ALON

-black screen
-opening image: Mata ni Jack. Focus lang, then blink, then zoom out (naka higa)
-Jack breathes deeply
Jack: Hay… Panibagong araw...panibagong laban
-Jack will get up
- Jack will look sideways then hang his head low
Jack: kaya ko ba to (pabulong)
-Jack will stand up, onting stretching
Jack: argh ayoko pumasok
-opening scene
-background sound sa school
-Jack papasok sa room, uupo
- Lalapit si Ron (friend of jack)
Ron: Uy pre!
Jack: Hi
Ron: Kumain ka na?
Jack: Di pa
Ron: Tara pre baba tayo bili tayo food
Jack: ayoko kaw nalang
Ron: kumain ka naman pre!
Jack: Di na ok na. Mag kklase narin eh
Ron: Sige bahala ka hahaha
-Cut scene to class with teacher
-Shows jack as not focusing or zoning out
Teacher: Jack are you listening? Parang nakatulala ka
Jack: Sorry po ma’am
-Teacher continues lesson
-cut scene to jack sleeping during break time , listening to music etc
-Ron goes to Jack
Ron: oy pre tara? labas tayo?
Jack: ah sige kayo nalang inaantok ako
Ron: oki ka lang ba pre parang tamlay na tamlay ka?
Jack: oo pagod lang ako hehe *slight grin
Ron: Sige sabi mo ah
-cut scene to Jack’s home
Mama(ni Jack): Anak lika dito kakain na
Jack: Ok lang Ma, busog po ako kumain ako kanina
Papa: Ganon ba? Sige bahala ka
-Cut scene to jack lying in bed
-Shows jack as restless and sad and Jack sheds a tear
Jack (VO): Bakit ganto. Ang lungkot ko. Bigla nalang umaatake tong lungkot na to. Anong
problema ko?
—cut scene to jack drowning , panic in his eyes.
— jack tries to gasp for air. He gets to the surface and breathes heavily. Look left and
right.
—a big wave washes over jack then gets pulled in the water, drowning him once again
— jack tries to reach the surface then he wakes up…
— jack gets up breathing heavily with tears in his eyes
Jack: (to himself) AHHHHH
— jack cries, put his head on his hands and he hit himself in the head
Jack: ANO TO? UMAYOS KA (continues to hit himself)
Jack: BAKIT GANTO AYOKO NG GANTO UMAYOS KA (continues to hit himself and cry)
— jack shivers while crying hugs himself and cries
Jack: Pagod na ako.
—black screen
— sound of alarm clock
— focus on Jack’s eyes then zoom out
— Jack gets up (robotically )
— Show jack walking to school (crossing the street)
— jack stares intently on the cars passing by, lost in his thoughts
Jack (VO): Pagod na ako.
— show jack suddenly stepping to cross the street then sound effect of horn
— cut scene to Jack in class
—ron walks towards him
Ron: Hoy pre! Nakita kita kanina! Tinatawag kita di mo naman ako narinig! Muntik ka
masagasaan kinabahan ako sayo pre! Ano ba pre di ka ba natulog parang sabaw na
sabaw ka ah?
Jack: ah wala pagod lang hehe
Ron: Oy Jack lam mo miss na kita pre
Jack: hah? Di naman ako umalis
Ron: Ah hindi. Kasi alam mo? Di naman sa pag ddrama pero may nawala sayo, di ko alam
kung bakit pero parang ilang linggo ka na ganyan, kala ko pagod ka lang or sabaw kasi
nakakapagod at stress narin ang dami nating ginagawa pero wala naman na tayo
masyado ginagawa pero prang lagi kang pagod
Ron: (after rant) Ok ka lang ba talaga?
Jack: Oo (fake smile)
Ron: yan o! Di ganyan ngiti mo noon pre. Pero pre tandaan mo na kahit ano laman ng isip
mo pwede mo sabihin sakin. Tropa tayo eh
Jack: Talaga? Kahit ano?
Ron: Oo. O kung ayaw mo sakin ang dami mo pwede maka-usap. Di sa nangingialam ako
ah pero concerned lang ako sayo pare kasi alam ko rin feeling ng parang walang
masabihan
Jack: o kung hindi sayo,kanino? Parang wala naman na
Ron: