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Rough Draft Mary
Rough Draft Mary
Professor Cyphers
English Comp. 1
21 June 2019
“If you believe you are safe, you are at risk”. This is a very famous quote from Mary
Fisher a speaker for the AIDS community. In 1992 Mary went to the Republican National
Convention Address to deliver her speech “A Whisper of AIDS”. In her speech, she tells how
people view the words “Aids” and “HIV”, and why they are wrong for thinking such things.
Mary isn’t just an empowered woman speaking out for the AIDS community, she is an
ambassador for the Joint United Nations Programme on HIV/AIDS (UNAIDS). Along with these
great accomplishments Mary was on the leadership council of the Global Coalition on Women
and AIDS. Lastly, Mary runs an organization called Mary Fisher CARE (Clinical AIDS
Fisher’s speech appeals to all parties, she helps illuminate how AIDS/HIV affects
everyday households. The main point of her speech is that you don’t need to be gay, a
hemophiliac, or a drug user to get this horrible disease. “ It does not care whether you are
Democrat or Republican; it does not ask whether you are black or white, male or female, gay or
straight, young or old.” In this statement, she shows that no matter what religion, sexuality, race,
Fisher’s own personal experience with AIDS/HIV gives her an understanding that a
person without HIV wouldn’t understand. She appeals to the pathos by sharing her feelings and
her life with her kids and how it will be so different without her kids. Fisher adds emotion that
really gives her speech a deeper quality to it. “To my children, I make this pledge: I will not give
in... and you, my child, give me a reason to say to America, "You are at risk." And I will not rest,
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Max, until I have done all I can to make your world safe.” She shows people that there is so
much more than just your death to this disease. Fisher shows the people that even though she is
gone her kids will have to live on knowing their mother died of a disease that is so frowned upon
that people hide it until death. She then states “I will seek a place where intimacy is not the
prelude to suffering. I will not hurry to leave you, my children, but when I go, I pray that you
will not suffer shame on my account.” Lastly, on this account, Fisher acknowledges the fact she
can’t fix the world in one speech, but she will try her best to find a world where people don’t
After all of this devastation put on Fisher she doesn’t just rely on her emotions and
tragedy to pull through in her speech she uses cold hard facts. These facts help to show that she
isn’t just a sad mom trying to get attention, it shows that she is a mother who knows exactly what
she is talking about. Fisher including facts in her speech help to appeal to the logos. All good
essays aren’t just based on emotions they have to have factual evidence in order to prove them
right. “Two hundred thousand Americans are dead or dying. A million more are infected.
Worldwide, forty million, sixty million, or a hundred million infections will be counted in the
After reviewing all of these facts and all of the experience she has she is very well versed
in this topic. Fisher understands all concepts to the AIDS/HIV epidemic and she helps people to
understand this. In the end, I feel that everyone should see all sides of the epidemic.