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Your assignment: Write a persuasive speech about a problem faced by your community. Your community may be your
school, your neighborhood, or a culture with whom you closely identify.
In this speech you will: clearly identifying a problem, explain the problem and how it affects the community, citing evidence
(facts, statistics, anecdotes, etc.) and propose the best solution(s), explaining why. Use rhetorical devices to speak in a
persuasive manner, calling your audience to action to solve the problem with the solutions you propose.
Your teacher may choose to help the class identify a few situations that may be considered a problem to some,
but not to others, and then structure a formal debate about the pros and cons of the problem.
Your teacher may recommend that everyone write a “Letter to the Editor” that identifies a problem and proposes
solutions then deliver their letter as a speech that may be filmed or recorded.
Your teacher may assign the class to create a Public Service Announcement (PSA) addressing a problem
using multi-media wherein your speech is a narrative imbedded in the PSA.
ELD1/2 Resources ELD 3/4 Resources ELD 5/6 Resources ELD 7/8 Resources
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Milestones, Level Intro Milestones, Level A Milestones, Level B Milestones, Level C
Unit 7 Chapter 1 Unit 2 Apply & Extend: Unit 3 Apply & Extend: Unit 5 Chapter 2
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430-441 121-124 190-195 318-337, 342,
460-461 178-179 56-57 “Speech” 349: Project 2, and
470-471 246-249 390-391 and 399 352-353
Your oral presentation should be in English, between 1 to 3 minutes, and you need to use gestures, media, and/or visual
aids to enhance your argument delivery to your audience. You will use the third-person formal when referencing the
community and modals (should, could, may, might) to suggest solutions. Do not use the first-person (I, me, my) form or
the tag words that indicate opinion: “I believe,” “I think.” Do use the more formal forms of address: “One might think
that . . .” “A person could consider this problem . . . ” “The community needs . . .,” and “ A citizen could believe that . . . .”
1. Research the problem you identify and read what others have to say regarding this problem. Take notes, and
choose quotes carefully. Be careful to avoid plagiarizing. Your argument must be yours alone.
2. Select a style and tone to take when writing your speech: funny, serious, etc. and think of words that
help convey these feelings to your audience. Use descriptive language that conveys the experience
so that your audience can “see” and “hear” what happened as if they were there and makes them
want to solve the problem.
3. Answer (oral and written) four constructed response questions about the experience.
a. Discuss your responses with a partner. Think of examples, details and how you will explain the event to
your audience and inform them of the interesting aspects of the event and why you are sharing it with
them.
4. Read the Oral Presentation Rubric.
5. Plan and write your oral presentation: speech. Practice your speech with a partner or small group.
6. Edit your speech for tone, language that is persuasive, and for rhetorical devices.
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ELD Levels 1-8, Grades 7-12 Speaking Performance Task Quarter 3, SY 2014-15 STUDENT EXAM
Constructed-Response Questions
Answer the questions below. Your answers to these questions will be listened to by a partner. Also, they will help
you think about the details you want to share, which should help you write your oral presentation. You may refer
back to your notes and your interviews when you think it would be helpful. Answer the questions in the spaces
provided below them.
1. What is the problem and why would anyone consider it to be a problem? Use a word web to
help you brainstorm details about the situation, problem and solution.
2. Where and When is this problem occurring? Who is being most affected and how?
What do you want your audience to think and feel when listening to your argument? Explain: Use
a word web to help you brainstorm
3. What are community people saying about this problem? Write down good quotes and cite who
said them and why the audience should listen or pay attention to that person(credibility). Use a
graphic organizer to quote and cite and explain the credibility of the person whom you quote
4. What are the best solutions and why? What are possible problems with the solutions you propose?
Part 1b. Oral Presentation: Speech and Skills to Practice with a Partner
You will now review your notes and sources, plan, draft, and revise your oral presentation. You may also refer to the
answers you wrote to the questions in part 1. Now read your assignment and the information about how your oral
presentation will be scored, then begin your work.
Your Assignment
Write a persuasive speech about a problem faced by your community. Your community may be your school, your
neighborhood, or a culture with whom you closely identify.
In this speech you will: clearly identifying a problem, explain the problem and how it affects the community, citing evidence
(facts, statistics, anecdotes, etc.) and propose the best solution(s), explaining why. Use rhetorical devices to speak in a
persuasive manner, calling your audience to action to solve the problem with the solutions you propose.
There are devices which involve There are devices which change the usual
Repetition is a powerful meaning of words
e.g. metaphors, similes.
sounds e.g. alliteration, assonance,
technique used in other
onomatopoeia.
ways as well: words, My love is like a red, red rose - Robert Burns
phrases or ideas may be Edit word choices for the way things
Here is an example with three devices:
repeated for rhetorical sound and flow. alliteration (“r’ is repeated), repetition(red,red)
effect. Let us go forth to lead the land we love . AND simile—a comparison using like or as.
How your oral presentation will be scored: The people scoring your product will be assigning scores for :
1. Presentation:
o Statement of purpose/focus – how well you clearly state your claim on the topic without notes, maintain
your focus and eye contact with the audience, and address the theme of change as it relates to your
experience;
o Elaboration of details– how well you provide details and descriptive language to narrate a story that has
a clear beginning, middle, and end, and use media, visuals and gestures to convey your experience to
your audience.
