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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising
Commented [AB2]: ‘be prone to something’ – this
and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
phrase is used with negative ideas:
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
likely to suffer from an illness or show a particular negative
characteristic:
I've always been prone to headaches.
When buying products, the human being’s choice is more prone to be affected
He was prone to depression even as a teenager.
She's prone to exaggerate, that's for sure.
by the advertisement. In my opinion, the real needs should be considered as a http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/pron
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priority.
Commented [AB3]: This needs to be more general sounding
– at the moment it is sounds unnatural.
information. Thirdly, we often decide to buy some certain brand of products just Commented [AB10]: ‘knows’ (the customer).
because the famous person we admire is their spokesman. Finally, the energy connected better to the topic sentence – ‘Advertising
...
Commented [AB12]: To connect this with the topic
sentence you could say –‘one final reason is
of the advertisement can be reflected in their cost. For example, an ...
Commented [AB13]: These two words have the same meaning
– use one.
advertisement in less than one minute can cost millions of dollars in “Super
Commented [AB14]: ‘a certain brand’; ‘certain
brands’.
Bowl”.
Commented [AB15]: ‘a’ – there are many. She is just
one.
everyone. Taking the PC and Mac computer for example, Mac is more suitable
for those who are engaged in designing or movie editing because of its
excellent display screen, while PC meets the engineers’ needs better as its
money.
Comments:
This is a 6.0. You use very good vocabulary and grammar but the topic sentences are
sometimes unclear and some of the vocabulary is not always relevant to the topic.