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Literacy Narrative
Every year once September rolls around there’s something about me that changes. You
may be thinking am I really someone who gets excited to go back to school? The answer to that
would be no, but the reason I do enjoy this time is because it’s always the start of the hockey
season each year. Hockey has been such a big part of my life since I was about 3 years old and is
a sport that I really can’t see myself to ever stop playing until I am forced to. So, going into my
senior hockey season me and my friends all had high hopes for our team just as any team
should, but we knew there was something about this specific team. You would be able to walk
into the locker room at any time and just see someone always smiling or cracking jokes, it was
something that we all wanted to be a part of. This season meant so much to me and the fellow
seniors, because we weren’t sure if we would play hockey again, the thought of that was
something that drove us all season long to keep pushing. In doing so the underclassmen
followed behind seeing how much work we put in and how bad we really wanted to succeed.
Being a leader was something that I feel was distilled in me from a young age through my
parents and siblings and was a reason that I was selected as one of the captains of this team.
Going into our first game of the year against our archrival, the atmosphere was electric
you could hear the screams from all the fans from inside our locker room. Although I was a
senior and have experienced for 4 straight years I was still just as nervous as all the first years
on the team. The mix of excitement and nervousness is something that cannot be described
and as a leader and senior of the team I couldn’t show any kind of nervousness. The game
started and finished in what felt like a blink of an eye, we suffered a tough loss as a heavy favor
and there was a type of embarrassment that wavered over me for some time. I’ll remember
“Remember what this feels like, the feeling of losing is something you need to overcome
After we all got undressed and made our way out of the locker room, he made sure we
all walked out with our heads held up high, I was the last to leave and he pulled me aside
He said, “The way the rest of this season goes is up to you and the rest of the seniors,
everyone on the team looks up to you guys and will follow in your footsteps so have the right
I said, “Me and the rest of the seniors will do anything we can to make this season our
best yet and we expect nothing but the best effort everyone can possibly give.”
He said, “get some sleep and we will be back to work next week, good job tonight.”
Hockey like any other sport is similar to life in the fact that you learn from your
mistakes, we did that and continued to bear down throughout the season. We had some highs
and lows but stuck together through it all which is what mattered most to our coach and
ourselves. The awesome thing about the hockey season is the longer it goes on the more
intense it gets, once we got to January everything just mattered a little more. Practices were
more competitive, more people came to our games, all because of the thought of winning a
championship was in the back of everyone’s head. We barely made it to the playoffs, and when
I say barely, I mean we were the lowest seeded team matched up against an undefeated team
in the first round of playoffs. We knew we could play with every team in our league at every
aspect of the game, the question was if we would be able to execute and translate our skills
Against all odds we forced the series to a game 3 which is a do or die game, with all our
family and friends in attendance we felt the support and pushed ourselves to an unbelievable
upset and beating a previously unbeaten team twice in playoffs. This was not only monumental
for our team but our school also, there is no better feeling than putting a smile on friends and
family faces for the success of your team. Since our league is small this gave our team an
automatic bid into the championship, even better it was against one of our schools longest
existing rival schools. Just like the first round of playoffs it was another 3-game series. The
nerves were even greater for this series, but that wasn’t fazing anyone on our team, the young
kids wanted to rise to the occasion and the seniors wanted to leave a legacy of their own. Yet
again this series went to a game 3, another does or die for us and we were more than ready for
it. We were given the chance to do something our schools hockey team hasn’t done for 13
years, to say we put every single ounce of effort on the ice that night was an understatement.
At about the two-minute mark in the third period and being up two goals, you could slowly
I turned to one of my teammates and said, “Did you honestly think that we would be
When the final buzzer it, the sound of that will be something I will remember for a
lifetime, the celebration felt timeless seeing everyone so happy after all the hard work we put
in was awesome. To raise that trophy with my team was the epitome of what our high school
embodies, the Jesuit motto of being a “man for others”. I could not have thought of a more
perfect way to end my high school career with being surrounded by friends and family while