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Final College App Letter
Final College App Letter
This is the first day of school and I have no clue how or what I am planning to do this
year or how well this year is going to go. I was freaking out about how and what I what I was
going to do when I got into my first class and how I was going to react in that class. I wasn’t sure
if I was going to be engaged or if I should just blow it off and worry about it later. My final
decision right before I walked through the doorway was to be an active and main part of the class
conversation and have input about what we were talking about and how we can improve the
understanding of the topic we were talking about. That is now the student that I have developed
into and the student and that is the student that I keep trying to improve because I believe no
Hello my name is Joseph Pontes and I am writing to you today to explain why I am a
better and harder work in any given room. This letter is because I am willing and able to
complete any and all tasks it takes to make my college life and my college grades the way they
know they can be and the way that I want them to be. The main reason you should the letter I’m
writing today is because you need to understand the struggles and the way I overcame them to
become a better student and a better person. The best example of the type of person I am has
actually happened to me during school. This situation started with me and my mindset towards
school and the way that I viewed the world and the way I felt about the “school government” was
all out of whack. Furthermore, I did not realize how much I could not pay attention and I was not
paying attention to myself and my education and I slipped and ate it. As a result, my grades
dropped to the point that I couldn’t participate in my freshman year of baseball. This really hit
home. So much in fact that I was not forced but determined to get my grades up to a point where
if I failed a test that I was still able to play baseball for example if I failed a math test and I mean
boomed the test completely the grade that I had after the test was put in I would still be able to
play and enjoy baseball. Another example of a way that I was able to show my initiative towards
my school work was when I did poorly on an english essay and once the test was in I realized
that I had done poorly and I found someone that could help. Finding this person took a lot of
time but it was worth it. This person could help me improve my grade in the class because I
needed to improve my grade not because I wanted to get my GPA up and my joy level of myself
I am not able to talk or speak for any other community that is me or I am part of outside
of school except the club that I took part in. This club was called the Do Good Crew Club. This
club was is and is very similar to the company that is called Do Good Be Kind. This club
promotes being kind and being a good person and being kind and respectful towards the
environment, the community, and other people no matter if you know them or not. My part in
this club was making ideas about how the club was going to make progress in the school
environment and how we can move forward throughout the school campus. For example, last
year we had the same type of club that took part in the same type of things that the club is doing
this year but the activities that the last years group were only focused on one school and on type
of community were as this years club is more involved in trying to get the whole city community
or at least many more schools involved and participating in being good and being kind to the
able and willing to be able to take my schooling to any and all levels to accomplish the goal(s) I
am setting for myself at the time of schooling. I believe that all the examples that I was able and
comfortable to give disbaled how my actions lined up. This whole essay matters because of how
I think and how I think of school and how I knew how when I “dropped the ball” in school I
knew what had to be done. Also, I knew that whatever I was going to end up doing was going to
help me in the long run. I mean this was going to help me when I have to apply for work or
become an internship. Also, this matters because this becof how this letter shows the way I am
writing as of now. Thankfully, that entails that I and my writing skills can be improved and they
will be improved not only by high school but also by myself and my individual reading and
writing practices. I can’t wait to keep improving my skills and talents at college and finding new
and more promising ways to get things done faster and easier.
Sincerely,
Joe Pontes
Draft 2
Hello my name is Joseph Pontes and I am writing to you today to explain why I am a
better and harder work in any given room. I am writing to you today because I am looking for a
spot and a chance to prove myself and see how well I accomplish my time in college by myself.
Also, another reason for this letter is because I am willing and able to complete any and all tasks
it takes to make my college life and my college grades the way they know they can be and the
way that I want them to be. The main reason you should the letter I’m writing today is because
you need to understand the struggles and the way I overcame them to become a better student
and a better person. The best example of the type of person I am has actually happened to me
during school. This situation started with me and my mindset towards school and the way that I
viewed the world and the way I felt about the “school government” was all out of whack.
Furthermore, I did not realize how much I could not pay attention and I was not paying attention
to myself and my education and I slipped and ate it. As a result, my grades dropped to the point
that I couldn’t participate in my freshman year of baseball. This really hit home. So much in fact
that I was not forced but determined to get my grades up to a point where if I failed a test or
failed my final that I was still able to play baseball.Another example of a way that I was able to
show my initiative towards my school work was when I did poorly on a test and once the test
was in I realized that I had done poorly and I found someone that could help. This person could
help me improve my grade in the class because I needed to improve my grade not because I
wanted to get my GPA up and my joy level of myself doing something that I enjoy doing. I am
not able to talk or speak for any other community that is me or I am part of outside of school
except the club that I took part in. This cub was called the Do Crew Club. This club was is and is
very similar to the company that is called Do Good Be Kind. My part in this club was making
ideas about how the club was going to make progress in the school environment and how we can
move forward throughout the school campus. The main point that I am getting a cross is that I
am a very loyal, responsible, and I am able and willing to be able to take my schooling to any
and all levels to accomplish the goal(s) I am setting for myself at the time of schooling. I believe
that all the examples that I was able and comfortable to give disbaled how my actions lined up.
This whole essay matters because of how I think and how I think of school and how I knew how
when I “dropped the ball” in school I knew what had to be done. Also, I knew that whatever I
was going to end up doing was going to help me in the long run. I mean this was going to help
me when I have to apply for work or become an internship. Also, this matters because this becof
how this letter shows the way I am writing as of now. Thankfully, that entails that I and my
writing skills can be improved and they will be improved not only by high school but also by
Sincerely,
Joe Pontes
Draft 3
Hello my name is Joseph Pontes and I am writing to you today to explain why I am a
better and harder work in any given room. This letter is because I am willing and able to
complete any and all tasks it takes to make my college life and my college grades the way they
know they can be and the way that I want them to be. The main reason you should the letter I’m
writing today is because you need to understand the struggles and the way I overcame them to
become a better student and a better person. The best example of the type of person I am has
actually happened to me during school. This situation started with me and my mindset towards
school and the way that I viewed the world and the way I felt about the “school government” was
all out of whack. Furthermore, I did not realize how much I could not pay attention and I was not
paying attention to myself and my education and I slipped and ate it. As a result, my grades
dropped to the point that I couldn’t participate in my freshman year of baseball. This really hit
home. So much in fact that I was not forced but determined to get my grades up to a point where
if I failed a test or failed my final that I was still able to play baseball.Another example of a way
that I was able to show my initiative towards my school work was when I did poorly on a test
and once the test was in I realized that I had done poorly and I found someone that could help.
This person could help me improve my grade in the class because I needed to improve my grade
not because I wanted to get my GPA up and my joy level of myself doing something that I enjoy
doing.