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Rhetorical Analysis Final Draft
Rhetorical Analysis Final Draft
Dr. Guenzel
ENC 1102
4/1/2020
For this response I'll be choosing a journal article by Thomas H. Murray called
"The Coercive Power of Drugs in Sports" published by The Hastings Center Report. The
Hastings Center, being a Bioethics Research Institute makes it the most credible source
Thomas H. Murray, being the president of this organization from the years 1999 to 2012,
is the most credible source at this level because of everything he must've seen and
experienced at this institute. Thomas H. Murray was also the director of the Center for
also earned the title of becoming the Susan E. Watson Professor of Bioethics. Murray has
Murray has been become the president of the Society of Health and Human Values, as
well as the president of the American Society of Bioethics and Humanities. Along with
Bioethics Advisory Committee and vice chair of Charity Navigator. This man might as
well be the most qualified person on the planet to write an article on bioethics with the
The main argument that Murray Provides isn’t very direct. Murray seems to give
a Ted-talk like approach, where he seems to explore all possible arguments made about
this certain topic. He doesn’t stick to any certain point of view, but a consistency in his
writing directs the reader to believe that he supports drug tested professional sports.
Murray titles one of the subheadings of his Free Choice Under Pressure, where he seems
to acknowledge that although the marketing of steroids and promise of fame and glory is
tempting, these athletes aren’t being forced to take these drugs. These athletes have free
will and blaming others for their use of drugs is irresponsible and childish. Although I
don’t specifically believe in this standpoint, I believe it has some merit. This article is
quite counter to my viewpoint, but Murray does a great job of not polarizing his research
to swing the reader to a certain side without first considering their own morals. He allows
for readers on either side to be able to analyze this piece of research and be able to make
an informed opinion unlike modern media sources. I’d say his overall point of writing
this article was to inform the reader on the use of steroids and other performance
enhancing drugs and how they have a coercive power in the world of professional
athletics.
I noticed that even though his accolades would make you think otherwise, Murray
often argues from an aristotilian point of view. He uses a lot of logos when first
introducing how athletes are marketed performance enhancing drugs. "Our images of a
nonmedical drug user normally include the heroin addict nodding in the doorway, the
spaced out marijuana smoker, and maybe, if we know that alcohol is a drug, the wino
sprawled on the curb. We probably do not think of the Olympic gold medalist, the
professional baseball player who is a shoo-in for the Hall of Fame, or the National
Football League lineman."(Murray 24) The use of logos is here is effective to introduce
the topic and soften the reader's sensitivity to the familiarity of top level athletes using
performing enhancing drugs. The use of ethos is all in his credibility which I listed above.
He uses pathos when he relates drug use to doctors and protecting the general public.
"Either they are being properly used by doctors to make sick people well or at least to
stem the ravages of illness and pain..."(Murray 24) This us of pathos helps shorten the
distance between the concepts performance enhancing drugs and drug prescriptions of
medical doctors.
For my research project, I decided this would be an appropriate source due to the
fact that It was written by possibly the most qualified person in the field of bioethics and
biomedical sciences. My research question, which considers how professional athletes are
marketed steroids, and how the pressure of other athletes in the same competitions using
these drugs effects the balance of the playing field. This article is well suited for my
research paper as it allows for me to be able to have insight on the first recorded uses of
anabolic steroids and how it's use has developed over the years. "Among international
athletes, the practice became very popular very rapidly. In 1973, Gold Medalist and four-
Senate Committee..." (Murray 25) Early evidence like this can help develop my research,
as in Connelly's testimony he states that it wasn't uncommon for athletes to carry their
own medical supplies for their steroids use, allowing me to further prove my point that
the pressure these athletes are under with the use of steroids all around them can affect
the caliber of the sport and the level these athletes are able to compete.
This article breaks down the ethical use of these androgens and how they affect
athletes, not only physically, but mentally. Murray goes into detail about the anabolic use
of these drugs, when he states that "The 1964 Olympics were probably the first in which
steroids were used. A group of steroids related to the masculinizing hormone testosterone
were synthesized. These steroids are valued for two principal effects, which they have in
Some unknown athletes must have reasoned that if anabolic steroids can rebuild damaged
muscles, why not use them to build additional normal muscle?"(Murray 24) He breaks
down his arguments into several subheadings, such as Drugs on the Playing Field, Why
Athletes Take Anabolic Steroids, An Unsightly Array of Risks, An Ethical Account, and
In the heading Drugs on the Playing Field Murray describes when athletes started
taking and anabolic steroids and what the early 60s looked Olympics looked like at
during that time. “The 1964 Olympics were probably the first in which steroids were
used… Some unknown athlete must have reasoned that if anabolic steroids can rebuild
damaged muscle, why not use them to build additional normal muscle.” (Murray 24)
Why Athletes Take Anabolic Steroids Thomas H. Murray describes why athletes take
steroids and how athletes began taking larger than regular doses of testosterone. “Many
possible disqualification, and even risk to their own health.” (Murray 25) He details how
the aggressive side effect of anabolics make athletes more prone to heavier training to
relieve that stress. In the heading An Unsightly Array of Risks, Murray shows how the
female East German swimmers started using steroids against doctors and Olympic
times greater than the therapeutic dose.” (Murray 25) An Ethical Account is something
that the author added to this article to demonstrate the ethical problems with taking
has given an answer of sorts by flatly prohibiting ‘doping’ of any kind. This stance
creates at least as many problems as it solves” (Murray 27) Free Choice Under Pressure
describes how steroids are marketed to players via how enticing they are to athletes that
want to make a name form themselves in the big professional sports organizations.
athletes are believed to have found something that gives them an edge, other athletes will
Concluding, I believe an important thing that the common individual can keep in
mind about all professional athletes is the immense pressure they are under when
preforming in front of the entire world. Understanding this shows why professional
athletes get into these habits. I also believe that an important take-away from this text is
that although free choice by athletes is granted, the overarching pressure of these drugs
leads to a dark and dangerous path to compete for title spots. Murray makes an analogy
that poses an important concept to think about when he states "If we had a drug that
steadied a surgeons hand's and improved her concentration so that surgical errors were
reduced at little or no personal risk, I would not fault it's use."(Murray 30) This analogy
holds weight because it likens a profession that others see as important to that of a
professional athletes career, that the athletes themselves see as a life-or-death scenario.
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