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FLOW 1

12 people: 1 (male), 2 to 12 (female)

Fandi, Intan, Amy, Reny, Aisah, Yuan, Humairoh, Dwi, Hestia, Irma, Fenia,
Putri
One day, there were 12 youtubers who were cool to gather at a cafe. They are talking about what location
is suitable for creating youtube content. Then, Fenia recommended the former Mental Hospital.

Fandi : I haven't seen you since graduating from high school, how are you guys?

All : Good

Amy : But why are you calling all of us here?

Reny : This isn't just a reunion right?

Fandi : Yup, the reason I'm calling you guys here, I want to make YouTube content. How? We
will reach 5000 subscribe. How? Interested?

Intan : Wow cool, okay

Yuandini : It’s means that after that you have to promise for the money after success. Okay?

Aisah : Yuan, are you need money? *laugh*

Yuandini : Yes!

Irma : If for the money, I am in

Humairoh : There is any ideas for the theme of our YouTube content?

Fandi : *smile* we will go to the gut’s test

All : Hooooooooooo

Hestia : Where do we want to go to gut’s test?

Fandi : I still think about it, is there a scary location that you know?

Fenia : * raise your hand * oh I know!

Fandi : what is that?

Fenia : Do you guys know the former mental hospital in the middle of the forest? My friends
are busy talking about it, how about we try to test in there?

Amy : Great idea, I've heard it too. Now people very busy talking about that place
Humairoh : Come on, I like to gut’s test!

Putri : Wait!

Yuandini : Why put?

Putri : Are you sure you want to go there?

Aisah : If the others agree we will go there

Intan : Why? You are scared? Pffft

Putri : * shaking her head * so you guys still don't know what happened there?

All : * just shake while saying no *

Putri : * looks at the Dwi Putri * Dwi, tell them

Dwi Putri : Why should I ?!

Putri : You're the one who experiences it!

Dwi Putri : Ok, so 3 (three) months ago I went there with my campus friends during the day. But we
went there not our own volition, because one of my friends wanted to go there. At that
time we were only three so, I was the only one outside ...

Intan : Coward

Putri : * glares at Intan * silence!

Hestia : If you are alone outside, does your 2 friends go there?

Dwi Putri : * nod *

Irma : So, what happened to them both?

Dwi Putri : When I waited outside one of my friends came out of the mental hospital while running
scared. When I ask where she is ... she ... has disappeared.

Aisah : Disappeared? How come?

Dwi Putri : She also didn’t know, at that time she said she tried to enter the headroom of the mental
hospital. And at that moment my friend felt something was wrong and frightened so
herself went inside ... when awaited my friend heard a scream inside and immediately run
away because he could not stand it anymore. After leaving there, we both decided to call
the police but we were scolded because the place was indeed forbidden to enter.

Yuandini : So? You and the police have been there to searching for your friend?

Dwi Putri : Yes, already. But ... but ... *cry*


Intan : H-hey ...

Putri : That's enough, so I'll just continue. * calms Dwi Putri * so after searching, they find the
body of her friend outside the mental hospital yard. After that the police assumed the
victim was killed but the culprit was still unknown.

Fandi : Hahahahaha ...

Putri : Is there something funny?

Fandi : From the story, do you assume that the one who killed your friend is a ghost ?!

Fenia : That's right, since when ghosts can kill human? — and today still believe that silly
thing?

Putri : This is not a joke, you also should not laugh like that in front of a grieving person!

Fandi : If you're afraid, just say it, now I'm ask you guys. Anyone who comes with me? Who
doesn't come please leave here

And no one moved from his place. Dwi Putri more furious.

Putri : Are you serious ?!

Yuandini : To be honest, I don't believe in superstition so I keep coming.

Humairoh : If Yuandini come, I will come too!

Intan : Me too

Aisah : I also joined, I was in a money crisis.

Hestia : Upss, we same problem! hehe

Irma : So many people come along, me too

Reny : Hey don't forget me!

Fenia : I like something about mysteries, so I'm coming too!

Putri : Ok ... it's up to you guys. I don't want to interfere with your business anymore. Let's go
* pull hands Dwi Putri*

After the departure of the Dwi Putri and Putri, the remaining 10 people were inside the café. Amy thought

for a moment, like thinking about something.

Aisah : Why do you daydream?

Amy : Ah ... that heard the Dwi’s story, why did I feel she had a truth.
Intan : Don't say you also believe?

Amy : Not like that. I indeed often hear rumors about the mental hospital, especially the head
office of the mental hospital. People said if we go in there we can get a curse. But I'm still
not sure what is true.

Hestia : That's just rumors. If you're curious we just try go there.

Irma : I think that's good, we will solve the mystery in that room while live.

Fenia : Wow I'm getting excited! I can't wait to go there.

Fandi : If so, we will gather again next week on Saturday at 5 pm and we will prepare the
equipment for our content!

All : Ok!

After that they dispersed and go home.


FLOW 2

10 (ten) people (one to ten), 3 (three) people around (residents one), residents

two, residents three)

Youtuber dan icha, meida, nirmala as residents

One week later. Precisely on Saturday, the ten of them gathered again and rushed to the place of the

former mental hospital. But beforehand they interviewed local residents who lived some distance from the

forest. Intan who will interview residents while live on youtube. Intan found 3 (three) people who were

sitting relaxing while drinking coffee.

Intan : Hello everyone, we are already on our way to go to the former mental hospital. But
before that, we will ask a little about the rumors that the asylum is true or not we will find
out! * Intan approaches the 3 (three) citizens *

Intan : Good afternoon everyone, sorry to disturb. Can we ask for a moment about the mental
hospital?

Nirmala : * turns towards to Meida with a scared face *

Meida : sorry, we can't answer questions related to that.

Intan : just a moment please, we have to find out.

Icha : indeed if we answer what will you do?

Intan : that about ...

Fandi : Ah, like this, we have campus assignments. Yes right, campus assignments

Icha : Hmm Ok, what do you want to ask?

Intan : I just start the point. What do you know about the mental hospital?

Nirmala : We don't know much about the mental hospital because we moved to this city just 3
years ago.

Intan : oh? Do you move here together?

Nirmala : Yes, but we did know a little about the asylum because we heard from neighbors, uh ...
* looked back at Meida with cold sweat *
Meida : We only heard from neighbors, if that place really was a curse. And it's forbidden to go
there, because if you go there at night ... you won't be able to get out of that place again.

Fenia : Really ?! Is there something suspicious there?

Nirmala : we have never been there how did we know?

Meida : well the one I know is only reported that a girl died there for no reason 3 (three) months
ago.

Intan : o-oh ... is that so ... why do you think the mental hospital isn't operating anymore?

Icha : let me explain. I've only heard of it from my uncle, he said, all patients, doctors and
nurses there die without reason, and Director from mental hospitals die of suicide That's
all I know.

Intan : just that? Your uncle said nothing more?

Icha : that's all, it looks like my uncle doesn't want to tell further. His expression was different
at that time.

Meida : enough? Are there more questions? If it's not there, go quickly!

Intan : A-Ah yes we will leave soon, once again sorry for disturb.

After that they left immediately, 3 (three) residents still stared at their departure.

Nirmala : hey, are you sure to let them go? From the direction it went it seemed to be heading to
the place of the former mental hospital.

Meida : that’s right, from they expression they were clearly lying

Icha : That's not our business, just leave them alone.


