OBSERVING CONCISENESS

JOEMAR L. FURIGAY
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Tautology/Redundancy
• Redundant or tautologous expressions are
groups of words in which at least one word is
unnecessary because it just repeats the meaning
that's already contained in the other word or
words.
Tautology/Redundancy
• Would you please repeat again what you said?
• The new innovations were startling.
• The heat’s coming from the hot stove.
Tautology/Redundancy
• If all of us cooperate together, we will succeed.
Tautology/Redundancy
• The accused was guilty of false misstatement.
Tautology/Redundancy
• It was the general consensus of opinion that we must
go to the movie.
Tautology/Redundancy
• The three brothers had nothing in common with each
other.
Tautology/Redundancy
• I am enclosing herewith my bio-data.
Tautology/Redundancy
• There was an ovation when the minister rose up to
speak.
Tautology/Redundancy
• Do not return back home without completing the
work.
Tautology/Redundancy
• The flight will arrive at 7 p.m. in the afternoon.
Tautology/Redundancy
• He carefully examined each and every letter.
Tautology/Redundancy
• Have you read the latest biography of Indira Gandhi’s
life?
Verbal Deadwood
• This refers to the unnecessary words or expressions in
sentences; removing them do not affect the ideas
conveyed.
Verbal Deadwood
• He told his listeners that time in the workplace is important.
said
• He affixed his signature in the attendance record.
signed
• The couple united in Holy matrimony last week.
married
Verbal Deadwood
• For the reason that
Verbal Deadwood
• At the present time
Verbal Deadwood
• Tendered his resignation
Verbal Deadwood
• Used for fuel purposes
Verbal Deadwood
• Held a conference
Verbal Deadwood
• In the immediate vicinity
Verbal Deadwood
• Was able to make his escape
Verbal Deadwood
• A majority of
Verbal Deadwood
• A sufficient amount of
Verbal Deadwood
• Come to a conclusion
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
A dangling modifier is a word or phrase that
modifies a word not clearly stated in the
sentence.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
Having arrived late for practice, a written excuse was needed.
-Who arrived late?

Having arrived late for practice,

the team captain needed a written
excuse.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
The waiter served the fish dressed in white.
-Who was dressed in white?

Dressed in white, the waiter served the

fish.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
Barking loudly, John played with his dog.
-Who was barking loudly?

John played with his dog barking loudly.

Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
Sauced with lumpy gravy, the waitress served Gilbert a
plate of gray meatloaf.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
Emma Sue was delighted when Mr. Nguyen returned
her perfect calculus test with an ear-to-ear grin.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
After walking for hours, the car looked wonderful.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
At the age of twelve, my mother entered me in a
contest.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
Her foot caught on the step carrying a heavy pile of
books.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
The children were oblivious to the approaching tornado
skipping stones and throwing sticks into the waves.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
The birthday party, always eager for cake, was attended
by everyone.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
The new puppy climbed into my lap wagging her tail.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
The school heads reviewed the resumes of the
applicants who were in need of new teachers.
Misplaced/Dangling Modifier
Filled with cream, covered in chocolate frosting, and
dusted with sprinkles, you will enjoy this cupcake.
Activity: Use simple words.
incarcerate
stated
obtain
deceased
lacerations
depart
Activity: Delete unnecessary words.
• Anyone may participate if they would like to.
• In my opinion, this wasteful policy ought to be revoked.
• This is because there are fewer farmers at the present time.
• At the present time, the company employs about 50 truck
drivers.
• Major forest areas are coming back by means of natural
processes.
Activity: Edit.
• It was an unexpected surprise when a pair of
baby twins was born at 12 midnight.

• Health inspectors are in the process of currently

investigating the restaurant and may completely
close it down in about 3 to 5 days.