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Introduction: A monologue style introduction introducing yourself and your topic (introduction and
central thesis)
In my experience, I have seen the way that people interact with each other. It’s not a matter of what
they can do for another or how they can better someone’s life but rather a task that they’re invested in
that is a part of their own life. My name is Kira Cunningham and I am a freshman at the University of
Pittsburgh. I have seen that there are various opportunities for each one of us to impact those around
us. Through volunteer work with Pitt Serves, leadership opportunities from Student Affairs, and jumping
into classrooms outside of our own for children, the change is right there in front of us.
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Think of all the different opportunities that college presents to you. The endless amount of students
your age, the helpful professors, and the independence of living on your own. These are the tasks we
invest ourselves to that revolve around us. But why don’t we make more of it and push further out there
to build relationships? We can and we will because not only will the connections we build influence
ourselves, but they will also make an impact on those around us and the community all together. How?
Through the programs presented here at the University of Pittsburgh- volunteer work, leadership roles,
and even educational resources reaching out to others. All right here, waiting to be implicated on to
make that difference between doing something for one’s self and another. I have seen the great
potential to change, and so have you.
Welcome. I am Kira Cunningham speaking of the influential and successful impacts of school programs
on people, internal and external to the University of Pittsburgh. Within the University, organizations
work to spark individuals to reach out to the community of Pittsburgh whether it is volunteer work,
student led events, or even educational opportunities for younger children. All these opportunities are
provided here at Pitt and set a baseline to connect to residents of Pittsburgh.