FLOW 3 (FOREST)

10 YOUTUBER
After that, they continued their journey to the mental hospital. Arriving in the middle of the

forest, they decided to take a break before starting the content.

Fandi : I will give each of you assignments. The first is Intan and Fenia, you will go to the
mental hospital to install CCTV. And the other help me put up a tent. Is there any
question?

Irma : * raise hand *

Fandi : yes?

Irma : who will watch over later?

Fandi : I will be watching here as long as you make content, but I need one more person to help
me. Anyone want to help me?

Yuandini : Me!

Fandi : ok. Because there are Yuandini who helped me so a total of 8 (eight) people went there.

All : ok!

They also made tents and two other people went to mental hospitals to install CCTV. Around 9 (nine) pm,

Intan and Fenia returned from the mental hospital.

Amy : wow? It's great you can come back safely. Are you not haunted?

Intan : so you wish we were visited by a ghost?

Fenia : oh I'm just happy if there is a ghost appearing, unfortunately nothing happened.

Reny : maybe this hasn't worked yet

All : * laugh together *

Fandi : ok guys, good work. Intan and fenia, let's eat first. You must be exhausted right?

They are joking until they don't feel at 11 o'clock.

Fandi : oh it's 11(eleven) pm, it's time. Let's get ready.

8 (eight) other people are getting ready to prepare their tools such as cameras and flashlights.

Fandi : Well first, you will be divided into 2 groups. 1 group consists of 4 people, first group
fenia, Intan, hestia, and amy. And the second group, humairoh, irma, Aisah, and reny.
Humairoh : well, you can't have one group with Fenia.

Reny : why?

Humairoh : she is the bravest. If there's anything, just ask for help for shielding.

* whispers to reny *

Fenia : hey your voice sounds!

Fandi : are you all ready? Fighting!

8 (eight) other people finally went to the mental hospital. Get there, before entering they divide the group

and decide which room to enter.

Intan : So, me and Fenia have installed a camera in the ward room and laboratory. First, we
will go to one of the rooms then we gather again in front of the head room of the mental
hospital at 12 (twelve) pm. Agree?

All : ok

Aisah : So, which group wants to go to the laboratory or ward room?

Fenia : I want to go to the lab!

Reny : yes it means group 1 (one) goes to the lab, our group goes to ward room.

Hestia : sure, yes, if so, see you again in the head room of the mental hospital.

2 (two) groups finally separated. And this story's perspective will focus on the first group that goes to the

lab.
FLOW 4 (Mental Hospital Laboratory)

4 people in group 1 (FENIA, INTAN, HESTIA, AMY)


Amy : who is recording?

Intan : me, and fenia, you’re talking, ok?

Fenia : oke!

Intan : I started, 1 ... 2 ... 3 action!

Fenia : Hello everyone, we are already inside this former mental hospital. And next to me are
Amy and Hestia who also participated in this test of courage.

Amy & Hestia : * waving *

Fenia : now we are in the laboratory room, it is said that here is where the patients are tortured!

Amy : hey, where do you know?

Fenia : of course from my friend *grinned*

Hestia : Hmm storyteller!

Fenia : You see this gripping atmosphere, oh now my body is shivering. Let's try to go inside.
*open the door*

Amy : Look at this, it's a mess.

Hestia : lots of paper and lab equipment here. This place is really left behind

Amy : what do I step on?

Intan : A doll? Why is it there in the lab room?

Amy : I don't know.

Fenia : * takes a doll * does this belong to the patient?

The sound from the password appears from the headset that they attach to the ear.

Fandi : test ... test ... fen, use it for our content.

Fenia : oh ok. Well guys, look what I'm holding, this is the doll we found in the lab room. It
seems like this belongs to the patient. So the rumors about patients being tortured here are
true? Is that why the doll is here? Wow, it's scary
When they showed the doll, suddenly they heard a woman screaming. They stopped doing their activities

and turned towards the sound that was somewhere.

Intan : hey ... did you hear that?

Hestia : I heard

Fenia : finally appears too.

Amy : hey, my feelings aren't good. Let's go out of here. That's enough, right?

Fenia : wait a minute, I'm still not satisfied.

Amy : come on! we go out.

Intan : OH!

Hestia : what? Just make it shocked

Ghost Diana passes (runs)

Intan : Did you see something just now?

Amy : what are you looking at?

Intan : I saw people passing in that direction

They turned to where Intan pointed.

Hestia : it's not there

Fenia : seriously? Very lucky to see, I also want to

Amy : Your brain doesn't work.

Intan speaks using HT.

Intan : fandi, is this enough? After all, I got the recording.

Fandi : okay, good work.

After feeling enough, they went out of the lab room. Fenia suddenly had a serious expression.

Intan : why fen? Something's missing?

Fenia : no, when I saw the doll that was trampled on amy. I remember back when I installed the
camera, I didn't see a doll there.

Amy : fen, this is not the time to scare us.

Fenia : I'm serious, when I go to the lab room I don't see that doll there.
Hestia : oh this isn't funny

Intan : maybe you don't see

Fenia : it could be

They went to the headroom of the Mental Hospital.


FLOW 5 (WARD ROOM)

4 people in group 2 (Reny, Aisah, Humairoh, Irma)

Now, go back to group 2 (two), which goes to the ward room.

Reny who speaks and humairoh holds the camera.

Reny : Hello guys, now we are in the ward room. We will try to enter this room. Are you
mentally ready?

All : ready!

Reny : ok if so, come with me *open the door*

Reny : Well guys, now we have gone inside, so as you can see this room is one of the haunted
places too. Yesterday I tried to find out on the internet about this place and found that
there were people who also tested courage here trying to take pictures here. Maybe from
those of you who have seen the photo on the internet.

Irma : what in the photo?

Reny : Here, I even saved the photo to look after it. * shows the cellphone screen *

Aisah : oh yeah, there's something behind. What is white smoke?

Reny : * direction to cellphone * looks right? Locate the photo in that direction * point to the
window *

Humairoh : * directs the camera to the window *

Irma : hey, I found something

Aisah : what is that?

Irma : Look, this is a picture of the head of a mental hospital, a doctor, a nurse and his patients.

Reny : hum, point the camera to this photo

Humairoh : ok

Aisah : So this is the head of the mental hospital. Doesn't look like a bad person.

Humairoh : don't just conclude, from the outside his face looks friendly but we can't see it from the
cover.

Reny : Well guys, you see this photo? Seen they smiled happily when in the photo but what
actually happened was beyond expectations. From what I've read on the internet, the head
of the hospital killed this patient, doctor and nurse, the motive is still unknown. Are you
curious? Same like us.

When they gathered to see the photo, behind them appeared a ghost figure with white clothes and long

black hair.

Aisah : * looks back *

Irma : why?

Aisah : I feel someone is behind

Reny : seriously?

Humairoh : You're not kidding right?

Aisah : do I really look like someone is joking?

Reny : * checking your watch * hey, it's already 12 o'clock. Do we just finish it?

Irma : oh yeah it doesn't feel

Reny : fandi, are we okay?

Fandi : o-oh ... yes. All good work, others are waiting for you in the headroom

Reny : ok. We are on the way

In the tent, fandi and yuandini's place watched sitting quietly staring at the laptop.

Yuandini : Fandi, I didn't see that wrong right?

Fandi : ...

Yuandini : hey say something please, you also see with your own eyes right? There was someone
behind them

Fandi : just calm down, the ghost did nothing. Precisely because he appears we can increase
subscribers.

Yuandini : that's not the problem. If something happens with my sister I won't forgive you!

