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MODULE
For ENGLISH SPM
PAPER 1 CREATIVE WRITING (SECTION B)

NAME – AGE – SCHOOL – HOME – AMBITION-HOBBIES –FAMILY –FAVOURITES

GOING TO THE BEACH

BY EN. AHMAD SHAHRUL AZHAN BIN IBRAHIM

GURU CEMERLANG BAHASA INGGERIS
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 Before I start with my essay, I want to tell you about myself.

 Before I begin my essay, I want to tell you about myself.
 Hello, let me tell you about myself first.
 Before we begin, let me tell you about myself.
 Before I start, let me share with you about myself.

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 My name is Azman Izwan bin Irfan.
 Azman Izwan bin Irfan is my name.
 The person writing this essay is me, Azman Izwan bin Irfan.
 The[ boy / girl ] writing this essay is me Azman Izwan bin Irfan / Suzaila Hanisya bt Irman
 Do you want to know my name? Well, my name is Azman Izwan bin Irfan.

 People call me “catfish”, that is my nick name.

 My nick name is “catfish”.
 Everybody calls me “catfish”. It is my nickname.
 I have a nickname and it is called ‘catfish’.

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 I am 17 years old.
 I am a 17 year old [student/boy/girl]
 I was born on 17 March 1998, and now I am 17 years old.
 My mother gave birth to me 17 years ago.
 In 1998 , I was born and now I am 17 years old.

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 I study at SMK Dato Eilan Qirin.
 I am a student in SMK Dato Eilan Qirin.
 Every day I go to SMK Dato Eilan Qirin to study.
 As a teenager, my duty is to study, and my school’s name is SMK Dato Qirin.
 I am a student at University Kelantan Malaysia.

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 I am from Sand Orchard Village, Jeli.
 I live at Sand Orchard Village, Jeli.
 My home is at Sand Orchard Village, Jeli.
 I am a resident at Sand Orchard Village, Jeli.
 Do you know where is the Sand Orchard Village? It is in Jeli, Kelantan, and that is
where I am from.

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 One day I want to be [ a / an ] teacher
 Do you know that one day I want/wish to be [ a / an ] teacher
 I have an ambition, one day, I wish to be [ a / an ] teacher
 I have a passion to be [ a / an ] teacher.
 I have a dream to be a [ a / an ] teacher one day.
 I am very interested in becoming [ a / an ] teacher one day

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 My hobbies are reading books and surfing the internet.
 Do you know that I like to read books and surf the internet.
 During my free time I like to read books and surf the internet.
 I love reading books and surfing the internet.
 Do you want to know what are my hobbies? Well, I love to read books and surf
the internet.

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 Now I want to share with you about my family.
 Next, I want to tell you about my family.
 Now, let me tell you about my family.
 Do you want to know about my family? Let me share.

 My father is a businessman. His name is Irfan bin Ithnin

 My beloved father is a businessman. His name is Irfan bin Ithnin
 The person I love most is my dad. His name is Irfan bin Ithnin . He is a
businessman.
 My father is my idol, His name is Irfan bin Ithnin . He is a businessman

 He is 45 years old.
 He is a 45 year old man.
 He is 40-ish

 He is the best dad in the world

 He is very [ kind / handsome / caring ]

 I love my father very much.

 I always love my father.

 My mother is a housewife. Her name is Sheila binti Rahman

 My darling mother is a housewife. Her name is Sheila binti Rahman
 The next person I love most is my mother. Her name is Sheila binti
Rahman. She is a housewife

 She is 45 years old.

 She is a 45 year old woman.
 She is 40-ish

 My mother is very [ caring / beautiful / lovely/ kind ]

 My mother also likes to cook.

 She is the best mom in the world

 I love my mom forever and ever.

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  I have 3 brothers and 2 sisters.
 I have 3 loving brothers and 2 lovely sisters.
 Do you want to know about my sibling? Well, I have 3
loving brothers and 2 lovely sisters.
 I don’t have any brothers. / I don’t have any sisters.

 My brothers are Airil Haq, Aivan Husz and Aikil Hans.
They are 15, 19 and 20 years old.
 My sisters are Sherry Aini and Sherry Aida. They are 4
and 10 years old

 I love them very much.

