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Final Draft Narrative Argument
Final Draft Narrative Argument
Veronica Molina
Storer
English 3H
26 November 2019
School has continually proven to be a big presence in my life each year. Every school
day, I wake up at 6:30 in the morning to prepare for school. At around 7:30 a.m., I leave to go to
school. Classes start at 8 a.m. and end at 2:30 p.m., consisting of four classes each day. Because I
am in my junior year of high school, I am taking many rigorous classes, such as advanced
placement (AP) and honors. My seven classes consist of Precalc Honors, Campus Ministry, AP
U.S History, English 3 honors, AP Computer Science, Piano, and lastly, Human Geography
(college level class). Five out of seven of my classes are weighted, which means that a letter
grade is added a numerical advantage when calculating grade point average. After a long day of
school, I usually get home around 3 p.m. Once I get home from school, I do not always start my
homework immediately. Before you make the conclusion that I do this because I am
procrastinating, my schedule consists of many other activities after school. To me it seems nearly
impossible to start homework right when I get home after waking up at 6:30 a.m. and after a six
plus hour school day. Like many other students, I am a student athlete. I have practice four times
a week at six-thirty p.m. to eight p.m., all the way in Mission Bay. I usually do not get home
Once I get home from practice, I eat dinner quickly then immediately begin doing my
Cornell notes, practice AP responses, annotating articles/stories, just to name a few. I cannot give
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an exact amount of hours I spend on homework each night, but I usually have three hours of
homework minimum. There are some nights where I feel like I won’t finish my homework on
time, and I begin to debate whether I should just miss school the next day to finish my
homework. I know that if I miss school the next day, I will just be more behind in my classes. I
won’t only need to learn the lessons from the class I missed, but I would also need to finish the
homework assigned for the day I missed. Thus, I sacrifice my sleep schedule, just so I can finish
Over the past decades, there has been a lot of controversy about whether homework is
truly beneficial for students. For many students, homework has proven to be harmful to their
mental health, as it adds a number of stress and anxiety (“Is Homework Beneficial?”). Schools
should reduce the amount of homework assigned each night to help improve a student’s mental
Students mental health have constantly been suffering, due to the amount of homework
assigned each night. Studies have showed that high school students that have five teachers can
have around 17.5 hours of homework per week (“Students Spend More Time on Homework but
Teachers Say It's Worth It.”). Many high school students schedules consists of six or more
classes. Based on the previous quote, many students can have around 17.5 or more hours of
homework each week, which will add more stress to the student. According to a study conducted
by Stanford University, “56 percent of students considered homework a primary source of stress”
(“Infographic: How Does Homework Actually Affect Students?”). In addition to adding stress
onto students, homework also affects their sleep schedule. For example, the National Sleep
Foundation tells of how students need around 9 and 9 ½ hours of sleep per night. However,
studies showed how only 15% of teens get eight and a half hours of sleep per night (“Sleep for
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Teenagers”). Students constantly sacrifice their own sleep schedule, just to complete all their
homework assigned. Thus, a student’s mental health is constantly deteriorating, due to the
numerous hours of homework they need to complete. Homework not only promotes less sleep
Homework constantly cries out for mental strength and time, that it gives teenagers little
to no time for social experiences. Many teenagers have to cancel plans due to homework.
According to the Science Leadership Academy at Philadelphia, “16 out of 19 of the students in
Fire Stream agreed that homework adds extra stress onto them or takes time away from other
things that they’re encouraged to do, such as sports, extra classes, extracurricular activities,
family time, etc” (Hood). The majority of this class at the Science Leadership Academy at
Philadelphia agrees that homework takes time away from hobbies and family. Many students
find it hard to make time for loved ones or sports, while still having to do an overwhelming
amount of homework. Thus, homework schools should reduce the amount of homework assigned
Some may say that many teenagers spend more time than is necessary on homework
because they are distracted by social media sites. Though students may at times get distracted
through the use of social media, many students overall find homework boring and wonder if
homework truly is beneficial. However, Shawna Bu Shell, professor at Rowan University, tells
how integrating social media in the classroom can prove to be beneficial. Bu Shell tells of how
her “research shows students are not distracted if homework is designed well.” She adds that, “If
a teacher is good at designing homework and willing to integrate social media, then students
won’t be sneaking, trying to use it” (Dunn). Bu Shell is not trying to constantly blame the
teachers for the distraction of students during homework time, but rather have the curriculum of
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school districts changed to make homework less boring and more engaging. With homework that
How can one help lower the amount of homework to help the mental stability of a
student? One can start by communicating with the school about the amount of homework
students receive or talk to teachers about concerns they may have. Additionally, schools should
fix their policies for homework immediately for the better of a student’s mental health. Though
there are currently no studies showing that communicating with the school and schools fixing
their homework policies to improve a student’s mental health have been done, change still needs
to start somewhere. In reality, a student’s mental health is more important than having them
Works Cited
Dunn, Phil, and N.J.) Courier-Post. “Students Say Social Media Interfere with Homework.” USA
www.usatoday.com/story/news/nation/2013/01/15/students-social-media-homework-
distraction/1835461/.
Hood, Julia. “Homework or Personal Lives?” Science Leadership Academy @ Center City,
scienceleadership.org/blog/homework_or_personal_lives.
“Infographic: How Does Homework Actually Affect Students?” Oxford Learning, 16 June 2017,
www.oxfordlearning.com/how-does-homework-affect-students/.
www.procon.org/headline.php?headlineID=005411.
sleep.
“Students Spend More Time on Homework but Teachers Say It's Worth It.” U.S. News & World
spend-more-time-on-homework-but-teachers-say-its-worth-it.