Fandi : never mind, just trust me. Nothing will happen


FLOW 6 (HEAD ROOM OF MENTAL HOSPITAL)

10 youtuber people
Return to group 2 who goes after other friends. They arrived and saw his friends waiting in the head room

of the asylum.

Fenia : why are you so long ?!

Humairoh : sorry, it's really dark, just want to walk too much stuff on the floor.

Amy : ok. As per the agreement, we gather here at 12 o'clock - hmm maybe it's 12:30 a.m.

Aisah : who is the cameraman now?

Irma : me!

Humairoh : So, I'm the one who talks, huh?

Irma : 1 ... 2 ... 3 actions!

Humairoh : ok, please, see you later. Now that we are in front of the head room of the soul's house,
we will enter this room. From the news, this is where the head of the mental hospital
committed suicide here. What are you curious about? let's see

Reny : eh wait a minute!

Intan : what else?

Reny : who opened the door?

Irma : you

Reny : no

Amy : have we overwritten?

All : * nod *

* hompimpa alaium gambreng *

Hestia : shit ...

Amy : now Hestia opened the door

Hestia : ok. *open the door*

Krieeet * open the door *


Fenia : wow the atmosphere here is far more different than before.

Reny : why? Are you scared now?

Fenia : no, I'm even more excited

Hestia : wait, I put another camera here so that fandi and yuandini can see us

Fandi : ok, it's good. Hum, continue.

Humairoh : ready! Guys, now we have go inside. This is where the place said to be hit by the curse,
whether true or not we will confirm it here.

Hestia : eh ???

Irma : why?

Hestia : isn't it ... that was the doll?

Intan : Oh my God ... why is the doll here?

Aisah : why is that doll?

Hestiya : we found the doll in the lab room, why is it here now?

Amy : don't say ...

Aisah : calm down first, maybe there are some putting it here or there could be 2 (two) same
dolls

Fenia : no. This is the same doll! It turns out my memory isn't wrong. When installing CCTV
there I did not see this doll at all. And Amy stepping on this doll near the flower pot right? There, close
to where I installed the CCTV, I must have realized there was a doll there.

Humairoh : How do you know if it's the same doll?

Fenia : I saw the part of his right hand was torn, I was the first person to hold this doll so I
knew right away

Amy : hey, shouldn't you be carelessly touching things here? What if something happens?

Humairoh : mi please calm down, don't shout. We're live!

Amy : how can I calm down if I see that doll here ?!

Reny : eh I think I've seen that doll

Aisah : Don't say that doll is also in ward room?


Reny : no, wait a minute * open cellphone * I had a photo from the head photo of the mental
hospital taking a photo together. Look carefully, I'm zooming.

Hestia : oh? Is that the doll that the patient is holding?

Intan : oh yeah, it's the same doll

Fandi : Irma, direct the camera to the cellphone and show the doll to the camera too.

Reny & Fenia : ok

Humairoh : guys, it turns out that this doll belongs to a patient in the photo, but why is the doll that
should be in the lab room here? Is this doll ... possessed by the patient's spirit?

Amy : ENOUGH!

Humairoh : Sorry, I just want to add to the impression of horror

Intan : can you not shout? My ears hurt!

BUK! *sound from closet*

Irma : I'm surprised, what's that sound?

Aisah : I think the direction of her voice is from the closet

Fenia : But how come this cupboard has a hole in it?

Humairoh : I tried to open the door to the closet. * Trying to open the closet door * but can't open.

Intan : but the center is hollow right? * Peeking out of the dark *

hmm hole is not visible. I tried to put my hand in

When Intan tried to enter his hand, suddenly he felt his hand pull.

Intan : OH! OOOOHHHHH NOOOOOOOOO, HELP!

Fenia and Aisah tried to help Intan by helping her pull it from the closet hole and her hand managed to get
out.

Intan : What is that just now ?!

Humairoh : God, what happened!

Fenia : if that's the case, it's my turn

Amy : NO !! * pullinh Fenia's hand * is enough. I'm scared

Fenia : I just want to make sure

Hestia : I'll do it
Amy : HESTIA DON'T!

Hestia tried to enter her hand into the closet hole. And…

Humairoh : what do you do?

Hestia : there's nothing — AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Humairoh : QUICKLY HELP HER

Aisah and Fenia pulled Hestia’s hands with difficulty and finally released

Hestia : Ouch! my hands ... bleed ...

Amy : Oh my God, this place ... isn't safe ...

Aisah : hey what are you talking about ...

Amy : it turns out that the rumors are true, and what the dual word says is also true. This place
is really damned!

Hestia : She is right, my hand is scratched like this. Oh god, I can't stand it anymore, I want to
go home

Reny : hey, why is this sudden? Stay for a while.

Amy : BUT I AM AFRAID! I DON'T WANT TO BREAK THE SAME AS THE FRIEND
DWI.

Intan : Do you think you're just scared? we are scared too! But we are here, where we can just
give up

Hestia : Then did you want responsibility if something happened? I'd better leave here than die
from a curse. Come on my, let's go.

Hestia immediately attracted, amy, crying, now there are only 6 people left.

Aisah : how about this? They left

Irma : * Look in the direction of the camera * Fandi, have you seen what happened here
right? Is what answered by Dwi true?

Fandi : are you stupid? I told you the ghost can't kill

Reny : but you can see for yourself, the hands of the Intan and hestia are drawn! If more than
this I don't think we will be able to

Intan : when my hand is pulled, it feels like there is another hand that touches my skin

Humairoh : the hestia's hand was hurt too, how do you explain it?
Fandi : hear me, hestia's hand has been injured before his hand is inserted into the closet. You
see there are lots of sharp objects, surely he is just acting

Intan : So what do you mean my hand is pulled also acting? I'm telling the truth!

Aisah : I think we just stop it, I also can't stand it anymore here

Fandi : Who told you to stop?!

Fandi who is usually calm and friendly suddenly snaps to make them all silent, even Yuandini who is
sitting next to him is also shocked to see the change in attitude.

Fandi : * sighs * sorry, I mean please hold on a little longer. If we have subscribed to 5000
subscribers, stop this. Okay?

Fenia : then we have conditions!

Fandi : what?

Fenia : I want you to give us more money, because we play an important role here and you are
much better off because you sit outside watching

Aisah : she is right, you just sit watching and we are in trouble! After this is over you must keep
your promise

Yuandini : how about this?

Yuandini turns towards the fandi who holds his head, Yuandini feels fandi is holding back his emotions.

Fandi : OK, I'll fix my promise. This has reached 4900 subscribe, a little more. try friends.

Finally they continue the content and enter the headroom of the mental hospital.

Reny : Wow the closet is big and ... the glass has broken

Irma : Be careful not to get too close later you can get hurt

Prank!

The glass on the table fell and broke.

Humairoh : what is that ?!

Fenia : glass? Why can it fall?

Aisah : maybe the wind

Intan : Don't you see that the room is all closed? How can the wind enter?

When they chatted, a strange event happened, which was a cabinet that suddenly swayed.
Aisah : W-what is this? Earthquake?

And the swaying cupboard makes the objects in it fall.

Fandi : irma, quickly record!

Irma was still stiffly watching the incident in front of her.

Fandi : irma, you're the only one talking. Quickly record and say something!

Irma : o-okay * directs the camera to the swaying cabinet * do you see? This cabinet
suddenly sways

When Irma pointed her camera towards the cupboard, the cupboard immediately fell and happened to

humairoh and Aisah near the closet about them both. 4 other people were immediately shocked.

