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Writing Workshop 2 - 2020-1 PDF
Writing Workshop 2 - 2020-1 PDF
Below, you will find a full version of an essay. In class, you will also write your first full version: the Draft, based on your refined Outline.
Pay close attention to the structure of the essay and the language it is used.
Activity 1: Identify the 3 elements of each paragraph in the following essay sample. Use colors.
What would you do if the company you have worked for during years asked you to move abroad? Offshoring __________________
consists in relocating factories from costly developed countries to cheap developing economies. It is a trend
which started around the early 1970s with General Electric and other companies, and it has become a common __________________
practice that businesses are adopting these days. Nowadays, offshoring results in economy efficiency, on the one
hand, but also in environmental degradation, on the other hand. __________________
Firstly, there is an increase in economy efficiency as a result of the implementation offshoring by companies. __________________
Since the 70s, big enterprises have made adjustments to their headquarters locations, and this fact has allowed
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them to increase their production capacity more than twice, on average. For example, General Electronics (GI)
decided to focus on India, and in 2010 it invested around 130 million dollars in creating a developing center. __________________
Since then, the company has had a lot of profits and has increased its productivity considerably (Smith, 2017). In
sum, offshoring improves enterprises’ numbers worldwide.
However, substantial damage to the environment is also a consequence of offshoring. Companies have realized __________________
that it has been cheaper to make products abroad because manufacturers in those countries often cut costs by
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simply dumping their toxic chemicals. As a result, rivers such as the Buriganga in Bangladesh have been victims
of unregulated textile industries that work for H&M and other fast-fashion companies. The damage is irreparable. __________________
In brief, river pollution is a terrible effect of the relocation of some companies.
Overall, the relocation of businesses results in economic benefits but also in environmental pollution. Enterprises __________________
have taken advantage of low-cost manufacturing and production that different countries offer. In contrast,
cheaper production and manpower comes with excessive pollution due to the harmful chemicals dumped into __________________
seas and rivers. In conclusion, environmental authorities and governments should regulate fast fashion and other
manufacturing industries. If these organizations do not take strict control measures, the future generations will __________________
probably be condemned to water shortages, illnesses and lack of biodiversity.
References:
Smith, F. (2017, June 15). The Impact of Offshoring - survey results. The Bernett Group. Retrieved from https://bernett.com/blog/
Activity 2: Identify the components of the Thesis Statement in the previous introduction paragraph:
Topic:
Focus:
Effect 1:
Effect 2:
Activity 3: Make al list of the linking words that are used in the previous essay (there are 9): Firstly,_________________________
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Activity 4: Let’s think about the language of the essay. Extract the phrases:
Present continuous:
Simple past:
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*TIP: A closing sentence (body paragraphs 1 and 2) is similar to a topic sentence; use some synonyms and write it a bit different.
Activity 6 – Basics of citations and references: Citations and references are not mandatory. However, we recommend you support your
ideas with strong arguments. If you need to cite, here is a basic guide:
Activity 7 – Study the transition words and phrases in order to apply some to your paragraphs, in class.
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Write the INTRODUCTION (70-80 words), BODY PARAGRAPH 1 (80-90 words), BODY PARAGRAPH 2 (80-90 words) and CONCLUDING
PARAGRAPH (70-80 words) of you Cause / Effect Essay. Use your revised Outline and teacher comments.
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