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Research Paper Reflection - Student Exemplar
Research Paper Reflection - Student Exemplar
automatically knew what I wanted to research about: underage drinking. My family was close
friends with another family when we first came to Charlotte and they had recently came as well.
We all went to the same schools and sort of grew up together. My family is big. There’s five if us
and our friends’ family it was four. I was closest to the daughter who was a year older than me.
The two older brother’s were close to my older sisters of course, and my younger brother was
close with the youngest boy who was also his age. Four years ago, my family was invited to our
friends’ daughter 15th birthday party. I remember my brother and I being in her court. The night
was a blast. As we all headed home, the oldest brother, who was 19 at the time, took more than
usual to get home. Minutes passed to hours. We all began to get worried. Fast forward the gory
details, he had driven home drunk and spun out on the freeway. He died almost instantly. None
of us saw him drink at the party. We all thought he was fine. But we were wrong. I saw how
much his death affected my friend’s family. I never want to see that happen again to anyone.
Which is why I chose my topic as underage drinking and why it shouldn’t be lowered to 18. I
wanted to educate my peers about the dangers of underage drinking and how it impacts their
I already kind of knew what alcohol can do to you when you drink at an early age, but the
research I was accumulating was surprising but yet upsetting to me. I had found out that 4,300
young adults die each year due to excessive underage drinking. This was as shocking and
upsetting as I was just in disbelief in how many teens die each year because they didn’t know
any better. Alcohol interferes with your decision making because your brain is still developing.
chose the top three: it increases alcohol related traffic accidents, it increases the chances of
young adults becoming alcoholics, and it cause harm to their developing brains. I picked these
because I feel like they were the most ‘popular’ as to why the legal drinking age is 21. In my
research paper, I feel like I could’ve stressed that importance more. I was more focused on the
facts and statistics that it just was that: a research paper. But I mean that’s what it was supposed
to be, and I am still very proud of it. It has facts, stats, and questions about alcohol and underage
drinking.
Overall, I do not regret sticking to this topic because I feel that I grew as a person
throughout writing it and got more hope for all teens and young adults to know better than to
drink underage.