 I love my family very much.

 I have many favourites.

 Do you want to know about my favourites?
F  Now I want to talk about my favourites.
 Now let me share with you the things that I like.

 My favourite food is Thai Fried Rice

 Thai Fried Rice is my favourite food.
 The food that I like/ love is Thai Fried Rice

 My favourite drink is Carrot Juice

 Carrot Juice is my favourite drink.
 The drink that I like/ love is Carrot Juice
Next
 My favourite actor is Aaron Aziz
 Aaron Aziz is my favourite actor.
 The actor that I like/ love is Aaron Aziz

 My favourite movie is Captain America

 Captain America is my favourite movie.
 The movie that I like/ love is Captain America
Finally
 My favourite singer is Taylor Swift
 Taylor Swift is my favourite singer.
 The singer that I like / love is Taylor Swift

 That is all about me, now let’s begin with my essay.

 That’s all about myself, now we move on with my essay

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 In this essay, I want to talk about my friend/ my cousin/ my neighbour/ a fisherman / a teacher
*.
 I want to share with you a story about my friend/ my cousin/ my neighbour/ a fisherman / a
teacher *. .

*refer to the question.

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 His / Her name is Dicky bin Dharma.
 Dicky bin Dharma is his /her name.

 People call him / her “Ducky”, that is his /her nick name.
 His / Her nick name is “Ducky”.
 Everybody calls me him / her “Ducky”, It is his /her nickname.
 He / She has a nickname and it is called ‘Ducky’.

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 He / She is 17 years old.
 He / She is a 17 year old [student/boy/girl/ man]
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 He / She studies at SMK Dato Eilan Qirin.
 He / She is a student in SMK Dato Eilan Qirin.
 Every day, he / she goes to SMK Dato Eilan Qirin to study.
 He / She is a student at University Kelantan Malaysia.

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 He / She is from Sand Orchard Village, Jeli.
 He / She lives at Sand Orchard Village, Jeli.
 His / Her home is at Sand Orchard Village, Jeli.
 He / She is a resident at Sand Orchard Village, Jeli.

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 One day He / She wants to be [ a / an ] teacher
 Do you know that one day He / She wants/wishes to be [ a / an ] teacher
 He / She has an ambition, one day, He / She wishes to be [ a / an ] teacher
 He / She has a passion to be [ a / an ] teacher.
 He / She has a dream to be a [ a / an ] teacher one day.

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 His / Her hobbies are reading books and surfing the internet.
 Do you know that He / She likes to read books and surf the internet.
 During his /her free time He / She likes to read books and surf the internet.
 He / She loves reading books and surfing the internet.

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 Now I want to share with you about his / her family.
 Next, I want to tell you about his / her family.
 Now, let me tell you about his / her family.

 His/ Her father is a businessman. His name is Izmin bin Iskandar

 His/ Her beloved father is a businessman. His name is Izmin bin
Iskandar
 The person she / he loves most is his / her dad. His name is Izmin bin
Iskandar . He is a businessman.

 He is 45 years old.
 He is a 45 year old man.
 He is 40-ish

 He is the best dad in the world

 He is very [ kind / handsome / caring ]

 She / He love his / her father very much.

 His/ Her mother is a housewife. Her name is Sheila binti Rahman

 His/ Her darling mother is a housewife. Her name is Sheila binti
Rahman

 She is 45 years old.

 She is a 45 year old woman.
 She is 40-ish

 His/ Her mother is very [ caring / beautiful / lovely/

kind ]
 He/ She loves his / her mom forever and ever.
 His/ Her mother also likes to cook.
  He/ She has 2 brothers and 2 sisters.
 He/ She has 2 loving brothers and 2 lovely sisters.
 He/ She doesn’t have any brothers. / He/ She doesn’t
have any sisters.

 His / Her brothers are Aimin and Asreez. They are 15,
20 years old.
 His / Her sisters are Sherry Aini and Sherry Aida. They
are 4 and 10 years old

 He/ She loves them very much.

 He/ She has many favourites.

