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Victoria Vaughn - Persuasive Paper Final Due Nov 26
Victoria Vaughn - Persuasive Paper Final Due Nov 26
Dallas Vaughn
Mr. Cummings-Peterson
English 10/Period 5
12 Nov. 2019
Davis Cripes was a healthy teenage boy, but when he got to art class, he collapsed on the
floor. By the time school ended, he was dead. Just 2 hours before, he downed an energy drink,
which caused a caffeine induced heart attack (Wootson). Unfortunately, this kid is not the only
one to have side effects from energy drinks. A survey done by Chapman University showed that
40 percent of teens, aged 13-19, reported a harmful side effects while drinking energy drinks
including abdominal pain, insomnia, difficulty breathing, headaches, seizures, and many more
(“Energy”). These side effects show that energy drinks do something harmful to the body. Even
though 40 percent is less than half of teens, it is the amount of teens that drink energy drinks that
make that number so threatening. In 2016, teens consumed 16.3 billion dollars worth of energy
drinks (Lohmann). This shows that there are many teens drinking energy drinks, and 40 percent
of those teens have some sort of side effect. Both pieces of evidence above show that energy
drinks are bad for the body, but they are bad for 3 three main reasons. Energy drinks are bad for
the body because it affects blood pressure, affects electrical signals, and damages the brain.
One of the ways energy drinks affect the body is by raising someone’s blood pressure. A
study composed of 34 volunteers drank either an energy drink or a placebo with an equal amount
of caffeine. The results found that both the placebo drink and the energy drink increased blood
pressure, but the energy drink had people’s blood pressure raised for six hours. In other words,
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energy drinks raise blood pressure more than a drink with equal caffeine. (“Energy Drinks
Linked”). This means that caffeine combined with other ingredients in energy drinks increases
blood pressure. And for those who are not as accustomed to caffeine, blood pressure can rise
even double (Klien). Or in other words, the effects of energy drinks are higher for those who just
began to drink energy drinks. To summarize, energy drinks raise blood pressure to a higher than
normal rate, and raises it even higher if someone is not used to the caffeine.
However, energy drinks can also affect the heart’s electrical activity. The same study
mentioned in the above paragraph tested the heart’s electrical activity too. The results showed
that for those who drank the energy drink, their heart’s electrical activity was faster than those
who drank the placebo. This can result in arrhythmia, or irregular beating in the heart (“Energy
Drinks”). These effects are life threatening, and will cause serious damage to the heart. An
example of such damage if from a 17 year old male. His artery muscles tightened, which
restricted blood flow to his body and heart. This resulted in a STEMI, or a heart attack in one of
the arteries (Higgins). This is only one of the few examples with cardiovascular problems from
energy drinks. So in short, energy drinks can affect the way the heart beats which can cause
One of the final ways energy drinks damage the body is through the brain. According to
Dr. Reto Huber, a sleep expert at the University of Zurich, caffeine impacts the brain during
development by disrupting the formation of connections and synapses (Krans). In other words,
caffeine affects the developing brain by preventing signals to be sent throughout the brain.
However, developmental issues are not the only neurological effect of energy drinks. Seizures
are the most common neurological effect, but aggression, suicidal thoughts, and psychotic
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agitation are also present. This could be because ingredients like caffeine and taurine are known
psychoactive agents (“Effects”). These combined side effects can be harmful, and lead to risky
behavior. In short, energy drinks damage the brain by disrupting development, and by causing
However, coffee has more caffeine than energy drinks do. A typical cup of coffee has
around 330 mg of caffeine, while energy drinks only have around 160 mg (“Get”). This should
mean that energy drinks are even less of a threat than coffee is. However, there are a few reasons
why this is irrelevant. First of all, coffee has years of research to make sure it is safe to consume,
while energy drinks have very little research behind them. Also, energy drinks have more
ingredients that can cause different effects together. Lastly, coffee is normally sipped, while
With all of these factors in mind, caffeine is not the source of danger, but all of the
ingredients in energy combined are. Therefore, although energy drinks have less caffeine than
Davis Cripes downed an energy drink, which caused a caffeine induced heart attack
(Wootson). Unfortunately, many more have been victim to this fate as well. One of the ways
energy drinks affect the body is by raising someone’s blood pressure. However, energy drinks
can also affect the heart’s electrical activity. One of the final ways energy drinks damage the
body is through the brain. Energy drinks are on the rise in popularity, and people often drink
them without realizing the side effects they cause. This needs to change. Energy drinks cause
harm to the body in multiple ways without people realizing. People need to know how harmful
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energy drinks actually are. Overall, energy drinks are unsafe to drink because of the effects it has
on the body.
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