Rafael Ganzon September 26, 2019

Grade 9B Ms. Iona Rae Exconde

Term 2 Life Writing Task

Based on “Shall I Compare Thee to a Summer’s Day” by William Shakespeare

Topic/Question/Theme: Beauty

Grammar Concept: Verbals

Beauty in Her

From the moment I met her, I just knew. She was going to change my life. This is a story

about the most beautiful person I know. It all started in October of last year, when we first met.

She was new, her attitude was refreshing. I felt attracted to her immediately. I just knew I needed

her in my life. We started to talk, I could feel it. I was starting to fall for her. We started to talk

non-stop, she was becoming my best friend. But I knew it was just too good to be true. I knew I

was not the only one to notice her charming personality. There were guys falling for her left and

right. I started to feel a little discouraged. I reminded myself that she was worth it.

It was gonna be hard, with all the competition. But I knew I had to fight for her. I

continued to try and get closer and closer to her. I just kept on falling harder. Everything about

her was captivating. The way she smiled, and the way she laughed. How she was just so pretty.

The way she would always say how she felt, no matter how direct. The way she was just

unapologetically herself. She did not care what other people thought of her. I thought the world

of her, I still do. She made me feel free. When I was with her I felt my heart glow. When I would
see her I would be in awe. She was truly beautiful, inside and out. There was no comparison to

her beauty.

It has been months, my love for her has only continued to grow. I do not think it will stop

anytime soon. I do not believe her beauty will stop growing either.