The Blueray

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"Today is the day"

Kalu Kingsley
Sotire Pelumi

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SUMMARY

The Blueray is a story about Daniel Solarin who water caused him
the greatest tragedy of his life and also found strength in it.
His parent died in a flood when he was nine. He survived the
accident and was rescued by an old woman who sacrificed her
ability to control water in other to save his life. Through this,
the power was passed to him.
Daniel father was very wealthy, so he never really missed out on
the basics need of life. Mama( the old woman) was always there to
help him out whenever he needed comfort or emotional support and
he would constantly visit her in her hut along the beachside.
Daniel became a very strong and powerful man due to his wealth
and experience in MMA.
He runs his father's company, Bluecoast Maritimes along with his
assistant, Vivian and his driver Julius. Despite having the
powers, Daniel never figured out what to do with it.
Recently, the flood in the area has skyrocketed. Heavy Gridlock
is always the problem of the roads. Daniel has intentions of
interfaring but needs the approval of Don Maroni , a crime boss
who secretly runs the city underground and somehow has something
to do with the Heavy flood and poor drainage.
On a faithful day, an accident occured with a woman and her son
trapped in their car and are sinking into a canal. Daniel then
finally decides to take action. He contacts his secret engineer,
Christian in a base he created for special purposes. Christian
had built him a suit which would fit his personality and
superpower well.
He got to the scene and saved the woman and her child and
figured out how to clear away the flood and resolve some of the
drainage problem. He became the Blueray and the publics accepts
his deed except for Don maroni who then develops a personal
grudge against him.
Page 1 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
A wide slim panel of lagos coast. Ships and cars are seen on the
street.

Panel 2
A car is flowing down a heavily flowing water due to a rain flood.
Mr and Mrs folarin and Daniel(9 yrs) are in it yelling for help.
People are on the above bridge also screaming for help.

Panel 3
Mr Folarin is trying to kick the door open. His wife is trying to
get a hold of their son.

Panel 4
The car flows into the sea and starts to sink.

Panel 5
Daniel is pushed out as the car sinks completely.

Page 2 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
A hut is seen on the beachside. Palm tree covers the house and
forms a shade. Urban buildings are seen far behind some trees.

Panel 2
An old woman comes out with a bucket in her hands

Panel 3
She tries to hand a cloth on a hanger as she sees something far
away.

Panel 4
Little daniel is seen lying unconscious on the shore.
Panel 5
The old woman kneels and carry him in her hands.

Page 3 ­ 4 panels

Panel 1
She place him on a table in her hut. And pours water on him.

Panel 2
She rubs something on his forehead.

Panel 3
She removes the necklace around her neck and place it around the
boy's head.

Panel 4
The boy opens his eyes gasping out water.

Page4 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
Someone is knocking on what appears to be the old woman's door.

Panel 2
The old woman opens the door.

Panel 3
Daniel(16 yrs) gives a warm smile.

Panel 4
Daniel and the old woman are sitting on a big rock a little bit
far from the hut. (He asks a question about his purpose in life)

Panel 5
(Biggest panel) she place her hand on his shoulder as she gaze
into the distance (she give him an answer to his question).
Page 5 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
A view of an expensive house in an estate.

Panel 2
Daniel is staring through a window with a coffee mug in his hand.

Panel 3
An incoming skype call is seen on his computer.

Panel 4
Daniel clicks on the laptop keyboard.

Panel 5
Daniel is seated on his bed. Christian his seated on a chair with
computer screen behind him.

Page 6 ­ 4 panels

Panel 1
Daniel taking a sip of the coffee as he listen to Christian.

Panel 2
Christian leans to the computer to end the call.

Panel 3
Daniel drops his coffee mug on his table.

Panel 4
He opens his wardrobe snd picks a blue suit.
Page 7 ­ 4 panels

Panel 1
Daniel walks out of a glassy door.

Panel 2
He walks toward his car. Julius and Vivian are standing beside
the car waiting for him. (A much wider panel )

Panel 3
Vivian opens the door as she talks to him.

Panel 4
They drive out of the building

Page 8 ­ 3 panels

Panel 1
Vivian talking to Daniel at the back seat of the car

Panel 2
They both smile at each other with a snobby look on vivians face.

Panel 3
(This panel should take 70% of the page.)
The car is driving in the streets of lagos with exotic house and
cars around. Palm trees are aligned on the street sides.

Page 9 ­ 4 panels

Panel 1
Daniels car is between a huge gridlock. Trailers and huge trucks
all around, blocking the car.
Panel 2
Julius, Vivian and Daniel are talking. (They all fit into the
panel)

Panel 3
Daniel comes out of the car. Vivian is trying to make enquiries
of where he is going.

Panel 4
Daniel walks within people who are complaining about the flood.

Page 10 ­ 6 panels.

Panel 1
Daniel is under a bridge close to the seashore.

Panel 2
He looks around

Panel 3
He walks on the water for a few steps

Panel 4
He starts to enter the water. (The water opens up without
touching him at all)

Panel 5
He is enclosed in a form of bubble.

Panel 6
He moves in the bubble toward the opposite island where his
company is located.

Page 11 ­ 7 panels.

Panel 1
An elevator door opens and Daniel comes out
Panel 2
Daniel walks into a lobby with people walking around. The
receptionist greets him.

Panel 3
He approaches vivian.

Panel 4
She's surprised to see him come early.

Panel 5
They walks toward an office door.

Panel 6
Vivian is standing as if she wants to punch Daniel.