Intan : God, humairoh, Aisah, hey, hurry up and get him out.

Fenia : hum? Hum? are you ok? Ah…

Irma : why fen?

Fenia : Her head was crushed, it seems she is still alive but she fainted.

Reny : my God ... Aisah is not breathing ... the shard hits her chest * closes her mouth *

Intan : Something wrong here ... I have to get out of here.

Irma : Me too

Fenia : wait, we can't just leave them like that!

Reny : we don't have time to save them, we have to get out of here * pulling fenia's hand *

They managed to get out of the room and immediately closed the door.

Fenia : why do you go out right away ?! humairoh and Aisah are still inside, we have to get
them out !!!

Irma : Didn't you see the incident just now? If we like that too, how is it?

Fenia : but humairoh is still alive! At least we saved her first!

Intan : I also want to saved both of them, but ...

Fenia : coward!

Reny : Can you be quiet ?! * squatting while crying *

Finally they fell silent with regret. Elsewhere, Fandi and Yuandini stiffly stare at their laptops.
Yuandini : * stands up from his seat *

Fandi : hey what do you want?

Yuandini : I have to saved my sister

Fandi : wait, don't go there, it's still dangerous

Yuandini : Finally you admit it too right? You know the place is dangerous but you still force them
to continue the content? God damn it

Fandi : yuan, I will tell them to stop, I myself don't expect it to be like this.

Yuandini : That's enough, I don't want to know anymore. Our friendship ends here, I'd better lose
money than lose my only sister. *go*

Fandi : yuan? Yuan? aaaah! * scrambles hair *

After Yuandini's departure, only fandi was alone in the tent. Then Fandi felt strong winds from outside \

and the lights in her tent were dead and lit.

Fandi : what else is this?


FLOW 7 (forest)

Amy and Hestya

Then now focus on Amy and Hestia who have left the mental hospital. The two of them walked in the

forest without direction.

Amy : where are we?

Hestia : I don't know, we've walked a long way but I don't see tents or exits

Amy : Will we be okay?

Hestia : calm down, there is me. Wait a minute, I'm looking for instructions

Amy : Do you want to leave me alone?

Hestia : just calm down, I'm not far from you

Hestia let go of her hand from Amy and tried to find an exit sign. Hestia immediately disappeared from

there like she was swallowed by darkness.

Amy : hes, is it still long? Hestia? Hestia?

There is no answer from hestia, amy already feels her feelings become uncomfortable.

Amy : hestia, where are you ??? Eh - what is this?

When Amy looks down, Amy steps on something. And it turns out that the one who was trampled on was

the same doll he saw in the lab room and headroom of the mental hospital. Not only that, scattered papers

are also there.

Hestia : why ... why is the doll here? * crying fear *

When Amy looked forward, Amy saw that Hestia was in front of her but was seen turning her back and

her head lowered.

Amy : You are here! I saw there was a doll here, we had to run away quickly ... hestia?

There is no reaction from hestia, amy gets confused. Trying to approach Hestia and hold her shoulder.

*backsound horror music*


Amy closed her mouth when she saw that her face turned pale and blank eyes. After that hestia

immediately strangled her throat, it seemed like she was possessed by something. Amy tried to let go of

her hands from her neck but nothing, hestia was more strangling her neck so Amy could not hold it

anymore and ... died. After strangling her, the hestia that initially had a blank stare was immediately

realized.

Hestia : why am I here, yeah I should be looking for an exit sign - eh ... amy? W-why is she
lying here? Amy? Amy? * shake her shoulder *

Hestia saw the throbbing marks on Amy's neck, hestia was immediately cold sweat.

Hestia : t-no way, am I doing it?

When Hestia was still in shock, hestia felt her neck being touched and strangled. Even though there was

no one behind her but Hestia looked in pain and kept holding her neck and ... died.
FLOW 8 (Mental Hospital)
Now back to the story of Yuandini who went to the mental hospital to save her sister and meet with Intan,

Reny, Irma and Fenia.

Intan : Yuandini, why come here?

Yuandini : I came to save my sister, is she still inside?

Irma : yes but ...

Yuandini : I will go inside

Reny : wait, you can be the next victim.

Yuandini : what should I do? I don't want to leave my sister - and you too. I hate you guys who can
just leave them alone, just keep going inside

Fenia : Then I also come along, Aisah is still inside.

Yuandini : whatever

Yuandini and Fenia entered the room again. Irma, Reny, and Intan couldn't help but stare at the two of
them going into a mental hospital.

Irma : Are you sure we didn't stop them both?

Intan : It's useless, just leave it, my life now is more important.

Reny : let's go, I don't want to be the next victim.

And the three of them left the room. While yuandini and fenia tried to find Aisah and humairoh, but what

they found was only humairoh, Aisah was lost.

Yuandini : hum, hold on I will lift the closet

Fenia : I'll help

* lift the cupboard together and get rid of her from Humairoh*

Yuandini : Hum…hum..

Humairoh : * opened her eyes softly * hngg...

Yuandini : Thank God, you are still alive


Fenia : where is Aisah?

Yuandini : * shaking her head * isn't she supposed to be lying here with humairoh?

Fenia : right, she is dead. But we can't leave it too, I have to bring the body out * glance at the
humairoh

who is still half conscious * You just take it humairoh out of here and go.

Yuandini : what do you do then?

Fenia : I will stay here and look for the body of Aisah first

Yuandini : alright, be careful

Fenia : * nod *

Yuandini took Humairoh away from the room, and left Fenia alone. When Humairoh and Yuandini had

left, Fenia looked again at the cupboard, the door that was originally tightly closed suddenly opened itself

and the contents of the closet ... empty.

Fenia : I should have done it from before, hah even though I also wanted to feel my hand pulled
* smirk *

And it turns out that Fenia does not intend to look for Aisah's body at all, but looks for ghosts in the

headroom of the mental hospital.

Fenia : okay, it's time to hunt down ghosts. Come on, show yourself so I can capture pictures of
you * holding a cellphone for photos *

Fenia went around the room hoping for a sight or ghost to appear in front of her. A little later a hand hit

the window, her hands covered in blood and her hands shrank down. Fenia who saw her was silent and

shocked.

Fenia : oh damn it! I didn't have a photo anymore

When the fenia approached the window, she immediately photographed with her cellphone camera and

realized a wooden cabinet with a hole next to the window.

Fenia :should I try to put my hand in there huh — but wait!

Fenia saw a red liquid coming out of the closet door, gulping her hard saliva fenia opened the cabinet and

Fenia was shocked to see that Aisah whose body was full of blood, was added to broken glass stuck to

her entire body.


Fenia : why did she move here? Is that Humairoh doing? No — she should have fainted and
couldn't possibly get out of the burden of the glass cabinet ... don't ... ghost ?! What kind
of ghost can make it this bad ?!

When Fenia talks to herself, Fenia remembers the story from Dwi, about her friend who died mysteriously

and curses.

When Fenia was busy thinking, behind her came a figure with a large body, his form not too

clear because it was dark.

Fenia also felt someone behind her, Fenia wanted to look back but her body

was stiff like a rock, trying to gather fenia's courage to look back very slowly.

His eyes widened at his appearance, his broken face and his head filled with blood.

Fenia was so scared, Fenia accidentally fell and the ghost immediately pulled Fenia's collar and took it,

and that only sounds like a scream from Fenia.