2. Speaking Mechanics:
o Language and Vocabulary – how well you effectively orally narrate a story using precise language,
dialogue, pronunciation, pacing and tone that is appropriate for your audience and purpose;
o Organization – how well your ideas logically flow from the introduction to conclusion of your oral
presentation using effective transitions, formal register, and English, and how well you stay on topic
throughout the oral presentation;
3. Content:
o Your narrative speech has a clear beginning, middle, and end.
o Your spoken grammar and word choice make the presentation easy to understand;
o Your central idea is clearly understood and completely supported with details and examples about your
experience.
o Dialogue is used to enhance the story.
4. Visual/Graphics:
o Written Conventions - how well you follow the rules of usage, grammar, spelling, capitalization, etc.
in any media or visual aids you use in your oral presentation.
o How well your use of gestures, facial expressions, media, visuals and graphics completely and
accurately support and enhance the oral presentation.
Now begin work on your product. Manage your time carefully so that you can:
plan your oral presentation
write your oral presentation
revise and edit for a final draft
practice speaking, enunciating and pronouncing, and using appropriate gestures for your oral presentation
chose and integrate media and visual aids, as appropriate
use appropriate eye contact and good facial expressions.
speak in an extremely confident manner and be prepared.
fully engage all members of the audience by memorizing as much as you can and use visual aids and gestures to
enhance or add to your speech.
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ELD Levels 1-8, Grades 7-12 Speaking Performance Task Quarter 3, SY 2014-15 STUDENT EXAM
Part 2.
You will independently deliver your speech to the teacher and a small group or to the teacher and the whole class.
The teacher will score your oral presentation using the rubric that you and your partner used for practicing your speech.
Remember :
2. Practice. Practice. Practice! Rehearse out loud; Practice, pause and breathe. Practice with a timer and allow time for
the unexpected. Speak loudly enough to be heard by everyone in the room!
3. Know the audience. Smile! It’s easier to speak to a group of friends than to strangers.
4. Know the room. Practice using any visual aids where you will be standing for your speech.
5. Relax. Pause, smile and count to three before saying anything. ("One one-thousand, two one-thousand, three one-
thousand. Pause. Begin.) Transform nervous energy into enthusiasm. Be excited to deliver your speech.
6. Visualize yourself giving your speech. Imagine yourself speaking, your voice loud, clear and confident. Visualize the
audience clapping – it will boost your confidence.
7. Realize that people want you to succeed. Audiences want you to be interesting, stimulating, informative and
entertaining. Everyone has to deliver a speech—so remember that everyone is also nervous! Support eachother .
8. Don’t apologize for any nervousness or problem – the audience probably never noticed it. Do not giggle, laugh, or say
things that are not in your speech.
9. Concentrate on the message. Focus on your message and your audience. Be confident. You will do a great job!
10. Gain experience. Your speech should represent you — as an authority and as a person. Experience builds confidence.
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Argumentative Oral Presentation Rubric Grades 7-12 All Levels ELD
CRITERIA 4 points Mastery 3 points Proficient 2 points Development 1 point Inadequate
PRESENTATION Appropriate eye contact Usually makes eye Some but inadequate eye Never or rarely makes eye
and good facial contact. contact contact.
expressions. Confident and Lacking some confidence and Lacking confidence and not
Extremely confident and prepared. somewhat prepared. prepared.
prepared. Adequately engages Holds together despite nerves No audience engagement.
Fully engages all the audience. and engages the audience. Reading directly from
members of the Few instances of staring Constantly looking at notes in a notes.
audience. at notes, just enough to way that interrupts flow of
Effectively uses notes guide presentation. presentation.
while presenting.
SPEAKING Volume and tone are Volume and tone are Volumes and tone are Volume and tone are
MECHANICS always appropriate. appropriate. sometimes appropriate. inappropriate.
Speaker clearly conveys Speaker conveys Speaker is difficult to hear and Presentation is clearly
his/her message fairly. his/her message in a the listener must interpret the based on emotional appeal.
Message is presented controlled manner. message or overly emotional. Difficult to hear, barely
with appropriate pauses Message is presented Speech is choppy and hard to comprehensible.
and contributes to overall with some appropriate follow.
presentation’s flow. pauses.
CONTENT Complete and accurate Only one or two Some language errors in the Many language errors in
language throughout. language errors in the opening and closing. opening or closing.
Grammar and word opening and closing. Occasional errors in grammar Grammar and word choice
choice make the Few errors in grammar and word choice. make the presentation
presentation easy to and word choice overall Argument is not fully hard to understand.
understand. Argument is developed. Insufficient Argument is not clear. Both
Argument is clearly understood and evidence to be convincing to sides may be presented
understood and supported with audience. Evidence may not be equally.
completely supported sufficient logical logical(anecdotal or emotional Argument is purely
with convincing and evidence and examples. appeal) emotional or personal
logical evidence and opinion, lacking any logic or
examples. real evidence.
VISUALS/GRAPHICS Visuals and graphics Visuals and graphics Visuals and graphics provide No visuals or graphics.
completely and adequately support the limited support of Visuals and graphics
accurately support and presentation. presentation. unrelated to topic.
enhance the
presentation.