Panel 7
Daniel smiles as he enters the office.

Page 12 ­ 3 panels.

Panel 1
Daniel walks toward his chair raising his hand up ( In response
to everyone greetings)

Panel 2
A first man talks to him about their status (close up shot)

Panel 3
This panel will take 70 % of the page. It should be drawn in a
bird eye view.
Every one around the table including Vivian (standing near daniel)
is drawn.
Page 13 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
Daniel tells evryone to leave (close up shot)

Panel 2
Mr Festus walks toward Daniel as others walk out.

Panel 3
Daniel(still sitting) talks to Mr festus.

This panel needs to big enough.

Panel 4
Daniel gets up.

Panel 5
Daniel stares at the ocean through his a huge glass window as Mr
Festus walks out.

Page 14 ­ 7 panels.

Panel 1
Don maroni is siting on his chair with a huge smoke in his mouth.
A bucket witha champagne in it is on the table. He is calibrating
his gun.

Panel 2
Two guys (one is skinny and the other is muscular ) enter the
room with a document in one's hand.

Panel 3
Don Maroni replies to them in a less enthusiastic look.

Panel 4
The Skinny guy talks to the boss.

Panel 5
Don maroni tells him to come closer.

Panel 6
Don maroni gives him a slap

Panel 7
Don maroni holds his collar and explains how things run.

Page 15 ­ 5 panels

Panel 1
The heavy gridlock still stands. Cars, trucks and commercial
buses are all stuck in a huge flood. The flood level reaches the
height of car tires.

Panel 2
A woman in her suv is making a call in her car. Her son is at the
back seat.

Panel 3
Under the dirty water, the side of the road breaks off.( The view
should be underwater)

Panel 4
The suv falls into the canal in the middle of the road.

Panel 5
The woman starts to yell for help in the car as it begins to sink
and move closer to the middle.

Page 16 ­ 7 panels.

Panel 1
Daniel is in his office watching the news.

Panel 2
A news report about the accident in the flood comes up on the tv.
(Close up)
Panel 3
Daniel picks his phone and call Christian

Panel 4
He walks toward a fake chimney with a big round bulb instead of
fire.

Panel 5
Daniel push a brick beside the chimney.

Panel 6
A secret elevator open in the wall.

Panel 7
Daniel is in the elevator as the door closes.

Page 17 ­ 4 panels.

Panel 1
Daniel walks out of the elevator in his base.

Panel 2
Christian is on his chair pointing at something as Daniel walks
close.

Panel 3
Daniel stands in the front of the suit.(the suit is not shown)

Panel 4
We see the suit in its glory (on a mannequin)

Page 18 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
Two men are trowing ropes into the canal for the woman and her
son to get a grip on
Panel 2
One of them sees something afar.

Panel 3
Blueray diving in from the sky.

Panel 4
Blueray lands on a bridge

Panel 5
Two ladies admiring his body

Page 19 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
Blueray runs on the water toward the sinking car.

Panel 2
A boy in a commercial bus (danfo) sticks his head out looking in
amazed.

Panel 3
The car sinks completely.

Panel 4
Blueray dives into the water

Panel 5
He grabs the little boy.

Page 20 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
Blueray ray jumps out of the water with the boy.

Panel 2
He lands on a bus top and drops the boy.
Panel 3
The little cries to blueray to save his mother.

Panel 4
Blueray dives into the water

Panel 5
The mother is unconscious and stuck in the car.(underwater view)

Page 21 ­ 4 panels.

Panel 1
People in the street begins to stare.

Pan1el 2
Two couples watching the news are holding themselves in fear.

Panel 3
People in Daniels company lobby are watching.

Panel 4
The water surface seems empty.

Page 22 ­ 4 panels.

Panel 1
Blueray dives out of the water with the mother in his arm.

Panel 2
Everone on the road and bus celebrates

Panel 3
The two couples recoice too.

Panel 4
The people in the company lobby all celebrates.
Page 23 ­ 3 panels

Panel 1
Blueray drops the mother on the car and removes the water in her
body through her mouth.

Panel 2
The mother and son hugs blueray

Panel 3
The mother holds his hand and thanks him more.

Page 24 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
Blueray talks to Christian through the comms device on his suit.
(Blueray should be drawn putting two fingers beside his ears.

Panel 2
Christian is looking at a computer to give Blueray a response.

Panel 3
Blueray about to leap.

Panel 4
Blueray is seen diving toward a huge drainage hole.

Panel 5
He hovers over the water has he looks into the hole which is
heavily blocked with stones and debris.

Page 25 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
Blueray trys to control the water out with all his strength.

Panel 2
The water gush out with bricks and rocks coming out as well from
the pipe.

Panel 3
Christian in his base telling Blueray he did it.

Panel 4
Blueray wondering why there are so many rocks and debris in the
pipe.

Panel 5
Blueray realize who's behind it.

Page 26 ­ 4 panels.

Panel 1
Daniel walks out of the elevator in his lobby praising Blueray

Panel 2
Vivian walks toward him

Panel 3
She begins to cheer for blueray and saying his hot.

Panel 4
Daniel looks at her weirdly.

Page 27 ­ 5 panels.

Panel 1
A bat smashes on a glass cup on a table.

Panel 2
Don maroni is standing furious and holding a bat on his hand and
yelling about Blueray

Panel 3
A reporter on the tv is talking about Blueray as the mysterious
new superhero in the city.

Panel 4
The bat smash the tv screen.

Panel 5
Don maroni is swearing to get his revenge.(very close up shot)