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This memo is in response to the information you requested on technical prose and readability.
The following is my analysis of a philosophical paper I wrote last year and my ability to use
technical prose focusing on: Being Concise, Being Precise, Being Direct, and Noticeable Errors.
“Albert Camus is a philosopher who often brought up the question should one
commit suicide?”
“The myth of Sisyphus is about…”
“Overcoming our greatest challenges are some of the things that make us great
and most importantly give life meaning.”
The use of topic position sets the tone for each paragraph preparing the reader.
3.4. Stress Position: The ending of a section of writing contains the most opportunity
for impact with it being the last information read:
“Life is full of all sorts of experiences and there are smaller things to be valued
and too many opportunities for satisfaction and happiness to be lost by
choosing to no longer live.”
This ending of the paragraph drives home the intent of the writing and leaves
no doubt in the reader’s mind what the paragraph intended.
4. Noticeable Error
The main error I found in my writing was the occurring of run-on sentences. Multiple
times in the paper sentences are full of commas where periods are needed to assist the
flow of the reading.
5. Conclusion
Reviewing over technical prose style made me aware of many issues with this piece
of writing. Most issues occurred under the “Be Concise” topic which I will fix by
using a more analytical approach to my word selection when creating my sentences.
If you have any questions about my report, please let me know.