Juan Perez

English 102

Professor Batty

11 December 2019

Reflection

What I learned having to correct this essay is that I really need to help myself in having a

supporting evidence to help make sense of my thesis. I really had a lot more trouble putting my

essay together because the downloading process isn’t following my format that I wrote. Other

than that I can say it sounds a lot better than it did. I took note on focusing too much on the

characters and less on the argument. Which was a mistake I fixed.