 Now I want to talk about His / Her favourites.
F  Now let me share with you the things that He/ She
likes.

 His / Her favourite food is Thai Fried Rice

 Thai Fried Rice is His / Her favourite food.

 His / Her favourite drink is Carrot Juice

 Carrot Juice is His / Her favourite drink.

Next
 His / Her favourite actor is Aaron Aziz
 Aaron Aziz is His / Her favourite actor.

 His / Her favourite movie is Captain America

 Captain America is His / Her favourite movie.
 The movie that he/she likes/ loves is Captain America
Finally
 His / Her
Section B : Continuous Writing
favourite singer is Taylor Swift
 Taylor Swift is His / Her favourite singer.
 [50 marks]
Write a composition of about 350 words on one of the following topics.

 That is all about my essay. Thank you very much.

Describe an unforgettable person.
 That is all about my essay, I hope you enjoy reading it.
1.

2. Write a story ending:

“… Thank goodness, I was all right.”
Mobile phones benefit our lives. Do you agree?
3. Things that I would do for my family.
4. Teachers

SAMPLE ANSWER :

Before I start, let me share with you about myself. My name is Azman Izwan bin Irfan. People call me
“catfish”, that is my nick name. I am 17 years old. Every day I go to SMK Dato Eilan Qirin to study. My
home is at Sand Orchard Village, Jeli. Do you know that one day I want/wish to be a teacher. My hobbies
are reading books and surfing the internet.
Now I want to share with you about my family. My father is a businessman. His name is Irfan bin
Ithnin. He is a 45 year old man. He is the best dad in the world. I love my father very much. The next
person I love most is my mother. Her name is Sheila binti Rahman. She is a housewife She is a 45 year old
woman. My mother is very [ caring / beautiful / lovely/ kind ]. I love my mom forever and ever. Do you
want to know about my sibling? Well, I have 3 loving brothers and 2 lovely sisters. My brothers are Airil
Haq, Aivan Husz and Aikil Hans. They are 15, 19 and 20 years old. My sisters are Sherry Aini and Sherry
Aida. They are 4 and 10 years old. I love my family very much.
Do you want to know about my favourites? My favourite food is Thai Fried Rice. My favourite food is
Thai Fried Rice. Aaron Aziz is my favourite actor. My favourite movie is Captain America. My favourite
singer is Taylor Swift. That’s all about myself, now we move on with my essay
In this essay, I want to talk about an unforgettable person. His name is Dicky bin Dharma. His
nick name is “Ducky”. He is 17 years old. He studies at SMK Dato Eilan Qirin. His home is at Sand
Orchard Village, Jeli. He has an ambition, one day, he wishes to be a teacher. During his free time He
/ She likes to read books and surf the internet.
Next, I want to tell you about his family. His beloved father is a businessman. His name is Izmin
bin Iskandar. He is a 45 year old man. He is very kind, handsome and caring. He love his father very
much. His darling mother is a housewife. Her name is Sheera binti Rahman. She is a 45 year old
woman. His mother is very caring, beautiful and kind. He has 2 loving brothers and 2 lovely sisters.
His brothers are Aimin and Asreez. They are 15, 20 years old.His sisters are Melisa and Mastura.
They are 4 and 10 years old. He loves them very much.
Now let me share with you the things that he likes. His favourite food is “Chicken Rice”. His
favourite drink is Apple Juice. Next, his favourite actor is Zizan. The movie that he loves is KL
Gangster. Finally, Yuna is his favourite singer.
That is all about my essay, I hope you enjoy reading it.
 GOING TO THE BEACH

WHEN  Last week/ Last month/ 3 days ago / 2 weeks ago/ It felt like yesterday that..

i. My friend/cousin/neighbour ___________ and I went to ___________ beach.

ii. It is Near /in the west of / in the south of/in the north of /in the east of / _____ ____

WHER iii. __________beach is very famous/popular/.

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iv. It is very beautiful/ amazing/ astonishing/

v. I went there in the morning / in the afternoon / in the evening / as soon as the Sun
opened its eyes/ in the crack of dawn

with my car/ my bike / a bus

**********2***********

i. I went there with my friend / my cousin/ my classmate / neighbor/?

ii. His/her name is____________________ and she/ he is ______ years old.

