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Effective Caugh
Effective Caugh
Goals :
Resources
1. Tools preparation
Handscoon
Masker
Pot sputum ( like a glass )
Tissue
Crock and platform
Warm water
Dishtowel
Nierbeken
2. Patient preparation
I. Orientation stage
Say hello and say the patient name
Starting the purpose and execution prosedur
Requesting patient approval
II. Stage of working
Wash hand
Wearing a handscoon
Maintain patient privacy
Preparing the patient
Put a dish towel over the patient shoulder
Place crock and platform close to the patient
Put nirbekenon the cracker ad the platform
Asking patient to place two hands over the abdomen
Teach patien to breathe deeply form their nose and then breathe trough their
mouth
Ask the patient to breathe 3 times and for the third one to hold up tp 3 second
and then cough violently
Offering a warm drink to the patient
Asked the patient if he could repeat a procedure or not
Pack the tools
Tidying up the patien
Wash hand
III. Stage termination
Conduct an action evaluation
Say good-bye to the pasien
Keep track of the activities in the patient medical record
Note:
1. Kata caugh seharusnya cough.
2. Seharusnya dijelaskan dulu pengertian singkat tentang effective coughnya sendiri.
Baru setelah itu Goals.
3. Gunakan kata-kata yang mudah dipahami orang awam, apabila itu memang bahasa
medis tulis dibawah 'note' atau semacamnya. Seperti: asphyxiation, nierbeken.
4. Kata masker seharusnya mask. Lalu bisa juga ditambahkan jumlah masing-masing
alat sesuai dengan kebutuhan.
5. '2. Patient preparation' sampai 'III. Stage termination' apakah itu termasuk
resources? Seharusnya sudah masuk ke procedure, mohon diperhatikan lagi.
6. Perhatikan juga penulisan kata, apakah typo masih dalam penulisan bahasa
Indonesia. Seperti: prosedur, nirbekenon, dan sebagainya.
7. 'Wash hand' seharusnya 'wash your hand' karena procedure text menggunakan
kalimat dengan sudut pandang orang kedua ataupun ketiga.
8. Perhatikan grammar, perlu diingat procedure text menggunakan simple present
tense. Seperti: wearing, asking, asked dan sebagainya.
9. 'Patient privacy' seharusnya 'patient's privacy' atau 'privacy of patient'.
10. Perhatikan pula tanda baca.
11. Terimakasih :)
Heru Iswanto
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