FLOW 9

After the Fenia incident, let's continue to Yuandini and Humairoh who tried to run away from the room,

the yuandini who was carrying humairoh was exhausted because she could not find a way out. Finally she

decided to stop and take a break.

Yuandini : wait a little longer hum, we will definitely come out and take you to the hospital. Is your
wound bad?

Humairoh : ...

Yuandini : hum?

Yuandini stared in confusion at the sight of Humairoh who had been silent. Shortly thereafter, her hand

humairoh moved and put her hand in her pants pocket.

Humairoh : * singing twinkle twinkle little star *

Yuandini : hum, why sing? hum? Be aware of hum! * approach humairoh and shake her
shoulder *

When Yuandini approached her sister and tried to resuscitate her, she felt her stomach being pierced, and

the one who stabbed her ... was her own sister.

Yuandini : hum ... no!.....who are you?...

Humairoh : * still singing and smiling while stabbing yuandini's stomach deeper *

After that the humairoh (which seemed to be broken) removed the glass from the stomach of Yuandini

and immediately collapsed while holding her stomach which began to emit a lot of blood. Then yuandini

saw the humairoh who seemed to want to stab herself — still continuing to sing twinkle twinkle little star

— immediately pierced her own chest. After that, Humairoh stopped singing, she came to her senses and

saw her sister staring at her while crying. humairoh glanced at the pierced chest.

Humairoh : yuan ... * falls *

Yuandini who had almost run out of blood saw her sister who was lifeless again. Yuandini tried to reach

her hand. After that, Yuandini closed her eyes and died.
FLOW 10

(INTAN, IRMA, RENY)

Next are 3 people who are still running away but still can't find the exit.

intan : hey what is this? We have been running for 40 (fourthy) minutes but haven't found the
exit ?!

Irma : how come it's awkward, huh? ren, did you realize it?

Reny : yes, we like running around in this place but we don't see the exit way

Intan : Are we lost?

Irma : no, this is a kind of maze. We've been spinning around. This mental hospital, do you
feel strange? We always find the same room * glancing at the lab room *

Reny : Is it possible ... because of the curse? We can't get out of here again?

Intan : don't joke please!

Irma & reny : WE'RE NOT JOKING!

Irma : so what is this? Will we call for help?

Reny: You can't, there's no signal here

Intan : what should we do ??

Irma: are we just looking for yuandini and fenia? Maybe they have come out of there

Reny : are you crazy? They enter there means they have become the next target

Irma : Are you assuming they are dead ???

Reny : so what? We don't even see them out or meet them, so we have to get out of here

Irma : * shuffles her hair in stress * wait? Where are you?

Reny : you know ???

When I got excited and chatted, they didn't realize that I wasn't there.

Irma : This is not the time to play hide and seek

Reny : Wait, Intan isn't the type of person who is like that in a situation like this?

Irma : we have to look for it first, it won't forgive me if she runs away on her own
When Irma had just set foot, she felt droplets of water on her head.

Reny : why?

Irma : * holding her head * does it feel like there's a trickle about my head - what is this red
liquid? Blood?

Irma and she looked up at the same time. It turns out that the red liquid droplets came from the roof. They

immediately backed away.

Irma : i-that's ...

Reny : Irma, let's run

Irma is still not moving because she looks forward. Reny also came to see it and it turned out that in front

of her there was a woman standing. Reny immediately ran away first.

Reny : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Irma : wait ren, don't leave me — oh yeah!

Irma slipped because she stepped on blood on the floor. And suddenly the female ghost had appeared in

front of her and pulled her leg. Irma shouted (as always lost in the dark). Reny who still ran without

direction decided to hide. so scared, she closed her ears and closed her eyes. And reny felt her feet touch,

reny immediately shocked.

* Test ... blood dripping from above

* Test ... blood dripping from above

And again, the blood appears, this time hit by his nose. When Reny looked up, the ghost had appeared in

front of her and she screamed loudly. (from here it goes dark)
FLOW 11

(FANDY, INTAN)

After the story of Irma & Reny ended this time the next victim was Fandi, annoyed because the laptop

was in trouble. He could not even see the situation of his friends in a mental hospital because the CCTV

camera suddenly died.

Fandi : how is this? Others haven't returned yet. Fortunately, I already uploaded it to YouTube.
I didn't expect now to reach 800 subscriptions, this was unexpected.

Fandi now doesn't know what to do. He was still confused by the events he saw, starting from the doll

who moved around to his two friends whose hands were pulled. After watching it, suddenly the laptop

screen turned black. so he doesn't know how his friends are there.

Fandi : I'd better catch up too. It's almost dawn

Fandi left immediately. In the middle of the forest, he felt cold and the hair on his neck stood. Arriving in

front of the mental hospital Fandi realized someone was watching him.

Fandi : who is that? Get out quickly!

No answer.

Fandi felt that he really had to leave here, but suddenly he heard a scream. And the voice of the shout

came from inside the mental hospital

Fandi : is that sound ... intan?

Fandi then saw the doll again right in front of it.

Fandi: ...

Fandi felt someone behind him, his body did not move because he is fear. Ghost behind him sounded

strange. And the atmosphere was instantly dark.


FLOW 12

(INTAN, PANDU)

Then where did the shouting come from? Now we focus on Intan.

Intan : * awake * where is this?

Intan turned out to be in front of the headroom of the Mental Hospital.

Intan : why am I here? Aren't I with Irma and Reny?

Intan : * shouted * Irma? Reny? Where are you ???

Intan who was confused and panicked called Irma and Reny but there was no response. Suddenly there

was the sound of a door in the mental hospital's headroom. Intan became more panicked when she saw a

ghost figure appearing in front of her with a horrible face and her legs were immediately pulled and

dragged into the headroom of the mental hospital. What was left was only the sound of Intan‘s shouts.

.
Flow 13

(WIRDA, IRFAN)

A few weeks later since that incident, this has become a public conversation because 10 people suddenly

disappeared.

Cameraman Irfan : Is this the hospital?

Host Wirda : No, but in the forest there. But we can't go inside because it's being tightly
guarded. We broadcast it from here

Cameraman Irfan : ok. If so, I start, 1..2..3 ... action!

Host wirda : Good afternoon, viewers, come back with me at Madani News to report on
reliable news. On Sunday, 30 June 2019, 10 people who work as publishers are
reported to have disappeared. The only evidence is the video on YouTube which
is the subject of discussion by netizens. The video contains content that they are
trying to test in a mental hospital. no longer operating. Right now the police are
investigating this case. The news closed the Madani News event. I wirda thank
you and see you.

Cameraman Irfan : Cut! Okay, good work

Host wirda : Thanks

Cameraman Irfan : but I'm still surprised where did they go after testing the guts there? There's no
way they just disappeared? * chat while looking at the results of the camera *

Host wirda : I don't know. Better not talk about it again. Hurry up.
FLASH BACK

Here will be told about the guide, a head of a psychiatric hospital experiencing acute level stress because

the debt is increasing and before the bankruptcy is added by doctors and nurses who ask for gintan

increasingly stressful.

Di sini akan di kisahkan tentang pandu, seorang kepala RUMAH SAKIT JIWA mengalami stress
tingkat akut karena hutangnya semakin bertambah dan menjelang kebangkrutan di tambah dokter
dan susternya yang meminta gintan semakin menambah stressnya.

Doctor Vera : Sir, when did you give us a salary?

Dokter vera : pak, kapan anda memberi kami gaji?