WHO
iii. His / her nickname is ______________ because she/ he is Very funny/ very cute/ very cool/ ?

iv. ____________ is kind / hardworking/ polite/ generous/ modest /charming / handsome/ ?

v. She / He is nice to everyone/ liked to help teachers/very friendly/ ?

vi. He / She likes to travel/ chat/ play football/ surf the internet/ play games / ?

vii. His / Her favourite food is Fried rice/ fried noodles/ nasi lemak/ chicken rice/ ?

viii. __________ admires Christiano Ronaldo/Justin Bieber/ Taylor Swift/ ?

ix. However, he/she dislikes Rihanna/ Nicky Minaj /?

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i. That day, the weather was sunny / bright/ hot/ gloomy/ chilly/ cold /?
WEATHE
R ii. I saw
 Coconut trees (swaying gracefully)
 Beautiful flowers (smiling beautifully)
SAW?  Birds (chirping happily)
 Tall mountains (standing proudly)
 Lakes (sleeping peacefully)

iii. It was an amazing / wonderful/ great experience

*************4*************

iv. 30 minutes/ 1 hour/ 45 minutes later, we stopped by at a restaurant to rest /

take a break.
v. The name of the restaurant was _________________
vi. This restaurant was clean/ famous/ popular/very inviting.
STOP
vii. There we ate
Fried rice/ fried noodles/ nasi lemak/ chicken rice/ ?
viii.
ix. It was delicious /scrumptious /so-so/ mouth-watering
x. Then, we drank Carrot juice/ plain water/ iced milo/ ?

xi. It was great/ good/ so-so / thirst-quenching.

xii. --------- later we continued our journey.

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i. After 30 minutes/ 1 hour/ ? we finally arrived.

ARRIVED
ii. We felt very excited/ refreshing/ alive/ ? and we went
straight away/ directly to the beach.
iii. We unpacked our bags and had a picnic.

iv. We ate Sandwiches/ fried rice/ crackers/ ?

v. On the beach, we saw

SAW
 (heavenly) Blue sky
 Beautiful clouds
 Crystal clear water
 Palm trees (swaying)
 Many people
 Beautiful scenery
 vi. Then, we
 Played volleyball
 Strolled around the beach
ACTIVITI
ES
 Caught crabs After that/ later /?
 Collected sea shells
 Built sandcastles
 Took pictures and selfie.

vii. We had a good time/ a wonderful time/ a whale of a time/ the time of
our life.

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viii. At night/ as darkness approached / as the moon and the stars came out
and play/ we set up our tent.

sang songs/ played guitar / shared ghost stories/ ?

ix. We relaxed by the camp fire and
NIGHT x. We looked / stared at the sky and saw dazzling/ beautiful stars.
xi. Then we slept/ drifted away in slumberland

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i. The next morning we went home, it was a great/ a beautiful/ a wonderful
GO BACK
experience.

The end????????

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[Answer the question ]

1. We had an accident, and my friend died/ passed away. (tragedy)

2. I help my friend to feel happy again (help a friend who is sad)
3. We had our exam and became successful because we don’t have
stress anymore. (success story)

Important note :

1. This essay can still be improved? Which part of the story you can change to make it better?

2. The story can fit questions such as :

 The trip
 An outing
 Famous destination
 An unforgettable event in life
 School activity.
SAMPLE ESSAY 1.

3 weeks ago, my brilliant friend, Zuddin Hafiz bin Che Hazmah and I went to Payang
Royo beach. It is in the west of Kg Tok Aliff Che Embong, Payang Royo beach is very popular.
It is very beautiful and amazing. . We went there early in the morning with my car.

I went there with my friend, his name is Zuddin Hafiz bin Che Hazmah and he is 17
years old. Zuddin nickname is Mike because he is cute. Mike is charming and handsome. He is
very friendly and liked to help people.. He likes to travel, play football and watch movies.His
favourite food is chicken rice, Ramen and Nasi lemak.. Mike admires Taylor Swift, Sir Syafiq
and Christiano Ronaldo. However, Mike hates Justin Bieber and Katy Perry.

