella who doesn’t like losing.

 Ten: This is where things go weird and all of a sudden Han finds himself all dressed up in
imperial armor, arguing with some kind of princess while trying not to get squished by a garbage
compactor. This was not part of the plan, but eventually he gets through it, gets his pay and
takes his leave.

 Ketsu: Everything’s back to normal. Let’s go pay back that old debt and then see if some nice
easy way of making some fast bucks show up. Only, something’s not quite right. The recent
event has changed Han in some way, and he decides to head back and see what that princess is
up to…

Something like that, maybe? How would you have done it?

Another thing you can do when planning out a Kishōtenketsu story is to make a list of what you need
each of the four acts to achieve. In that way, you’re dividing up the story into smaller goals that are
easier to achieve, and which will eventually combine into a greater whole.

When building these lists I found it helpful to give each act a specific kind of task – similar to the names
of the acts. The words I use for these tasks are introduce, establish, reveal, and conclude. Some
examples could be:

 Ki: Introduce Han Solo.

 Sho: Establish that Han Solo doesn’t believe in hokey religions.


 Ten: Reveal that the empire blew up the planet Han’s passengers wanted to go to.

 Ketsu: Conclude that Han has his good sides too.

Of course, the list for each act would include a whole lot of other items as well, this is just to illustrate
the principle. I hope it helps you come to grips a little better with Kishōtenketsu, especially if you
haven’t encountered the concept before at all.

If you have any questions, feel free to post them in the comments section here, or on the forums.

Summary

You should now have a slightly better idea of what Kishōtenketsu is, but let’s repeat it one last time.
There are four acts:

 Ki for introduction.

 Shō for development.

 Ten for complication.

 Ketsu for reconciliation.

In this way, the story structure provides a way to write a story without inherent conflict.

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