Nurse Finadela : Right sir, this is 3 months, you didn't give us your salary

Suster finadela : benar pak, ini sudah 3 bulan bapak tidak memberi gaji kami

Nurse Tina : Didn't you promise to give a salary a month ago? Now it's past

Suster tina : bukannya bapak sudah janji akan memberi gaji sebulan yang lalu? Sekarang ini
sudah lewat

Chief Pandu : I told you to wait a little longer.

Pandu : aku sudah bilang kan tunggu sebentar lagi.

Doctor Vera : what are you waiting for, sir? Don't delay anymore

Dokter Vera : tunggu sampai kapan pak? Jangan di tunda lagi

Nurse Tina : Sir, if this continues, the three of us will resign and look for another job.

Suster tina : pak, kalo begini terus kami bertiga akan mengundurkan diri dan mencari
pekerjaan lain.

Hearing that, the guide immediately looked sharply at Sister Tina. Sister Tina immediately closed her

mouth.

Mendengar itu, pandu langsung menatap tajam ke arah suster tina. Suster tina langsung menutup
mulutnya.
Nurse Tina : Sorry sir, joking

Suster tina : maaf pak, bercanda

Chief Pandu : * smile * no, I'm not angry. Do you want a salary? Okay, I'll give it

Pandu : *senyum* tidak, aku tidak marah. Kalian mau gaji? Oke, akan kuberikan

Nurse Finadela : Really?

Suster Finadela : benarkah?

Chief Pandu : but there are conditions

Pandu : tapi ada syaratnya

Doctor Vera : is that sir? (feeling bad)

Dokter Vera : apa itu pak? (perasaannya tidak enak)

Mr. Pandu’s expression immediately turned flat.

Pandu yang tersenyum ramah tiba-tiba lenyap, wajahnya langsung datar

Chief Pandu : kill all patients

Pandu : bunuh seluruh pasien itu

Nurse Tina : Sir? Are you eating less?

Suster Tina : pak? Bapak kurang makan?

Chief Pandu : * look sharp again * I eat regularly

Pandu : *di tatap tajam lagi* aku makan teratur

Nurse Finadela : Don't be like that, it's not funny sir

Suster Finadela : bapak jangan begitu, ini tidak lucu pak

Chief Pandu : I am serious

Pandu : saya serius

Doctor Vera : What's wrong with you? This is not like the usual father

Dokter Vera : ada apa dengan bapak? Ini tidak seperti bapak yang biasanya
Chief Pandu : Do you want to serve? I gave it, but the conditions I said earlier

Pandu : kalian mau gajikan? Akuberikan, tapi syaratnya yang kubilang tadi

Nurse Finadela : What if we don't want to?

Suster Finadela : kalau kita tidak mau bagaimana?

Chief Pandu : * Take a gun * Have you seen this? this is a birthday present from my father

Pandu : *ambil pistol* kalian pernah lihat ini? ini hadiah ulang tahun dari ayahku

Doctor & nurse : * swallow hard *

Dokter & suster : glek *nelen ludah*

Chief Pandu : This mental hospital will go bankrupt. So, before this place is closed, get rid of
patients here. After you kill them all, I'll give you a salary and you may resign as
you like. How?

Pandu :RUMAH SAKIT JIWA ini akan bangkrut. Jadi, sebelum tempat ini di tutup,
singkirkan pasien-pasien di sini. Setelah kalian bunuh mereka semua, akan kuberi
gaji dan kalian boleh mengundurkan diri sesuka kalian. bagaimana?

Nurse Tina : Why should we sir?

Suster tina : kenapa harus kami pak?

Chief Pandu : Because I want to see the expression of people with mental disorders when
killed. Take it easy, after you kill the patients, you bury all the bodies. If you feel
you are suspected by the police, I will help fake the alibi.

Pandu : karena aku ingin melihat ekspresi orang yang gangguan jiwa saat di bunuh.
Tenang saja, setelah kalian bunuh pasien2 itu, kalian kubur seluruh mayatnya.
Jika kalian merasa di curigai polisi aku akan membantu memalsukan alibinya.

Doctor Vera : but it's not like this, sir.

Dokter Vera : tapi tidak seperti ini caranya pak.

Nurse Tina : Yes sir, I can't kill people. I still care about those patients, once again ... sorry
sir

Suster Tina : iya pak, saya tidak bisa membunuh orang. Saya masih peduli dengan pasien2
itu, sekali lagi… maaf pak

Chief Pandu : You're good

Pandu : begitu ya? Kamu baik ya


*DOR*

Pandu shot him right in his left chest. Doctor Vera and the finadela nurse gaped at the incident just now.

Pandu langsung menembaknya tepat di dada kirinya. Doktervera dan suster finadela menganga
melihat kejadian barusan.

Chief Pandu : but I don't need someone like you, annoying. How? * glance at the 2 people *
kill the patient or ... * lift the gun *

Pandu : tapi aku tidak butuh orang sepertimu, mengganggu. Gimana? *melirik 2 orang
itu* bunuh pasien atau… *angkat pistol*

Doctor Vera : I will do it

Dokter Vera : b-baik saya akan lakukan

Sister Finadela : * nod *

Suster Finadela : *angguk*

Chief Pandu : good. If so get rid of it * turns the nurse dead * and cleanses the blood huh, I
have business first.

Pandu : bagus. Kalo begitu singkirkan itu *menoleh suster tinayang sudah mati* dan
bersihkan darahnya ya, aku ada urusan dulu.

The Pandu left immediately and the two of them were still shocked by the incident.

Pandu itu langsung pergi meninggalkan mereka berdua yang masih shock dengan kejadian barusan.

Doctor Vera : This is bad, there seems to be one more person with a mental disorder

Dokter Vera : ini gawat, sepertinya ada 1 orang lagi yang gangguan jiwa

Nurse Finadela : Ssssttt! What did he hear?

Suster finadela : ssssttt! Kalo dia dengar bagaimana?

Doctor Vera : But Mr Pandu is indeed getting weird, before he wasn't like this. Did he turn
into a psychopath?

Dokter Vera : tapi pak pandu memang semakin aneh, dulu dia tidak seperti ini. Apa dia
berubah jadi psikopat?
Nurse Finadela : hahh ... * looking at the body of Nurse Tina * It seems we have to obey, I
don't want to get shot too

Suster finadela : hahh… *melihat jasad suster tina* sepertinya kita harus menurutinya, aku tidak
ingin kena tembak juga

Doctor Vera : Why are you so calm? We just watched the murder scene in front of us! And
also ... oh my God ... I'm still in shock

Dokter Vera : kenapa kau tenang sekali? Kita baru saja menyaksikan adegan pembunuhan di
depan kita! Dan juga… oh astaga… aku masih shock

Nurse Finadela : We have no other choice. I myself did not expect him to kill him immediately.
Quickly help me clean this up

Suster Finadela : kita tidak punya pilihan lain. aku sendiri juga tidak menyangka dia langsung
membunuhnya. Cepat bantu aku membereskan ini

Finally, doctor Vera and Nurse Finadela took care of the body.

And this is where they started, killing the patients. This time it was a nurse Finadela who started it. The

finale was staring at 2 patients who were grabbing donuts.

Akhirnya dokter vera dan suster finadela mengurus jasad itu.

Dan disinilah mereka memulai, membunuh para pasien.Kali ini adalah suster finadela yang
memulainya.Suster finadelamenatap 2 pasien yang sedang merebut donat.

Nurse Finadela : Don't fight for it, why not just share it?