That day, the weather was beautiful, bright and sunny. I saw coconut trees, beautiful
flowers and tall mountains. It was amazing.

30 minutes later, we stopped by at a restaurant to take a break. The name of the

Restaurant was Kiok Restaurant. The restaurant was clean and popular. There we ate fried
noodles and chicken rice. It was delicious. Then, we drank carrot juice, and it was good. 30
minutes later we continued our journey.

After 1 hour, we finally arrived. We felt very excited and alive. We went straight to the
beach. We unpacked our things and had a picnic, we ate sandwiches and crackers. On the beach
we saw the blue sky, beautiful clouds and crystal clear water. Then we played volleyball and
strolled around the beach. Later we took pictures and selfie, then we caught crabs and collected
seashells. We had a good time.
At night we set up our tent, we relaxed by the camp fire and sang songs, we also shared
ghost stories. We looked at the sky and saw beautiful stars.
The next morning we went home, it was a wonderful experience.
 SAMPLE ESSAY 2

Do you want to hear a story? I am sure you do. Now, let me tell you a story about my trip
to a very great place. I love the trip so much that I will never forget it. Well, let’s move on with
the story.
3 weeks ago, my brilliant friend, Zuddin Hafiz bin Che Hazmah and I went to Payang
Royo beach. Do you know where this is? It is in the west of Kg Tok Aliff Che Embong, just a
stone’s throw away from the famous Rayong Waterfall. Payang Royo beach is a very famous
destination, there are many tourists there. It is our favourite destination because it is very
beautiful and we never get bored with it. We went there early in the morning with my big and
vintage Honda car.
Well, as you know, I brought along my best friend for the trip, his name is Zuddin Hafiz
bin Che Hazmah and he just turned sweet 17 a few days ago. Zuddin nickname is Mike. He got
that nickname because he looked like the famous boxer, Mike Tyson. Mike is a charming and
handsome boy. Many girls go ga-ga over him. Mike is also very honest. He likes to travel and his
favourite food is strawberry cake. Mike admires Kelly Clarkson and Katy Perry. However, Mike
hates One Direction.
That day, the weather was beautiful, bright and sunny. During the wonderful journey, we
saw heavenly blue clouds in the sky. The beautiful trees were standing still. Then, I saw the
mountains were majestic and the lake was peaceful. It was so very picturesque. Furthermore, I
could also see birds chirping happily. Then, I witnessed a row of dazzling flowers. I wished I
could stop and picked them up. While on the road, there were a number of big cars. I believe
that it was the weekend, and many people were driving to go for a vacation. Nevertheless, it was
such a stunning view, and driving that day was hardly tiring.
2 hours later, we stopped by at a restaurant to rest for a while. The name of the
Restaurant was Mama JuJu’s Restaurant. The name was very funny to me because we had a
friend named Juju, and we kept joking that the restaurant was belonged to her. There we got to
eat fried noodles and chicken rice, both were ok, not too good, not too bad. My mother’s cooking
are far more superior! We also drank guava juice, and it was heaven!! 30 minutes later we
continued our journey.
After 1 hour, we finally arrived at our destination. We felt very excited and alive. We
unpacked our things and head to the beach. There, we had a picnic, we ate sandwiches, tom yum
soup and packets of crisps. We ate while enjoying the breath taking scenery. We saw crystal
clear water and many people walking by. Then, we strolled down the beach. It was very
relaxing. After that, Mike and I swam in the ocean. Mike went back to the shore and built
sandcastles. We also played volleyball with some friends there. We had a great time! Finally we
watched the sunset. It was amazing!
As darkness approached, we sat by the camp and shared ghost stories. Then we looked at
the sky and saw the dazzling stars smiling at us.
The next morning, it was time to go back. I enjoyed doing the activities. I had a whale of
a time. I will come again and visit this place. This is our favourite destination
 At the end of the day, I felt that it was a great journey. I will always remember it. So that
was my story, I hope you enjoy reading it as I enjoy writing it.