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Rhetorical Analysis Draft 1
Rhetorical Analysis Draft 1
Professor Lasley
13 October 2019
Rhetorical Analysis of It’s Time for Class: Toward a More Complex Pedagogy of Narrative
In It’s Time for Class: Toward a More Complex Pedagogy of Narrative, Amy E.
Robillard argues how a person's socio-economic class can affect their academics, positively or
negatively, based on the foundation institutions use to teach composition. She also asserts how
narrative writing can help the working class, who are at a disadvantage, reflect and accept their
upbringing to further uplift themselves in their academics and their lives. Robillard successfully
proves her argument by using the fact that she was once apart of the working class herself, and
uses it to connect and empathize with the realities that working-class students go through in
higher education. Furthermore, she uses a plethora of credible sources to further add and prove to
her argument.
Robillard begins her essay with a personal narrative of her own. The story revolves
around her mother always putting a priority on being on time no matter the situation. This
narrative effectively transitions to one of the main points that Robillard is trying to make “that
there are different ways of conceiving of time and that these different ways of conceiving of time
are class-based” (75). The notion that there are different perceptions of time is successfully
shown in the short beginning narrative and how it affected Robillard’s upbringing. She, later on,
acknowledges that her family is apart of the working class and it becomes apparent to the reader
why her mother has a strict relationship with being on time. This perception of time among the
working class is then connected to how “students from the working class ‘dip into and out of
college, pulling from it what they [see] as current needs’ (233)” (75). In essence, Robillard
connects the reality of her upbringing in her working-class environment and how that upbringing
can negatively affect working-class students in college. This connection solidifies her argument
by making it clear how the problem among working-class students arises and it allows her to
students.
Early in the essay, Robillard establishes how many scholars begin their essay with a
personal narrative, and how it's accepted, but there is a stigma when students try to implement
their personal stories into their essays. This stigma correlates to the institutional power structures
that benefit the upper-class students while setting up the working-class students for failure. The
acknowledgment of these problems in our society allows Robillard to enlighten readers from the
upper class to become aware of these hidden problems to them, that affect many others from the
working class. Robillard furthers her point by using “Bloom’s argument that the first-year
composition is a middle-class enterprise, ... , helps us understand why the discourse surrounding
autobiography and the personal narrative in the field is driven by defense” (75). Using Lynn Z.
Bloom's idea allows Robillard's argument to be more credible due to the fact that Bloom is a
well-respected scholar. Furthermore, Bloom’s idea adds to the issues of institutional power
how narrative writing can help them cope with their problems. Robillard uses an idea from
Richard Sennett “that narrative provides shape, order, coherence to events beyond our control”
(76). Robillard continues by using Sennett's idea that “as long as we continue to devalue the
possibilities for working-class students to develop an understanding of why things happen, their
consequences, and their material results in the present” (76). With this in mind, Robillard is
justifying the use of narrative to successfully help working-class students reflect and understand
events in their lives to better their relationship with time: past, present, and future. Robillard
continues her argument by subsequently adding how a key aspect of time, the past, is important
because “students rely on their past experiences to understand new knowledge” (76). With this
idea and many others like it throughout her essay, Robillard is strengthening her argument by
stacking the many benefits and solutions that narrative writing can have on working-class
students.
Continuing, Robillard expands on the benefits of narrative writing. She does this by
introducing a personal problem she faced with her mother. Robillard expresses how her mother
would not talk about her past experiences with her. With this experience, Robillard uses Carolyn
Kay Steedman's’ idea that “the point of telling stories,... lies in interpretation” (84). With this in
mind, Robillard connects it to “ why my mother won't tell us the stories about her childhood,
about my father, about her parents. She knows that then we’ll be able to draw conclusions” (84).
This part of Robillards argument is more personal than other parts of her argument, but it adds to
her argument as it provides a sense of empathy and relatability for working-class students that
faced a similar situation with their family members. Furthermore, it points to the idea that
narrative leads to interpretation which is one of the factors that helps working-class students
uplift themselves.
Robillard concludes her essay by stating from her experience in her personal life and as a
writing teacher that she “call[s] for a more complex pedagogy of narrative” (91). This statement
is justified by the many anecdotes she uses from her personal life and how she connects them to
the ideas from the credible sources she uses from the likes of Carolyn Kay Steedman, Richard
Sennett, and many others. With this in mind, Robillard successfully proves her argument by
connecting with her audience and bringing awareness to the hidden but prominent problems
working-class students face in higher education while providing the solutions narrative writing