Name : Eneng Rosmiati

NPM : 20197479165

Class: 1B

Course : Academic Writing Assignment

Corrections by : Eneng Rosmiati

Mrs Effrina Yuricki

Step 1: Prewriting

Model Listing : Let’s take a look at my model listing of my writing

In this freewriting I would like to write a story of my life, actually it is about my Bad
Day. I do not know how to write for the first time but I try to do my best. There are so many
reasons I write of this story, inspired someone else.

Step 2 : Organizing

Time Order Signals

Words Phrases
First In the morning
When I woke up In the next day
Then
Next Finally

Step 3 : Writing

Model : Rough Draft

Holiday at Home

The last holiday, I chose to spend the time at home just because I wanted to have a lot
of time hanging out with family at home. The first day, I did some activities that I rarely do in
school days. I woke up at 5 o’clock, and I started these activities with prayers time(Subuh)
and continued with jogging in the morning. After that I took a bath, then play with my
children. Midday prayers time (Dzuhur) came so I must pray and then followed by lunch.
After midday prayers and lunch, I and my children gathered in the living room to watch TV
together while chatting.

The next day I tried to do my hobby which is cooking by homemade. That day I spent
almost entire day to cooking in the kitchen. I just took rest when prayer times and meal times
with the family came. But at night,I spent quality time with my family to watch some DVDs
together. In the following days, we spent the time by doing the same activities. We were very
happy even though we did not travel far away to spend a holiday. We enjoyed very much the
family togetherness in the last holiday

Polishing : Revising and Editing

Model

Revising

Model

Second Draft

Holiday at Home

The last holiday, I chose to spend the time at home just because I wanted to have a lot
of time hanging out with family at home. The first day, I did some activities that I rarely do in
school days. I woke up at 5 o’clock, and I started these activities with prayers time(Subuh)
and continued with jogging in the morning. After that I took a bath, then play with my
children. Midday prayers time (Dzuhur) came so I must pray and then followed by lunch.
After midday prayers and lunch, I and my children gathered in the living room to watch TV
together while chatting.

The next day I tried to do my hobby which is cooking by homemade. That day I spent
almost entire day to cooking in the kitchen. I just took rest when prayer times and meal times
with the family came. But at night,I spent quality time with my family to watch some DVDs
together. In the following days, we spent the time by doing the same activities. We were very
happy even though we did not travel far away to spend a holiday. We enjoyed very much the
family togetherness in the last holiday

Step 5 :

Model

Final Copy

Holiday at Home

The last holiday, I chose to spend the time at home just because I wanted to have a lot
of time hanging out with family at home. The first day, I did some activities that I rarely do in
school days. I woke up at 5 o’clock, and I started these activities with prayers time(Subuh)
and continued with jogging in the morning. After that I took a bath, then play with my
children. Midday prayers time (Dzuhur) came so I must pray and then followed by lunch.
After midday prayers and lunch, I and my children gathered in the living room to watch TV
together while chatting.

The next day I tried to do my hobby which is cooking by homemade. That day I spent
almost entire day to cooking in the kitchen. I just took rest when prayer times and meal times
with the family came. But at night,I spent quality time with my family to watch some DVDs
together. In the following days, we spent the time by doing the same activities. We were very
happy even though we did not travel far away to spend a holiday. We enjoyed very much the
family togetherness in the last holiday.