Suster Finadela : jangan rebutan begitu, kenapa tidak berbagi saja?

Patient Sri : This is mine

Pasien sri : ini milikku

Patients Diana : may not, this is mine

Pasien Diana : tidak boleh, ini milikku

Sister Finadela : just share?

Suster Finadela : berbagi saja ya?


The two mental patients were still struggling regardless of the finadela nun. Finally the finadela nun was

national and grabbed the donut roughly and divided it into 2.

Kedua pasien gangguan jiwa itu masih rebutan tanpa memperdulikan suster finadela.Akhirnya
suster finadela kebangsal lalu menyambar donat itu dengan kasar dan membaginya jadi 2.

Nurse finadela : here, don't fight anymore

Suster Finadela : nih, jangan rebutan lagi

Patient sri : thank you * immediately eat greedily, his mouth is covered *

Pasien sri : terima kasih*langsung makan dengan rakus, mulutnya belepotan*

Diana didn't accept throwing his donut right away.

Diana yang tidak terima langsung melempar donatnya.

Sister Finadela : Why is it thrown ?! * slap diana *

Suster Finadela : kenapa di lempar?! *tampar diana*

Diana, who was slapped, went berserk and bit the hand of the finadela nurse. Finadela screamed in pain

and immediately kicked Diana.

Diana yang di tampar semakin mengamuk dan menggigit tangan suster finadela. Suster finadela
berteriak kesakitan dan langsung menendang diana.

Sister Finadela : I'm sick of it. You really deserve to be killed, you too! * designate sri *

Suster Finadela : aku sudah muak. Kau memang pantas di bunuh, kamu juga! *menunjuk sri*
Finadela, who had been carried away with emotion, immediately dragged Diana, and took the knife on the

table.

Suster finadela yang sudah terbawa emosi langsung menyeret diana, dan mengambil pisau yang
ada di atas meja.

Patient Diana : aaaaaaaa ... let me go! Bad, granny ...

Pasien Diana : a-aaaaaaaa… lepaskan! Dasar jelek, nenek-nenek…

Nurse Finadela : Did you say ?! I'm still 40 years old!

Suster Finadela : apa kau bilang?! Usiaku masih 40 tahun!

Patient Diana : let me go! Doct, please help me !!! There is grandma killing me

Pasien Diana : lepas! Dokteeer, tolong akuuuuu!!! Ada nenek2 membunuhkuuuuu

The doctor who heard the screaming voice came immediately, shocked to see the actions of the

Nurse Finadela preparing to stab patient Diana.

Dokter yang mendengar suara teriakan itu langsung datang, kaget melihat tindakan suster
finadelayang bersiap2 menusuk pasien diana.

Doctor Vera : What are you doing ?!

Dokter Vera : apa yang kau lakukan?!

Nurse Finadela : shut up! I can't stand working here, I'd better kill this patient immediately and
get a salary. After that I will get out of here.

Suster Finadela : diam! Aku sudah tidak tahan kerja di sini, lebih baik aku akan segera
membunuh pasien ini dan mengambil gaji. Setelah itu aku akan keluar dari sini.

Nurse Finadela without further ado immediately stabbed Dian's hand.

Suster Finadela tanpa basa basi langsung menusuk tangan diana.


Patient Diana : No!!!!

Pasien Diana : TIDAAAAAAAK!

Doctor Vera : Fin, stop it!

Dokter Vera : fin, sudah hentikan!

Sister Finadela : No! I will make him suffer from throwing away food, so I will stab his hand
first. After that I pierce your heart so that you don't make a sound again * the
story laughs badly *

Suster Finadela : tidak! Aku akan membuatnya menderita karena sudah membuang2 makanan,
jadi aku akan menusuk tangannya terlebih dahulu. Setelah itu kutusuk bagian
jantungmu, supaya kau tidak bersuara lagi *ceritanya ketawa jahat*

Patient Diana : no ... forgiveness ... doctor ...

Pasien Diana : tidak… ampun… dokter…

Nurse Finadela immediately stabbed her left chest, Diana, who was crying for help, immediately

collapsed. After killing patient diana, nurse finadela immediately glanced at Sri, who had no appetite for

seeing the scene.

Suster finadela langsung menusuk dada kirinya diana, Diana yang menangis meminta tolong
langsung ambruk. Setelah membunuh diana, suster finadela langsung melirik ke arah sriyang
sudah tidak nafsu makan karena melihat adegan itu.

Nurse Finadela : Ver, catch him

Suster Finadela : ver, tangkap dia

Doctor Vera : Me?

Dokter Vera : a-aku?

Nurse Finadela : Fast!

Suster Finadela : cepat!


Doctor Vera inevitably was forced to arrest Sri who tried to escape but failed because she was caught.

Dokter vera mau tidak mau terpaksa menangkap sriyang berusaha melarikan diri tapi gagal karena
tertangkap.

Patient Sri : No, I beg you ... I promise to be a good child ... I'm sorry ...

Pasien Sri : tidak, aku mohon… aku janji akan menjadi anak baik… maafkan aku…

Nurse Finadela : don't revenge me, I do this too to survive

Suster Finadela : jangan dendam padaku, aku melakukan ini juga untuk bertahan hidup

Sri patient : no ... doctor help me, doctor ...

Pasien Sri : tidak… dokter tolong aku, dokter…

Doctor Vera does not dare look at Sri who asks for help. Finadela immediately stabbed his left chest. A

lot of moving moves suddenly stopped and died. Shortly thereafter, the guide came and clapped his hands

satisfied to see the incident.

Dokter vera tidak berani menatap sri yang meminta tolong. Finadela langsung menusuk dada
kirinya.Sriyang banyak bergerak itu mendadak berhenti dan mati. Tak lama kemudian, pandu
datang dan menepuk tangannya puas melihat kejadian itu.

Chief Pandu : you're great, I salute you

Pandu : kau hebat, aku salut padamu

Nurse Finadela : Don't be polite, and quickly give me a salary

Suster Finadela : jangan basa basi, dan cepat beri aku gaji

Chief Pandu : do not hurry, there are still 4 patients you have not killed, I will give him if you
kill them all.

Pandu : jangan buru2, masih ada 4 pasien yang belum kalian bunuh, aku akan
memberinya jika kalian membunuh mereka semua.

Nurse Finadela : OK, where are the other patients?

Suster finadela : ok, kalo begitu kemana pasien lain?


Doctor Vera : Wait, do you want to do it again? Just me!

Dokter Vera : tunggu, kau mau melakukannya lagi? Aku saja!

Nurse Finadela : Are you sure?

Suster finadela : kau yakin?

Doctor Vera : Yes

Doktervera : i-iya

Chief Pandu : okay then, I'm waiting for the results

Pandu : baiklah kalaubegitu, aku tunggu hasilnya

After the head of the mental hospital left, Nurse Finadela immediately asked doctor Vera.

Setelah kepala RUMAH SAKIT JIWA pergi, finadela langsung bertanya pada dokter vera.

Nurse Finadela : Can you kill them yourself? You're just small

Suster finadela : apa kau bisa membunuh mereka sendiri? Nyalimu saja kecil

Doctor Vera : I will try to poison them, better than torturing them. I can't bear it

Dokter Vera : aku akan mencoba meracuni mereka, lebih baik begitu daripada harus menyiksa.
Aku tidak tega

Nurse Finadela : whatever, watch out if you fail

Suster finadela : terserah saja, awas kalau kau gagal

Since that incident, doctor Vera has become increasingly frustrated. But he had to do it so he could go and

get his salary. So he chose to invite the patients to his room and invite them to drink juice.

