Shamia Hossain

Professor Batty

English 102

12 December 2019

Drama Essay Reflection

The drama essay was a little bit challenging one for me. Since this essay was a more

detailed with some lot more information than the first one and more depth in terms of literary

analysis. The drama was written through a queer theory perspective which was totally a new thing

but I think I did good with few mistakes. The title I made a mistake but I fixed it. I did some

mistakes with the topic selection and the topic was not clear to the readers at some point.

I got some negative feedbacks for my organization of the essay since the topic sentences

were not going well with the theme of the essay and the thesis statement was missing a counter

argument which I fixed. I had some issues with the quote sandwiching because I used the quotes

at last which was not supposed to be that way because when you write a quote at the last of a

paragraph you are supposed to explain it. So later I changed I fixed it and explained the topic for

which I used the quote.

Net tutor review gave me a feedback for revising the introduction and conclusion

paragraphs so I rewrite those paragraphs and tried to make it more clear to the readers. I fixed the

sentence arrangements and organizations of the paragraphs because the topic and the sentences I

used did not make proper sense so I changed those sentences and wrote some new sentences to

explain the point I was trying to convey. My sentences was kind of disjointed so I fixed those while

revising and fixed all the mistakes in regard to the topics.

 Overall I fixed my thesis statement which was missing a counterargument and I made it

accurate with a counter argument and later I created a separate paragraph to explaining and

supporting my counterargument. My conclusion was missing a brief summary of the purpose of

my essay so I rearranged my conclusion and gave a detailed idea of what I was trying to convince

my readers in the essay.