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When you analyse Band 9 essays,
you’ll notice something that can
change your writing.

Practically all of them will use

HEDGING.
Advantages of using HEDGING:

1. Increases your score because you

use a wider selection of grammar
constructions.
Advantages of using HEDGING:

2. You increase the amount of words

in your essay, (helpful for those who
struggle reaching 250).
Advantages of using HEDGING:

3. The essay has a more academic

style.
 What does HEDGING
mean?
In essay writing, it basically means to
limit or qualify your opinion to
avoid an over generalisation.
How to spot a non-hedged sentence:

A non-hedged sentence will most

likely present a belief as a fact.

Look for sweeping statements,

usually using the words WILL, ALL,
EVERYWHERE, ALWAYS, OR NEVER.
 WILL ALL
EVERYWHERE
ALWAYS NEVER
FOR EXAMPLE:
ALL German people are ALWAYS
punctual.

English people WILL act politely

when around others.
STUDENT'S EXAMPLE:

Over the last half of the century, young

members of society acquire extremely high
positions and power. This phenomenon will
cause enormously serious issues in the
future.

WHERE ARE THE PROBLEMS IN THOSE SENTENCES?

STUDENT'S EXAMPLE:

Over the last half of the century, young

members of society acquire extremely high
positions and power. This phenomenon will
cause enormously serious issues in the
future.

PROBLEMS
Over the last half of the century, young
members of society acquire extremely
high positions and power. This
phenomenon will cause enormously
serious issues in the future.

Does every young person really acquire

extremely high positions and power?
Over the last half of the century, young
members of society acquire extremely
high positions and power. This
phenomenon will cause enormously
serious issues in the future.

Will this phenomenon 100% definitely cause problems?

Probably not.
So we have to insert an element of probability.
HEDGED VERSION
Over the last half of the century, it is widely
believed that many young people have
acquired extremely high positions and
power. This phenomenon could cause
enormously serious issues in the future.
By using generalisations the
sentence avoids making strong
statements and presenting
statements as facts.

It wraps sentences in probabilities,

and opinions.
The first sentence was
transformed by using a 'that
clause'.

It could be suggested that...

It might be the case that...
It may be argued that..
It could be suggested that...
It might be the case that...
It may be argued that..

The second sentence was transformed by

changing WILL for a less certain modal verb
'could'. Other possible modal verbs are may,
might, could, must, would.
The second sentence could also be modified by placing
an adverb of frequency after 'WILL'.

This phenomenon will cause enormously serious

issues in the future.

This phenomenon will OFTEN cause enormously

serious issues in the future.

This phenomenon will USUALLY cause enormously

serious issues in the future.
WHAT NEEDS
'HEDGING' IN THIS
ESSAY?
A student's essay sent to me for correction.

People will always value luxurious things and

high status more than honest friendship and
family life. This can be seen everywhere, for
example parents always choose friends from
families with the same status. Therefore,
people are becoming more egoistic, and they
will separate from poorer people.
A student's essay sent to me for correction.

People will always value luxurious things and

high status more than honest friendship and
family life. This can be seen everywhere, for
example parents always choose friends from
families with the same status. Therefore,
people are becoming more egoistic, and they
will separate from poorer people.
A student's essay sent to me for correction.

The factors mentioned above cause serious issues in our

society. The most significant is that people will separate
from others, especially from people with a low level of
income. This causes some tensions in the local community.
For example, there will be more fights between neighbours.
Another problem is our children's behaviour. They will learn
how to behave from their ignorant parents who value money
more than anything else. Thus, they might have problems at
school and between their peers.
A student's essay sent to me for correction.

The factors mentioned above cause serious issues in our

society. The most significant is that people will separate
from others, especially from people with a low level of
income. This causes some tensions in the local community.
For example, there will be more fights between neighbours.
Another problem is our children's behaviour. They will learn
how to behave from their ignorant parents who value money
more than anything else. Thus, they might have problems at
school and between their peers.
These paragraphs contain just one
possibility, in the last sentence, the
rest of the text is stated as fact in
the present simple or future simple.
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