Semenjak kejadian itu, doktervera semakin frustasi. Tapi dia harus melakukannya agar dia bisa
pergi dan mendapatkan gajinya.Jadi dia memilih untuk mengundang pasien2 itu ke ruangannya
dan mengajak mereka minum jus.
Patient aji : doctor vera, want to play again?

Pasien aji : dokter vera, mau ngajak main lagi?

Patient Diana Sager : play? Can Mika join?

Pasien Diana sager : main? Apa mika boleh ikut?

Patient Eka : I'm not participating, I'm lazy

Pasien eka : aku tidak ikut, malas

Patient Danu : huh? Hani, what did you say earlier? * chat with your friend's story *

Pasien Danu : hah? Hani, kamu bilang apa tadi? *ngobrol sama teman hayalan ceritanya*

Doctor Vera : * shaking * not playing, I invite you here to give juice, you want?

Dokter Vera : *geleng2* bukan bermain, aku ajak kalian ke sini untuk memberikan jus, kalian
mau?

All : SURE!

All : MAUUUUU

Doctor Vera : * Give the juice to the patients * Let's go drink it

Dokter Vera : *memberikan jusnya ke para pasien* nah ayo silahkan di minum

Patient Aji : * smells the juice and laughs to himself *good smell

Pasien aji : *mencium bau jusnya dan tertawa sendiri* baunya enak

Patient Eka : I want strawberry flavor

Pasien Eka : aku mau rasa stroberi

Doctor Vera : just exchange it with Aji

Dokter Vera : tukaran saja sama aji ya

Patien Aji : NO! I like the smell of this juice

Pasien Aji : Tidak mau! Aku suka bau jus yang ini

Patient Diana Sagir : mika also wants to drink this, mica likes juice. Yes, mika? * talking to yourself
with a doll named mika *

Pasien Diana sagir : mika juga mau minum nih, mika suka jus. Iya kan mika? *ngomong sendiri
sama boneka yang bernama mika*
Danu, who was still quietly staring at the other side, was clearly no one.

Danu, yang masih diam menatap ke sebelah yang jelas2 tidak ada orang.

Doctor Vera : Why Danu?

Dokter Vera : kenapa Danu?

Patient Danu : hani‘s said I can't drink the juice

Pasien Danu : katanya hani aku tidak boleh minum jus itu

Doctor Vera : Why? Does it taste bad?

Dokter Vera : k-kenapa? Apa rasanya tidak enak?

Patient Danu : she said no

Pasien Danu : katanya jangan

Aji who had drunk the juice first immediately said what he felt

Aji yang sudah meminum jus itu duluan langsung mengatakan hal yang dia rasakan.

Patient Aji : Very delicious!

Pasien Aji : Enak sekali!

Patient aji : we sing twinkle twinkle little star while drinking, please * laugh *

Pasien aji : kita nyanyi lagu twinkle twinkle little star sambil minum yuk *ketawa*

Aji sang then drank the juice, then continued singing. Likewise with Diana Sagir and Eka.

Aji nyanyi lalu minum jusnya, setelah itu melanjutkan nyanyiannya.Begitu juga dengan Diana
sagir dan eka.

Patient Eka : yes this juice very delicious, I want to add more

Pasien eka : yaa ini sangat enak, aku mau tambah lagi
Patient Diana Sagir : * Drink the juice then bribe the juice to the doll until the juice spills * How
is mica? Delicious?

Pasien Diana sager : *minum jusnya lalu menyuap jus ke bonekanya sampai jusnya tumpah*
bagaimana mika? Enak?

Doctor Vera : The others are drinking, let's try it

Dokter Vera : tuh yang lain minum, ayo di coba

Danu who was still staring doubtfully at the juice then looked at her next to nobody. Even so, meida still

drank it. Not long after ... Eka, Diana sagir, and Aji who drank it first suddenly grabbed her neck and their

faces pale.

Danu yang masih menatap ragu jusnya lalu melihat lagi ke sebelahnya yang tidak ada
siapa2.Walau begitu, meida tetap meminumnya.Tak lama kemudian… eka, Diana sagir, dan Aji
yang meminumnya duluan tiba2 memegang lehernya dan wajah mereka pucat.

Patient Aji : oh ... my chest is tight ... * cough *

Pasien Aji : aduh… dadaku sesak…. *terbatuk*

Pasient Aji : Doctor Verra... I can't breathe ... * coughing while holding his chest
and neck * Help me please Doct!

Pasient Aji : Dokter Vera… aku tidak bisa bernafas… *terbatuk sambil memegang
dada dan lehernya* Tolong aku dok

*Bruk*. Aji collapses before another one. They immediately collapsed

*Bruk*. Aji ambruk lebih dulu di susul yang lain.

Patients Danu : why?

Pasien Danu : mereka kenapa?

Doctor Vera : Sorry ...

Doctor Verra : Maaf


Patient Danu : eh?

Pasien Danu : eh?

Danu also took the same action, holding her neck and falling down, before she looked at the doctor then

looked to the side. After that she closed her eyes.

Danu juga melakukan tindakan yangsama, memegang lehernya lalu terjatuh, sebelumnya dia
menatap dokter itu lalu melihat ke sebelahnya. Setelah itu dia menutup matanya.

Doctor Vera : Sorry ... I'm sorry ... I was forced to do it ...

Dokter Vera : maaf… maafkan aku… aku terpaksa melakukannya…


Time skip
After killing all the patients, as promised they gathered again.

Sister Finadela : So, where is our salary?

Chief Pandu : ok, wait a minute

Pandu took something from the closet, and it turned out that what was taken was not an envelope

containing money but a gun. Then he immediately directed it to Nurse Finadela.

DOR

Doctor Vera : Why did you kill him?

Chief Pandu : that's my gift

Doctor Vera : liar, this is too far. This isn't like what you are talking about!

Pandu ignored what the doctor said and immediately shot her.

DOR

Chief Pandu : goodbye

Pandu dragged the two of them into an empty cupboard that had a hole in the middle and put it inside.

Not long after he heard the sound of a police car siren. After that the knock of the door appeared.

Chief Pandu : * opens the door * huh?

Police Sadam : We heard from the testimony of residents who were taking fruit in the forest, he
saw two girls who were burying their bodies near this mental hospital.

Chief Pandu : Really? I don't know anything about that

Police Sadam : can I go inside?

Chief Pandu : sorry here only I live alone, so there is no one in here.

Police Sadam : live alone? Isn't this a mental hospital? There should be patients and doctors
here right?

Chief Pandu : oh they have resigned a month ago, sir, the other patients have all gone home.
Moreover, this place will soon go bankrupt

Police Sadam : is that so? If so let me in, I want to make sure first
Silent for a long time, finally the guide let the police go in. The police had traveled around in a mental

hospital but he did not find any inconvenience or find someone there.

Chief Pandu : how about sir?

Police Sadam : here there is nobody, sorry to suspect you.

Chief Pandu : there is nothing, sir, maybe the people are mistaken. Besides, there are no
women here

Police Sadam : okay, then I go first

After the police left, the guide immediately went inside and took the gun back in the room

Chief Pandu : I'm sorry, dad, I can't continue anymore. Soon this place went bankrupt, me and
2 people were also suspected. I have no other choice.

Chief Pandu pointed his gun at his head and shot himself in the head.

THE END ...

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