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CJ Moore

Mrs. Adams

November 16, 2012

Composition I

Drawn from the darkest depths of the universe lies a lonely planet destroyed from war

named The Makyo Star. Amongst two races, there were the Tigons and the Ligers. A ferocious

race built on conquering worlds far beyond eye sight. Their features are close to human like form

but fury all around and far more superior. They have black whiskers in their face. The Tigons

eyes have a center pupil and three red circles that rotate. The Ligers have yellow eyes with three

triangles connected at the top. They both have giant wings that they use to fly. Tigons also have

red fur and Ligers with yellow fur. Ruled by a group called the Oozaru's, a monstrosity that

resembles a gorilla down to the finest detail. So the Story begins.

A vicious war takes place on a planet in the farthest part of the North Galaxy called the

Makyo Star between two destructive forms of life. A year has passed since the war broke out

with the planet plunged into dismay. Suddenly a spacecraft lifts off and flies off into space,

seconds later, a heat seeker is initiated behind it and grazed the thruster and causes it to slow

down but still makes its escape. Two years later, the space craft crashes lands on the planet

called Earth. A young boy named Hero whose thirteenth birthday just passed and living deep in

the mountains with his grandfather. A courageous personality and fearless, and studying the arts

of martial arts and hidden leaf skills.

Boom! The region of mountains begins to shake vigorously.


Hero: Ahh, what's going on, we've never had an earthquake out here before.

Grandfather: .....

The birds and animals are running wild in chaos, while there is a huge cloud of smoke in

the air a few kilometers away.

Hero: Grandfather, I'm going to check out the area and see what's happening.

Grandfather: Hmm...

Jumping from tree top to tree top to the sides of the mountains. The skies are completely

empty and forests lifeless.

Hero: Man, what could have caused all of this?!

Hero arrives to the scene of what initiated the fear of the animals. He steps down from the

tree and walks toward the crater in the ground. A large spacecraft of an a circle with a claw as

the symbol. With bullet holes on the outside and a thruster destroyed.

Hero: I wonder where this ship came from. It looks pretty bad, as if somebody had an

encounter with some space pirates. I'll have a look inside to see if anybody's inside.

He walks down into the crater and sees the windows cracked and jumps through. The

inside of the ship is dark and smells like a type of blood foreign to humans. He then feels on the

walls to find the button to open the door. He finds one and pushes it with slow force and

prepared for whatever is going to take place. It open and light then flows through the ship. Hero

walks around and finds another door. This one is mildly damaged. He pushed the button next to
the door and it opens. Bodies all over the place, out of the seats, in corners and on the monitor

desk.

"Please..., help us," a voice says faintly and in distress.

"What?! Who said that," Hero said in fear.

"I will tell you all you want to know when we get better," the voice said painfully. "Your

world and ours are at stake."

Silently he thinks to himself that this could possibly be true and helping could be his only

option to help save the world.

After a whole day of moving them back into the cavern, they rested for an entire week

while his grandfather saw to their injuries and Hero conjured up water and firewood. As Hero

was on his way back he met with his grandfather outside of the cavern.

"Hey grandpa, what's up," Hero said in surprise.

"I'm glad to see that you're going out your way to take care of these foreign creatures but

can they really be trusted as much as they say a threat is upon us?" He asked.

"I'm not completely sure but if what he told me is true, we're gonna need them to help

protect the us and the earth," Hero explained.

Just as hero was about to walk into the cavern, the front door slowly opened. He slowly

stopped and braced himself for what was to come. The creature walked outside and looked

around. The grandfather gazed at the creature as if he didn't belong. It looked at Hero.
"I want to say thank you for taking my men and I into your home and nursed us back to

health. We are forever in your gratitude," he ended.

"Oh, you're welcome, we don't ever get your kind around here," Hero said in comfort.

"Who are you and what made your spaceship crash land on Earth," He asked.

Grandfather paid close attention to what jest of the conversation and its purpose was.

"My name is Leogun, leader of the Tigons. We come in peace with your world and its

inhabitants. We are from the planet called The Makyo Star in the Northern Galaxy.

Midway between speech, the rest of the creatures made their way out of the cavern and

line up alongside Leogun.

"Ahhh," Leogun continues, my fellow comrades have awakened.

Looking toward the other creatures, he calls them out.

"This is Raiku, leader of the Ligers, to his left are my two elite men Zex and Garlic and to

his right are his two elite men Dolph and Zynk," Leogun explained.

"Wow, I guess that's why you guys look like that, yellow fur and red fur, wings, tails and

claws. Don't forget the eyes like you guys are crucial," Hero said excitingly

"Hero," Raiku intervenes. "I'm sorry to spoil your mood but we can't get too comfortable

just yet. We were in a crucial battle with life forms beyond your comprehension on home world

called the Saiyans. Gorilla like creatures somewhat different to our characteristics. I fear that we

could possibly bring war to your planet. For all we know right now our planet may have been

consumed from all the fighting," he paused.


"Zex and Garlic check the ship and make whatever repairs you can in the mean time,

Dolph and Zynk, check the navigation on the ship and make sure we weren't tracked here.

"Yes sir," they went flew off.

" Wait hold on. You mean these 'Saiyans' could possibly bring your war to our planet?"

Hero asked.

Leogun answered, "Yes, there is a possibility, but that wasn't the intent of what was to

happen. By the word of the Tigons, we promise not to let any wrong doing come to your planet

or its inhabitants."

"Hmm, I will hold you to that but I want to help. My grandfather taught me martial arts

and to move in stealth. I may not know how to fly like you guys but I can jump from tree to tree

and mountain to mountain," Hero pleaded.

Grandfather stood silent and listened to the situation at hand and what the foreigners

where speaking of and how they would repay Hero, his grandfather and protect the earth.

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